Major breakthrough!! Best chapter ever. I am so excited they have decided to try to date. I didnt think Bella would tell Edward that she actually liked him like that. The thing is I think that he will take a step back when or if she tries to kiss him. I cant wait for them to breakthrough and he tells her about his past completely. Great chapter. 

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Can't wait for the sort-of date! Good for Bella letting Edward know what's going on in her head.

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what an amazing piece of literature so far, and i say literature because thats what this is, its not just a story or just words...  i was hesitant to read this because of the unfinished status but i'm so glad i didn't wait until it was complete.... you have definately sucked me in and i am dying to find out how bella and edward progress, and also if and when edward starts letting the family in.  Please continue soon

 

~Shellz~

Author's Response: I'm so happy you're enjoying my story, thank you so much for your kind words. The next chapter is posted for validation and will hopefully be up soon.

Call it an instinct but I having a feeling Charlie isn't gonna like this date! Unlike myself, who is jumping up and down screaming YES! YES! YESS! (Figuratively of course!)

Author's Response: *lol* We'll just have to wait and see then. He might surprise you. :)

What an amazing chapter!  In a lot of ways, these two don't know what they are doing.  The desire to be in each other's company is what fuels the steps they are taking together.  I am eager to find out Charlie's reaction to Bella's news.  It hasn't been quite clear what Charlie's stance is on Edward and now we're going to find out.

Author's Response: Yes, you are about to find out. :) Glad you liked the chapter, thank you!

Charlie is going to love that. Loved how the date agreement went down and how she is handling him. I'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks, more coming soon.

holy shit holy shit, please update soon!

Author's Response: Next chapter is posted for validation. :)

giggle ... I remember telling my dad I had my first date ... it was a rather unique experience

Author's Response: I can imagine. *lol* Thanks for your review!

I cannot imagine how the hell Bella's father is going to handle the father boyfriend interview but I am positive that it will be interesting. Thanks for the post and I am looking forward to the next.

Author's Response: The next chapter is posted and will hopefully be up soon. Thank you!

At last... I know Edward's had a terrible deal here, but I do feel for poor Bella, who deserves something nice really.

Author's Response: Yeah, they both do. Thank you for the review. :)

I've just started reading this story, and ended up reading all 30 chapters in one sitting! I absolutely love it, I really do. Edward and Bella are heartbreakingly beautiful and i could help but think of this song constantly when they're interacting- I know it's written about a girl and Edward is a boy, but I just think that it fits your story absolutely perfectly. I don't know if you've heard it at all, but if not you can hear it here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p13fLLrWMXA

Please keep up the great work, and don't cower to people's demands for longer chapters or whatever- it's your story, tell it how you want to tell it.

 

Lupe x

Author's Response: Thank you so much for those words, and I can't tell you how happy it makes me to hear that you love my story, Now I'll go listening to the song. :)

Sigh. My smile was blinding when I read Edward going all caveman on Bella. Soso happy that they're giving each other a chance {: I STILL WANNA READ BELLA FINDING OUT TGE REST OF THE STORY!! Lol. Can't wait for the next update :} great chap.

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great chapter, i just love this story. am hanging out for the first kiss XXX

Author's Response: You might have to wait a while for that. :) So happy you love the story, thank you!