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Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 23
don't stop bella
Reviewer: taravivian (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 25
Another great chapter! Oh...the length was perfect, longer does not mean better. Sometimes longer is just a decent story with a bunch of crap in the middle that is unnecessary. I dont know about anyone else, but Im too ADD to read a bunch of filler...I start spacing out and thinking of my grocery list instead of the plot..Thanks for sharing your story with us!
Author's Response: *lol* You're welcome. And thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 22
Love Emmett in all his protectiveness.
Author's Response: Emmett is just so lovable, isn't he? :)
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 25
What a cliffhanger. Can't wait for the update. I can't imagine what Carlisle is going to say.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Sandra (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 25
Argh....cliffhangers. I do not like them. At all. They make me so extra-antsy for updates. And I'm already always antsy for updates for this story, cause it's so good. Edward's past is such a heavy topic, but you handle it so well with the way you write.
As for the updates/longer updates debate: It's your story, you need to go with your flow. When a story is as good as yours, people are always gonna want more, no matter how long the chapters are. Besides, you update super fast (I'm amazed how you do it), so two chapters of your story a week is like one long chapter anyway.
Just keep on doing your thing :)
Author's Response: I will. And thank you so much for your kind words. :)
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 20
Stop being so mean to Em. He's so easy to love, but I get that Edward respects him...I think. He listened to him anyway. I hope he hasn't planted any doubt that will make Edward any skitish than he already is about Bella, and protecting her from school gossip for her own good.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 19
Promise. Yep. He'll have to pry her off with a crowbar.
Reviewer: louisianagirl900 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 25
So... good... I love this story
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 18
Damn, she is fucking persistant...to a fault.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 17
He gotta Bella cutting class. Is that the problem? Or does he have a suspension for Mike's stupidity? Can Edward catch a freakin break? He deserves one.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 16
The meadow. Bella better stop being so hard on my EmmieBear
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 15
Save Edward Bella. Punch Mike yourself. Jeez is everyone at FHS buttholes?
Reviewer: loyalluv (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 25
Another great chapter! This story makes my day everytime it's updated, so thanks so much. I wonder what Carlisle has to say...
Author's Response: Thank you, and you'll find out soon.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 14
Oh so natural. How will things be at school.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 12
Here's to okays ; ).
Author's Response: Okay is good. :)
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 11
Poor Baby. What is Sue up to with that move?
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 10
Nosy girl. So pushy too. Dang, she's know him like 7 days and she all let's be bffs. Chilax Bella.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 9
Again cute. I'm sure Esme and Carlisle are cheesing so hard. Em is gonna have a field day with this. Why did she have to go home?
Reviewer: lexy lujan (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 25
dammit!cliffhangers suck.
Author's Response: Not when you're the one writing them. *lol*
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 8
They are cute. I bet Carlise found it very interesting to find the two of them there. I would be interested in a look into his mind at what found.
Author's Response: I'm glad you think they are cute.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 7
Okay just a wee over the top, but I get that he's a good boy that doesn't want to think of the horrors happening to a sweet girl too. I'm not sure that Phil broke her the way that Edward has been. I think it's innocent. Am I right? I believe the headaches have to due with stress from Renee's death, suicide maybe.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 6
Who roams around other people's homes at night looking for something to read? Yeah I wanted them to make cookies, but I realize it was probably too much too soon.
Author's Response: Well, I wouldn't, that's for sure. *lol* Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 5
Will he help. Gotta find out. Oh! I like my Dr. Dreamy Cullen compasionate and patient.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 4
Okay, so what is the "it" that happened to Bella? Have the BOTH of them seriously been abused.
Author's Response: Keep reading and you'll find out. :)
Reviewer: ele05gs (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 22
Squeee for Bella and taking him for lunch with her!! I also wanted to say that, even if it sounds odd I loved Edward's possesiveness over her in the last chapter.
Great chapter...
I have finally found the story on fanfictio.net so from now on I'm following it from there... :)
I'll be seeing ya...
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, and I'll see you att ff. :)
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