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Reviewer: ghartling (Signed)
March 12, 2010 07:18 PM · On:
I have been dying for an update!! Thank you so much!!
Now..you left me hangin!!!
Poor Edward...I cannot imagine!!!!
Author's Response: More coming soon, I promise. :) Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: catmasters (Signed)
March 12, 2010 06:59 PM · On:
Oh Edward!!!! you need a hug sooooo badly!!!!
Author's Response: He really does. Hopefully he'll get one eventually...
Reviewer: Mily06 (Signed)
March 11, 2010 02:12 PM · On:
uh oh..... i have a feeling that it has to do with james!! yay for edward and bella finally getting closer!!! cant wait to read next chapter, u are awesome!!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :)
Reviewer: lissy82 (Signed)
March 11, 2010 07:51 AM · On:
I find your story very original. I like how you describe flashbacks, there not too revealing but enough to imagine the horror. However, dont get me wrong i can handle the gruesome details but you give wonder and sympathy for Edward. My biggest peev is similar dialogue to the book and movie. I know this is a Twiiight theme story, duh, its posted on Twilighted, but i been reading a lot of fics and when authors use same dialogue, i kinda feel cheated. You have a good original plot , its nice to have original story to go along with it. Besides anything not related to twilight subtext is awesome writing and there is when you suck me into your story. But anyway i will still be reading since i cant help but care about the character created and want nothing but the best for him. And hey, its quality in chapters that counts not quantity.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, although I'm sorry to hear my usage of a few lines from the books makes you feel cheated. Can't promise it won't happen again. Anyway, thanks for leaving a review.
Reviewer: deya (Signed)
March 10, 2010 05:45 AM · On:
I need a update :)
Author's Response: The next chapter is posted for validation. :) I hope it'll be up soon.
Reviewer: 23mattie (Signed)
March 07, 2010 01:40 PM · On:
I just found your story and am really enjoying it- looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you! There will be another chapter up soon.
Reviewer: Tinkerbell Blake (Signed)
March 07, 2010 12:49 PM · On:
I have loved this story and find it great that Edward is still not telling Bella his problems but that he is struggling with his feelings. I can't wait to find out what Carlisle has to tell Edward talk about leaving us on a cliff hanger. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please keep going.
Author's Response: More coming soon. Thank you so much for reading and leaving a review!
Reviewer: Kairi J (Signed)
March 07, 2010 10:29 AM · On:
yeah, so i'm reading the story again. :)
Author's Response: Yay! *lol* Thanks for reviewing again. :)
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed)
March 07, 2010 08:58 AM · On:
I just read through your story and am fucking in love with you. This is such a gut wrenchingly honest story. I am so glad you are writing it. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Aw, I'm so glad to hear you like my story, thank you very much!
Reviewer: Mily06 (Signed)
March 07, 2010 12:36 AM · On:
it was disturbing reading when edward used to get beat up and molested by james....it seems very interesting tho. im def gonna keep reading!! cant wait to find out how its gonna turn out!
Author's Response: I'm glad you want to give my story a chance. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed)
March 06, 2010 07:48 PM · On:
WHAT?! YOU LEFT IT THERE? NO!
Author's Response: Yes, I did. *lol* More soon, though.
Reviewer: teamtwi (Signed)
March 06, 2010 01:52 PM · On:
UGH!!!! this story is so good, that I just started reading it yesterday, and now I am hanging on waiting fomore to come! Please tell me that you are planning on posting more real soon??!!!!!!???!!!!!!
Author's Response: Of course, the next chapter is already posted for validation. I'm really glad you like it so far, and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Madonna (Signed)
March 06, 2010 11:42 AM · On:
Nooo! Don't do this to me, its getting soo good!!
Author's Response: Sorry, but there will be more asap. :)
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed)
March 06, 2010 09:19 AM · On:
great story it is really moving and it touches my heart .
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed)
March 06, 2010 08:26 AM · On:
Oh my fucking god, I am so nervous about what Carlisle and Esme could possibly have to say to Edward. I worry that it's about his abuser and it'll topple him right over the edge back into the dark place he was. Is it even possible for Bella to save him if that happens?
