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Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 30

woah! i seriously can't wait till the next chapter; what interesting developments!

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked. :)

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 30

LOL.

Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 9

I loved this chapter.  I hope Emmett stops being a jerk and that they can all start getting along.  Thanks for writing.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your reviews! Hope you'll like the rest of the story as well. :)

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 30

*L* Awww, for a moment there I was transported back to the awkwardness that is teenage dating in high school. Remember those days of slipping notes and having your friends stalk the boy you liked... umm, well no, I would NEVER do that! *LOL*

Adoring this nervous and tentative side of Edward and WOO for Bella taking the upper hand and kind of telling him how she feels!



Author's Response: *lol* Those were the days... Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 8

And here I thought that they were going to bond over Bella being abused by her stepfather as well.  I am glad she wasn't.  I hope Carlisle doesn't give up on Edward.  Thanks for sharing your writing.

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 30

Great chapter! I loved everything about it!

I hope things go ok on their date. It would be terrible if their relationship was ruined.

Looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response: It should be up soon. Thank you!

Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 30

OMG, they are going on a date!! This chapter made feel sad but hopeful. I'm giddy and can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: MOre coming soon. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 30

Woo, go dating!



Author's Response: Dating's good. :)

Reviewer: RaeCullen (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 30

Aww they are going to try and date! YAY! I'm so excited. Ruh-roh I'm scared for Charlie's reaction to her telling him she's going on a date w/Edward. I dont think he's gonna like it. 

Great chapter!!! 



Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 30

Aww sweet.  Loving this as usual. More soonest please.

Achilles x



Author's Response: Absolutely, more asap. :) Thank you!

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 30

ooooo im sooo glad that she told him the truth and his response was awesome, that even though he was so broken he wanted bella too that was just incredible and then the way she just straight out told charlie that she had a date. o and poor eric he just needs a hug now haha it would have been soo great to see what was going through his head when erik heard edwards voice hehe. i love you more than george michael and that is saying a lot seriously because i think he has the voice of gods :D hehe yea so you already know that you are super awesometastic :D so ill just let you be now :D but i cant wait for more my dear and boy you werent kiddding when you said it would "more soon" not that im complaining  ;)



Author's Response: As always, thank you so much for your kind words! I'm so glad you enjoy my story so much! :)

Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 30

I'm so glad they are still making progress, and I hope they will have a nice first "date". That is unless Bella's dad freaks out... I don't want anything to get in their way now that things are going so well.



Author's Response: Thank you very much for leaving a review!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 30

*happy dance* OH the progress made! Wow...I am so excited. LOL poor Eric Yorkie I wouldn't doubt he did wet his pants though you do have to admire his courage. Hope Charlie doesn't give Bella to hard of a time over the impending date.



Author's Response: Hopefully he'll go easy on her. Thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 30

Wonderful chapter! They eating under the umbrella, Alice attempts and all the timidity to acknowledge they both are interested made me warm and smiling.



Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad you liked it!

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 30

This is my favorite story. I am always excited when you update. I love Edwards reaction to her being asked out. He is so awesome and sweet. Update soon!



Author's Response: Thank you! And I've posted the next chapter.

Reviewer: Bluecanoe (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 30

Oh God, poor Edward, he has all these emotions which are obvious to everyone but him, like telling Eric that Bella is not available.  But because he's socially so retarded he doesn't have a clue how to act on his true feelings.  But...I think he's getting there..baby steps..



Author's Response: Let's hope you're right. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 30

ooo moving forward.  love it!



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 30

Edward is trying a whole lot.  I think the boyfriend/girlfriend intimate thing (touching) will be difficult for him, but I think/know Bella will be craving it (being the horny girl that she is).  I think poor Edward could turn anyone into a sex phene.



Author's Response: He probably could, yeah. *lol* Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: khytruckle (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 30

I just started this story and I really like it--especially Bella being so strong and stubborn.

Thanks for the frequent updates.



Author's Response: Yay, new reader! :) You're welcome, and thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: TammyDevil666 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 30

That should go over well...lol!  I'm glad they've decided to finally go out on a date, I just hope it's not a complete disaster.  He still hasn't told her everything.  On a somewhat different note, I was reading Healing again the other day=)



Author's Response: Thanks for your review! And Healing, yeah... those were the good old Spuffy days. *lol*

Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 30

Wonderful chapter!!  Edward going all caveman on Eric...funny stuff.  I love how you write your Bella so mature and that she puts herself out there.  Thanks for sharing and updating so often.



Author's Response: Thank you, so happy you enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: pamirvine85 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 30

love it... it's about time...



Author's Response: Yup. :) Thank you.

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 30

oh they are going to try dating, thst's lovely bella is trying so hard as is edward when he's not testing her and pushing her limits, great stuff  



Author's Response: Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: frostbitten (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 30

hahaha....is she gonna get the sex talk? i'm glad they're getting to move further in their relationship.



Author's Response: Keep reading and you'll find out. ;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 30

All I can say is bravo. Thank God Bella didn't accept Eric's date out of spite, based on your teaser. She of course doesn't seem that petty and I'd expect more from her if she did. It's clear she is in love with Edward and doesn't want to 'date' anyone else. And I can't wait for Edward's POV of this; he must have been terrified and elated to find out Bella actually want's to date him. Poor Edward must be so shocked Bella wants him that way. First date night...I remember those. Anxiousness as wella s excitement. I know you'll deliver a sweet chapter full of angst.Can we expect any kissing to occur, or that just wishful thinking??  LOL...Thanks for the update Nilla, fabulous as usual. xoxo



Author's Response: Well, you just have to wait and see. :) I'm so happy you liked the chapter, thank you very much!

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