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Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 31
Awww I can't help but be a cheerleader for Edward. He really has come such a long way and I thrilled to no end. I sure hope he doesn't flip when meeting Charlie, this could be very interesting. I will anxiously await your next update.
Author's Response: It should be interesting, yeah. ;) More to come real soon, thanks for your review!
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 31
Blahhhhhh!! Ughh how I absolutely HATE cliffies!! But omg loved this chapter a lot. Can't wait for next update. Really hoping it comes to us soon
Author's Response: Sorry about the cliffie. :) Really happy you enjoyed the chapter though. Thank you! And the next chap is posted. :)
Reviewer: twilightlover502 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 31
Awesome! I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter! You are such a talented writer. This is so interesting.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you think so. Thank you!
Reviewer: gbasjw (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 31
I so love Edward. I love Bella too but he is just such a sweet soul underneath. You write so well that I can feel his anxiety as I read your words. So onward to another hurdle for the poor boy. I think he'll get thru it OK though. He really has made a lot of progress in a short time. As always, looking forward to your next update.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapter will be up soon.
Reviewer: tatie1970 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 31
Great writing. I'm really looking forward to their date. And to the introduction, off course. regards, Nathalie (Belgium)
Author's Response: Thank you! There will be more soon.
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 31
Yes! This went better than I imagined. Edward will be a wreck meeting Charlie, but I can't help think it will be to his advantage in more ways than one to be on some kind of positive personal terms with Charlie. Edward's horizons are expanding. Maybe he'll come to somewhat accept that he can have a normal life. I'm repulsed at all the different ways that James abused Edward. I'm surprised that Edward is relatively normal despite his awful experience.
Author's Response: He's been through a lot, that's for sure. Let's hope Charlie will go easy on him. Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 31
oh come on... I don't think that edward can handle any male interaction can he?
Author's Response: We'll just have to wait and see about that. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 31
Oh, crap is right! Poor Edward; he's going to freak out at having to officially meet Charlie, isn't he?
Reading this chapter from EPOV was heartbreaking. One thing that stood out was that he doesn't consider himself attractive. I'm sure when he finds out Bella thinks he is beautiful it will blow his mind! It's so devastating to know victims of abuse consider themselves ugly and tainted. I'm happy at least that Bella is going slow with him, not putting any pressure on. It's clear by now she will do anything to put Edward at ease, even though her heart is overflowing to get closer to him. How frustrating for her; but her tenderness is just what he needs.
I can't tell you Nilla how enjoyable this story is; whenever I see the update I literally sing! Thank you for the slow progression of these characters; I'm sure I speak for all of your fans here when I say how much we feel invested in them and care about them. Now go forth, and create a perfect first date. LOL :)
Just a suggestion. Please??? :D
Author's Response: I'll do my best. ;) And thank you so much for your kind review!
Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 31
Great chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Reviewer: lauras1sttime (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 31
*sigh* the EPOV was so good!!! It was awesome to see how much he really cares about Bella and wishes they could have a romantic relationship.
I can't wait to see this date!
Author's Response: Thank you! And we'll get to the date eventually. :)
Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 31
wow, I'm happy that Charlie is ok wiht Edward. He has to know that Edward is considered trouble. I'm glad Charlie is open about it and willing ot give him a try. Now though poor Edward has to meet him, gulp!
Author's Response: Yeah, let's see how well that'll turn out. ;) Thanks for leaving a review.
Reviewer: Orchidsrnaughty (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 31
uh oh! poor edward and bella! how are they gonna work around ed's issues long enough for him to meet charlie? hmmmm....crap...
Author's Response: Yeah, they have a lot ahead of them. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 31
wow, what a chapter!!! I can't even begin to thank you for showing us so much of edward's mind. of course I have a lot to say and I can't wait to go to the forum. later this afternoom it will be possible. untill there I'll thinking of this chap all the time. I'm totally in love with this story.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like my story so much, thank you! :)
Reviewer: jennrae (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 31
what a great chapter. love seeing both sides of their story! and I love a good cliffie! can't wait until the next update! Thanks for writing.By the way if you are on twitter i am lemonmartinis.
Author's Response: Following you now. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: moshpit (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 31
I compleatly and utterly love this story! It's beautifully written. Looking forward to the next chapter and their date.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much!
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 31
love the end ... meet the dad ... hmmm ... wonder if the shotgun will be in evidence
Author's Response: Maybe. *lol* Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 31
loving this story..its heartbreaking and great at the same time, looking forward to reading more
Author's Response: More coming soon, thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: seattlegirl (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 31
Gotta love Charlie :)
Author's Response: I love writing him. :)
Reviewer: Yellow Bird (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: AlexaET (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 30
OMG!!!!!!! Date, date, date, date!!!!!!!!
Ugh.....Possesiward is hot!!!! hahahahahaha.... Oh man Nilla u have me sweating bullets here.......
First I'm so glad that finally I can see 'time passing by' some kind of 'bonding' u know, cause all the first part was in a matter of like a week! Too fast! But I ain't complaining I love it! If it was me I would have them married and with a Babyward hahahahahaha.....
Please don't be mean and write the date next, cause knowing you I bet next chapter will be EPOV and just the beginning of the date and I would be left all dress up for the date!!! Just kidding, write what u want lady it's always awsome and I will surely read it and love it :D
OMG 30 chapter....damn, already? It seems like yesterday when I saw Loner somewhere and I start eating pop-corn with Coke like a mad woman reading the first chapters and stalking the poor Nilla with reviews!!! *insert cries here* hahahahahahaha
Do u have an idea like how long do u plan this story to be? Or you just really are playing by creativity?
Peace out lady! Ur awsomeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: *lol* Glad you're excited about the upcoming date. I have no idea how long this story will be. It's nowhere near finished yet, that's all I can say. :) Thank you so much, as always, for your lovely review!
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 30
this is going to be messy.... very messy... hehe can't wait to see the charlie trainwreck ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Elaine (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 30
More please!
Author's Response: More coming soon. :)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 30
YES!!!!! I'm so happy for them!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 30
HA! She told her dad! bahaha!
Author's Response: About time, huh? :)
Reviewer: cady243 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 30
i love it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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