Author's Response: Yeah, that would be really bad. Let's hope it won't come to that. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Janes Red Eyes (Signed)
March 06, 2010 08:07 AM · On:
Don't make us wait long! Please!
Author's Response: I won't. Promise. :)
Reviewer: Kairi J (Signed)
March 05, 2010 11:33 AM · On:
Oh no! I can't take the suspense.
And about your note at the beginning, I understand completely where you are coming from with the not wanting to make your chapters longer. They're at a consistent pace and anything extra would just throw off the balance of the plot, not to mention you update frequently enough to satiate the reader! Not that I would mind longer chapters, but I agree with you, nonetheless. Thanks for the new chapter!
Author's Response: You're welcome. And I'm so happy you like the chapters the way they are. Thank you!
Reviewer: Fesh (Signed)
March 05, 2010 07:41 AM · On:
Oooo a cliffhanger! So exciting! I have a feeling it won't be a good thing though which is unfortunate :(. Really enjoyed this chapter - I loved the cute little 'I like yous'' + even though he doesn't say much I totally love Jasper here! I hope one day Bella + Edward do hang out with Jasper n Alice outside school. Would b nice to see him improving his relationship with others because of Bella. Obv won't happen for a fee chapts yet if it does me thinks. Anyway was a really gr8 chapter + I can't wait for the next 1.
Hopefully my iPhone won't double post this review like last time!!!
P.S I don't think your chapters are to short. They're a good length for this story. Leave you wanting more without being frustrated! :)
Author's Response: I'm really happy you liked the chapter. I love writing Jasper. :) Thank you very much for the review!
Reviewer: Nicole1485 (Signed)
March 05, 2010 05:19 AM · On:
Ah, the 'Look back', universal sign for being interested. I know you've written plenty more chapters that I haven't read yet, but I've only just stumbled upon your story through a rec on Twitter, and I'm glad I did.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, I'm so glad you found my story and that you're enjoying it so far.
Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed)
March 05, 2010 02:51 AM · On:
ach! you giant tease...cutting it off there...sad face. i love their awkward beginning of relationship behavior, even though their relationship clearly has other layers added to it...it still makes me think of how i used to be, wondering if someone liked me and if it was going to be awkward. sigh. i just love it :) and i can't wait for more, per usual.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: francy_princess (Signed)
March 05, 2010 02:12 AM · On:
cant wait 4 tha next chapter!!!!
Author's Response: It should be up real soon.
Reviewer: AlexaET (Signed)
March 05, 2010 01:16 AM · On:
Upssss sorry I did ask once or twice for longer chapters :S But just understand is because I love ur story sooo much!!! But at the end of the day this is your story, so do what u feel like it! :D! And it doesn't matter if u write one sentence I will read it hahahahahaha......
Anyways.....love the chapter! And as always you left me wanting more and waiting anxiously for the next chapter....and of course what can I say? I love Edward's POV.....my favourite!
Today I read it first on FanFic so I left my other review there....
Cool ur story is being translated! I speak spanish, actually that's my first language so if u need some help in that field, just let me know :D!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing at both sites! And you don't have to apologize at all, you've never been rude in your reviews. :)
Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed)
March 05, 2010 12:01 AM · On:
Oh no, you just can't leave us hanging like that. Is James back? Maybe released from prison or fighting for custody or something like that?
I really liked the dinner scene. I'm sure it was crystal clear to everyone (but B&E), what their mannerisms at the table meant
Author's Response: So happy you liked. Thanks!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed)
March 04, 2010 11:16 PM · On:
Why he gotta ruin his first "date"? Jeez couldn't it wait until morning. I'm still interested to see Esme and Carlisle point of view of Edward and Bella. What is "it"? Is James out of jail? I guess we would be so fortunate as to have him get "shanked" in the "big house"?
Author's Response: You'll find out more soon. Thank you for all your reviews!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed)
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March 04, 2010 11:05 PM · On:
I'll also shrug at Charlie shaking his hand or spooking him in some way.
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