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Reviewer: missielynn (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 28
yay they're getting closer. i can't tell you how how in love with this story i am. as for a/n i happen to lke it when i find a line or two from the book woven in a story it's tike finding a little treasure.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Longing for Edward (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 28
Small steps that are really, for Edward, great strides. Bella exceeded my expectations.
Another moving chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: TammyDevil666 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 28
Aww, like I expected he didn't tell the whole truth, but it's a start, and hopefully he'll trust her enough to tell her more later. I'm glad he's finally starting to think about the fact that it wasn't his fault. I hope she keeps putting that idea in his head. Great chapter=)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)
Reviewer: AngieNCarter (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 2
Well, they have officially introduced themselves. Good! I shall continue......
Reviewer: AngieNCarter (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hmmm, very interesting! Sad Prologue, poor little boy Edward, I can see why he's turned out like he has. I'm curious to see how this story progresses. Must read on....
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 28
I've said it before, and I'll say it again - I really like this story. The interaction between Edward and Bella is so sweet and tender, and I love the fact that he's opening up to her.
As for your using quotes from the books: I don't mind, I just think it's fun when I recognize them.
Patiently waiting for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! And you won't have to wait very long for the next update. :)
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 28
Hard as it is I think it is good for him to be talking to Bella - she thinks so much of him and doesn't judge him for someone elses actions at all.
Achilles
Author's Response: Hopefully he's starting to see that as well. Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 28
awww i love this soooooooo much you are superbrilmagnifitasticazing yea all that and more :D him opening up and then actually talking things out im glad he stopped himself from being a huge dick to her and i love that she is soo understanding you are just incredible i love you :D i truly cant wait for more haha poor alice two against one haha
Author's Response: Thank you! *lol* I'll update again real soon.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 28
I just love how Bella is able to word something and can get through to Edward. It is a good and bad thing that he is starting to think differently about his past. He is so used to thinking one way - another way will bring up so many emotions for him. I hope that they can handle it!
Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: More coming soon, and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: cherrikiss396 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 28
The moments between them are so tender in this chapter. It was beautiful
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: smartasssbich (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 28
Awww, Bella's so good for him. For some reason, whenever I start reading a fic, I start out not wanting to like Bella...until this one. I just can't tell you enough how much I love this story.
(I also like it when you can use quotes from the book...when they fit well into the story without being forced)
Author's Response: Well, I never uses quotes from the story deliberately, the lines just fit sometimes. :) I'm happy you love the story, thank you!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 28
YAY!!!!!! *clapping* this was great! He opened up he let her stay & she helped him! Yay!!!
More more more!! :-)
Wow a first kiss between these two is gonna be a HUGE deal, huh??
Author's Response: Most likely, yeah. :) Thank you, more coming asap!
Reviewer: TheFutureMrsPattinson (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 28
LOVE the chapter! Cutest ending ever...=)
Right now I am pretty sure this is my favourite story out of all the 150 stories I'm following =p
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much, that's a huge compliment! :)
Reviewer: lovesam66 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 28
That was sooo good. You know I feel that I always repeat myself In giving reviews but your writing is nothing but amazing so I don't k ow what else to say. Thank you for writing this:))
Author's Response: You're welcome, and thank you for reading! I have to admit, I feel like I'm repeating myself most of the times when I'm responding to reviews. :)
Reviewer: RaeCullen (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 28
Progress! YAY! Ugh. My heart breaks for him. I'm so excited Bella is starting to get through to him and effect him. She's so good for him. I think your Bella has become my favorite Bella in all of the fics I read. She's so good to him. Sigh. I love this Edward so much. He's so broken, but there is still hope for him.
YAY great chapter, bb!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like my Bella. :) Thank you!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 28
My poor baby. I hope James doesn't wake from that coma. I think it will be hard for Edward to tell Bella everything. He should go back to therapy.
Author's Response: He really should. But right now, he's not ready for it. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: MJ Mason-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 28
oh so sweet thank u now fix them soon:):)
Author's Response: Eventually... ;) And thank you!
Reviewer: lauras1sttime (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 28
THIS WAS SO FUCKING GOOD!!!!! Nilla you're awesome. I don't mind lines from the book at all so keep on doing it your way : )
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! And I will. :)
Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 28
BRILLIANT! I loved this chapter. I know that Edward has a long long way to go yet, but I'm thrilled that he opened up a bit to Bella...and props to her for taking it in stride and gently helping him. I can NOT wait for the next chapter :) Thank you for sharing your story with us
Author's Response: Thank you so much for leaving a review! It means a lot to me to hear that you enjoy my story so much.
Reviewer: pattsylove (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 28
I literally jumped when I saw that you updated. This is an amazing story, so original and you should be very proud of yourself. My heart goes out to Edward and all the pain he's had to endure. And Bella, God bless the girl for not giving up on him. Can't wait for more! Thanks for sharing with all of us your talent!
Author's Response: You're welcome, and thank you so much for your review!
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 28
wow....great chapter...
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you think so.
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 28
I really really like this story.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 28
thanks good chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: mitihifi (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 28
*sigh......happy friday to me :) amazing amazing update! i love how she was able to get edward to open up. im so glad he told her at least part of the truth. i wouldnt expect him to tell her about the sexual abuse. i just hope bella can help him through the idea that he deserved abuse in any form. i look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'll update again soon, possibly tomorrow. :)
Reviewer: fsugirlga (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 28
I am so happy he is starting to open up! Love these guys conversations:)
Author's Response: Yay, I'm so glad to hear that. Thank you!
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