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Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 30

ooooh, so what does Charlie know about Edward? I'm sure he knows who he is by rep and I doubt he'll be happy with Bella dating him.  should be interesting! very interesting.

Poor Edward. I know he wants more with Bella, but have no clue how to, what to or where to.  Plus that means more touching which he doens't want and possibly losing articles of clothing and her seeing scars that he doesn't want. On top of the not feeling worthy.  This is HUGE for Edward. HUGE!  I'm so proud of him!



Author's Response: Really huge indeed. Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: lauras1sttime (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 30

SQUEEEEEEEEEE...you have no idea how flipping happy I am over this little step they just made!

Awesome chap, I loved it!!! :)



Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :)

Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 7

Wow.  Thanks for another great chapter.  I am adding your story to my list because unfortunately real life interrupts...I will be back to read more.  Thanks so much for taking the time to share your writing.

Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 6

With that Chapter End Note, I am almost inclined to not waste the time on a review...but quickly, I am enjoying your fic and can't wait for the B/E interaction...next chapter!

Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 5

Thanks for another great chapter.  I wonder who the hterapy was for?  Edward and his problems, or for Carlisle and Esme's marriage.  Either case makes a perfect fit.  I hope I find out in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Liana Kay (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 30

I'm glad that Edward is taking a chance with Bella...and I definately hope that Charlie doesn't freak out. 



Author's Response: Let's hope he doesn't. ;) Thank you for leaving a review!

Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 4

Thanks for a great chapter, and for sharing your writing.

Reviewer: lovesam66 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 30

Omg that was amazing! They're going on a Date!!!! I can't believe it!! I'm so excited. Wonder what charlie will
say?

Author's Response: You'll find out soon. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Kairi J (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 30

Finally! I've been waiting for this day for a long time. Next chapter...first kiss? Maybe? Thanks for the update!



Author's Response: We'll see. :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: zoe3 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 30

Oh my gosh! This story owns me! Thank you for the regular updates. I truly am enjoying all of these little steps that are moving their relationship forward. Very realistic... and always leaves me wanting more. :-)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like my story, thank you!

Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 3

Ok, I wasn't expecting Bella to be so tough but I have to say 'Way to go girl!'  Kudos on giving Bella a set of marbles.  I am really enjoying your story and thanks for writing it.

Reviewer: tinaconnor (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 30

slow but steady progress.  I like the way you are helping peel the defensive sheild that Edward has erected to keep himself from being hurt again.  I always look forward to your updates.  Thank you



Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 2

Nice chapter...onto chapter three!  Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

I am glad I found this fic today, I have lots of time to read and you have lots of chapters already posted...thank so much for writing, I am looking forward to your story.

Reviewer: 09kez (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 30

mmm... it feels like its building toward a gigantic crisis between them.  Please be kind to poor Edward!!  Love your story as always, cheers



Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Fesh (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 30

-squuuueeeellll- yey I have been waiting for her to admit she wanted more for ages! I'm so excited for when they actually go. And i'd much rather prefer coffee with Edward than a movie - I wanna be able to talk to him!
Haha I secretly really want Charlie to give Bella 'The Talk' it would be hilarious!
Hhmmm I wonder what Edward was thinking when he realised Bella wanted him to ask her out...
Another great chapter - thankyou for updating so regularly!!

Author's Response: You're welcome. Thank you very much for the review!

Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 30

another good chapter as always, i hope it don't really back fire her pushing him in the direction thanks



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 29

I wish Carlisle would just keep his mouth shut.  He's not helping at all.



Author's Response: Are you absolutely sure about that? At least E didn't run this time.

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 29

awww... this is great.. update soon please!!

 



Author's Response: Will do. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: Toula (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 29

This whole story made me cry at points, and at others it made me smile with out even knowing I was smiling. So it was simply amazing in such a way that it kept me up at night, thinking about Edward and Bella. UPDATE SOOOOOOON!



Author's Response: Aw, thank you! And the next chapter is finished. :)

Reviewer: Tralalaura (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 29

Love it! Keep on writing and post more soon!



Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter is already posted. :)

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 29

Awww

Wow good chapter. Glad he talked to Carlisle again, & had dessert lol.

That was some nightmare! Poor Edward! Scared him so bad he needed to call Bella to be sure she was ok! Aww! I bet he woulda wanted to hug her right then!



Author's Response: He might have. :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Longing for Edward (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 29

Edward talking and reaching out - the first steps in healing.  Your Bella was everything I expected her to be and more.



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Elaine (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 29

Great as usual, more please. 



Author's Response: More soon, and thanks! :)

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 29

Awww They are so sweet together



Author's Response: Thank you!

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