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Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 9

Again cute.  I'm sure Esme and Carlisle are cheesing so hard.  Em is gonna have a field day with this. Why did she have to go home?

Reviewer: lexy lujan (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 25

dammit!cliffhangers suck.

Author's Response: Not when you're the one writing them. *lol*

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 8

They are cute.  I bet Carlise found it very interesting to find the two of them there.  I would be interested in a look into his mind at what found.

Author's Response: I'm glad you think they are cute.

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 7

Okay just a wee over the top, but I get that he's a good boy that doesn't want to think of the horrors happening to a sweet girl too.  I'm not sure that Phil broke her the way that Edward has been.  I think it's innocent.  Am I right?  I believe the headaches have to due with stress from Renee's death, suicide maybe.

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 6

Who roams around other people's homes at night looking for something to read?  Yeah I wanted them to make cookies, but I realize it was probably too much too soon.

Author's Response: Well, I wouldn't, that's for sure. *lol* Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 5

Will he help.  Gotta find out.  Oh!  I like my Dr. Dreamy Cullen compasionate and patient.

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 4

Okay, so what is the "it" that happened to Bella?  Have the BOTH of them seriously been abused. 

Author's Response: Keep reading and you'll find out. :)

Reviewer: ele05gs (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 22

Squeee for Bella and taking him for lunch with her!! I also wanted to say that, even if it sounds odd I loved Edward's possesiveness over her in the last chapter.

Great chapter...

I have finally found the story on so from now on I'm following it from there... :)

I'll be seeing ya...

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, and I'll see you att ff. :)

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 2

Poor Edward.  This is an interesting story line.  Finally, Edward has a reason to be emo and agnsty.  I can understand his mood better. 

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: carbella02 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 25

Wao! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: It's posted for validation and should be up soon. :)

Reviewer: ele05gs (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 19

OMG!!! I have tears on my eyes now...

Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 25

ooooo you evil cliffy giver! lol

Author's Response: *lol* That's me.

Reviewer: ele05gs (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 18

He called her MY Bella!!!!!!!!! this is probably the shortest review ever.. lol

Just as always great chapter!

Author's Response: A short review is so much better than no review. *lol* Thank you!

Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 25

Foreshadowing.  Whatever it was, it can't be good.

Author's Response: Probably not... ;)

Reviewer: LDB (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 25

In regards to your comment about length of chapters...good for you for standing firm. I agree with you on not putting more stuff in just to make it longer. You have to keep in mind flow and continuity, and so many other factors. I think you're doing just fine! And if people want to read more, maybe they can save up a couple chapters to read at the same time, lol.

Thanks so much for the update! I really enjoy this story!



Author's Response: Aw, thank you very much! And I'm so happy you like it.

Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 24

That's brave of Edward to invite Bella.

Author's Response: Really brave, yes.

Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 25 evil cliffie!  God, what could it be?

Author's Response: Who knows? Well, I do. *lol*

Reviewer: jajo (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 25

Quite a cliffhanger.  I can't wait to see what the big secret is.... Congrats on the German version. 

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 23

Wow!  Edward is in a deep abyss that was his soul.  But really, he was pleading for help, he just didn't know how to.

Reviewer: ele05gs (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 16

OMG!! It's sad to see how everyone, even Alice, just knows that there's nothing they can do, they just gave up. But I loved how Bella wouldn't.

I also loved how she stood up in the Mike situation. I'm loving your Bella.

Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 25

What a way to end the chapter!  What is the news?  I want to know!  Anyway, great chapter and I will be waiting for th enext chapter!

Author's Response: It'll be up soon. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 25

Sooooooo cuuuuute like always! And I hgope that nothing completly life shifting is about to happen for Edward!

update soon!

Author's Response: Absolutely. ;) Thank you!

Reviewer: ele05gs (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 12

OMG!!! I loved it!!

And here --> “It hurts when you’re not around.”it was like wow... Bella was so... bold. lol I liked it.

And thanks god, or thanks to you -:)- he accepted her invitation!!! :D

Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked that part. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: StoryPainter (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 25

What?? That is so not cool :-P

I completely understand what you mean about the length of the chapters. When it ends, it ends. Hopefully, you won't get bugged about it anymore.

Thanks for another brillant chapter. I will just sit here on my hands waiting for the next one...

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. :)

Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 25

Oh no....what now????? It obviously can't be any good.... I can't wait!! xx

Author's Response: You won't have to wait very long. :) Thanks for reviewing.

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