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Reviewer: gabys (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 29
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 29
Oh poor Edward and sweet Bella. I was so glad she was able to get him back to sleep.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: fretgirl (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 29
Do I smell progress? lol Great chapter!
Author's Response: I don't know, maybe. :) Thanks!
Reviewer: ghartling (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 29
That was too short!!!!! I need more!!!!
Poor Edward....that dream OMG!!! Sweet Sweet Bella.....
I like how the roles are reversed! Most stories has Bella who is the "weaker" but I like reading about this.
Thanks for making my day seeing an update in my mailbox!
G
Author's Response: You're welcome, and thank you for reviewing! :)
Reviewer: MJ Mason-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 29
awwww so sweet :):)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 29
Aaaah, he should have gone. Although I think therapy is key in this, I also think being wrapped up tight in Bella's arms would do him the world of good! I hope they can get there soon.
Author's Response: Let's hope so, yeah. Thanks for leaving a review!
Reviewer: laylaywo (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 29
Okay, that was so sweet. I did the same thing with my husband before we were married and I had a panic attack. He would stay on the phone with me 'til it passed and I would wake up with my phone open next to me. Great writting!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 29
oh Bella. I LOVE you! Gosh girl you are sooooo good for him and he knows it so is subcoinciously pushing you away in his dreams and punishing himself, don't let him get away with it! he needs you!!!!
Oh Eddie!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 29
Awwww poor Edward. My heart breaks for him in every chapter. I love him dearly. I want him to get better and to be able to trust Bella. I am also very scared that Bella will do something that will hurt him. I dont think she will do it intentionally, but he is like an egg shell and anything will break him. I hope this never happens. I hope she will be able to fix him and he grow to trust himself and love himself and feel like he is worthy of love. This is an amazing story and I look forward to your updates!!
Author's Response: So happy you like my story, thank you!
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 29
what she does for him...
Reviewer: UrbanAngel (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 29
poor edward! but i'm glad he called bella and admitted that he ahd a nightmare...great how she talked to him!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: g16299 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 29
Look forward to Edward's healing...good thing most cell phone plans have nights and weekends free ;-)
Author's Response: yup *lol* Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: yellowdandylions (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 29
I really like this story.
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: linnfromia (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 29
Sweet chapter -- Bella comes through with flying, shining colors. Your writing skills show through in the dream sequence -- it shows a whole host of Edward's issues and insecurities, and makes the middle of the night phone call wholly believable. And Carlisle, who came off as rather interfering, redeems himself with his honesty and restraint.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter, thank you!
Reviewer: Schlager G (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 29
Great chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 29
She never cancelled the call?
Author's Response: She fell asleep with the phone in her hand, that's all I'm going to say. I'll leave it up to the reader to decide whether or not she turned it off. *lol*
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 29
Fantastic, Nilla. It was wonderful how Edward and Carlisle shared the tentative moments in the kitchen. It is clear he is dying for parental love and support, but doesn't know how to let them in. In what could have been a major fight when Carlisle admitted to talking to Bella, it ended well with alot for Edward to think about. While true that the dream was horrible and frightening, something dawned on me: had the dream not veered off into James' abuse, it might very well have ended with Edward having an erotic dream about Bella??? :) Yes? Or is it just my overactive thoughts? I mean, what was that line about not wearing anthing under her robe??Hmmm?? LOL
I love, love, love your story (as I say every chapter) and the slow build of trust, between Edward and those who love him, makes my heart melt. Yes, I know there is a long way for poor Edward to go, but I can't help but be a romantic and yearn for a first kiss soon. Something. Anything. Even a kiss on the cheek!!! LOL
Have a wonderful day. You've just made mine. :)
Author's Response: *lol* It could've happened, yeah (about the dream). Unfortunately, it ended differently. Thank you so much for your review, and I'm really glad to hear that my update made your day. :)
Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 29
aww, so sweet. I love that he's getting so attached to her.
Author's Response: Glad you thought it was sweet. Thanks!
Reviewer: Orchidsrnaughty (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 29
sniff, sniff....poor edward.....i absolutely love this story!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you! :)
Reviewer: angel27eyes (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 29
AWWW! I loved this chapter! but then again I love all of them. She talked him to sleep! wow! he's really starting to open up and love her!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really happy you loved it. :)
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 29
so sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 29
awwww ... how sweet ... well, the going back to sleep part anyway
the dream was horrible ... hope that type of dream doesn't happen again
Author's Response: Can't make any promises... Thank you very much for reviewing!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 29
*Silent tears fall* Oh what a horrible nightmare. Edward really is fighting some inner demons and wouldn't karma be a bitch to toss in Bella like that just to torment Edward more. Well I sure hope she lightens up and lets Edward feel peace for once. It warms my heart that Bella is able to bring Edward a bit of peace and hope he realizes that she really would walk thru fire for him, may give him reason to trust her completly.
Author's Response: Is it sick to say that I enjoyed writing that nightmare? I've always liked writing dream sequences for some reason. :) Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 29
Bella is like Edward's personal soothing balm.
Again, I wish the police had killed James. He can still recover and escape and come to Forks and hurt Edward again.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: fsugirlga (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 29
man I wanted him to come over for some spooning time:( But I still loved it and them!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
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