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Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 2
Poor Edward. This is an interesting story line. Finally, Edward has a reason to be emo and agnsty. I can understand his mood better.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: carbella02 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 25
Wao! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: It's posted for validation and should be up soon. :)
Reviewer: ele05gs (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 19
OMG!!! I have tears on my eyes now...
Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 25
ooooo you evil cliffy giver! lol
Author's Response: *lol* That's me.
Reviewer: ele05gs (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 18
He called her MY Bella!!!!!!!!! this is probably the shortest review ever.. lol
Just as always great chapter!
Author's Response: A short review is so much better than no review. *lol* Thank you!
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 25
Foreshadowing. Whatever it was, it can't be good.
Author's Response: Probably not... ;)
Reviewer: LDB (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 25
In regards to your comment about length of chapters...good for you for standing firm. I agree with you on not putting more stuff in just to make it longer. You have to keep in mind flow and continuity, and so many other factors. I think you're doing just fine! And if people want to read more, maybe they can save up a couple chapters to read at the same time, lol.
Thanks so much for the update! I really enjoy this story!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you very much! And I'm so happy you like it.
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 24
That's brave of Edward to invite Bella.
Author's Response: Really brave, yes.
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 25
Oh....man evil cliffie! God, what could it be?
Author's Response: Who knows? Well, I do. *lol*
Reviewer: jajo (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 25
Quite a cliffhanger. I can't wait to see what the big secret is.... Congrats on the German version.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 23
Wow! Edward is in a deep abyss that was his soul. But really, he was pleading for help, he just didn't know how to.
Reviewer: ele05gs (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 16
OMG!! It's sad to see how everyone, even Alice, just knows that there's nothing they can do, they just gave up. But I loved how Bella wouldn't.
I also loved how she stood up in the Mike situation. I'm loving your Bella.
Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 25
What a way to end the chapter! What is the news? I want to know! Anyway, great chapter and I will be waiting for th enext chapter!
Author's Response: It'll be up soon. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 25
Sooooooo cuuuuute like always! And I hgope that nothing completly life shifting is about to happen for Edward!
update soon!
Author's Response: Absolutely. ;) Thank you!
Reviewer: ele05gs (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 12
OMG!!! I loved it!!
And here --> “It hurts when you’re not around.”it was like wow... Bella was so... bold. lol I liked it.
And thanks god, or thanks to you -:)- he accepted her invitation!!! :D
Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked that part. Thank you! :)
Reviewer: StoryPainter (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 25
What?? That is so not cool :-P
I completely understand what you mean about the length of the chapters. When it ends, it ends. Hopefully, you won't get bugged about it anymore.
Thanks for another brillant chapter. I will just sit here on my hands waiting for the next one...
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. :)
Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 25
Oh no....what now????? It obviously can't be any good.... I can't wait!! xx
Author's Response: You won't have to wait very long. :) Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: mrsckugs (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 25
ARGH! FABULOUS!
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks! :)
Reviewer: ele05gs (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 8
I'm so glad they had this converation and I'm so beyond happy they are getting, if I can call it that way, close to each other. :D
Author's Response: Glad you liked! :)
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 25
oh man shit what happen can't wait for another update thanks good chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: mrsckugs (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 6
I want to make cookies right now! LOL
Author's Response: *lol* I felt the same way when I wrote the chapter.
Reviewer: Brumbear (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 25
Oh, what could it be? Maybe a new therapist? Or Carlisle wanting to give the sex talk? :D Or perhaps James out of prison (assuming he was in there)? Or worst case, they have to move?
I love your story and can't wait for you to update!
Author's Response: I'm glad you love my story, thank you!
Reviewer: ele05gs (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 6
Hello there!! :)
I found this fic thanks to KStew411 because she recomended it on twitter.
I must admit I really like it, and that's the main reason why I haven't commented before, as you might guess I got caught up with the story... But I apologize for not commenting as I know how much a review means to a writer, being one myself.
I most definitely don't hate you for letting Edward help Bella make cookies, I all but love you for that.
The last few chapters have been great despite the bit of angst and self-hatred on Edward's part, which without doubts completes the fic.
I think this is getting long enough so to finish I was wondering if you have it posted on fanfiction.net as well. Honestly I'm not really found of Twilighted, but I still use it.
Anyway, I'm gonna keep reading and I'll comment as often as I can, considering my eagerness to see the next chapter.
<3 ~E.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you like my story, thank you very much for taking time to review. :) And yes, I'm also posting at ff.net.
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 15
Oh shit!! Such a prick that Mike Newton is!
Author's Response: He really is.
Reviewer: mforrest28 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 25
OOOH! Cliffhanger!!! I love Bella and Edward, they are so cute, please don't crush their little hearts!!
Author's Response: I'll try not to. :) Thanks for the review!
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