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Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 31
Excellent! The poor boy is so frightened of been a normal teenager that is fun and sad at the same time.
Author's Response: That's true. Thank you for the review! :)
Reviewer: fretgirl (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 31
Poor Edward......
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Longing for Edward (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 31
OMG Edward has to face Charlie before his date with Bella, as if he isn't stressed out enough. I hope Bella can keep him calm and that their date will actually happen but there is so much that can go wrong with this situation.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: It's finished and should be up soon. Thank you so much for your review!
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 31
Love it as usual but I don't understand why Bella's Dad was moaning that she wasn't being honest with him as - yes, she was going to see Edward but they weren't dating at all until now but were just really good friends.
Anyway that aside nicely written Edward's POV.
Achilles
Author's Response: True, still, Bella kind of made Charlie believe she was just spending time with Alice all the times she was hanging at the Cullen's. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked the EPOV. :)
Reviewer: 09kez (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 31
I'm really intrigued as to what circumstances will bring out Edward's full story for Bella and whether this is the catalyst to get him to take therapy seriously. I absolutely love your Bella as she is strong and true without being completely self consumed by her own doubts as a lot of Bella's are. This Bella has the right approach for this Edward and I really believe she won't carelessly leave him or anything else he wouldn't recover from. Its such a delicate balance you have created in this story and I just love being on the journey with you. Thanks
Author's Response: You're welcome, and I'm so happy to hear that you like my Bella. I really enjoy writing her this way. Thank you very much!
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 31
HA! Introduce himself! Bahahaha!
Author's Response: Yeah, let's see how that'll turn out...;)
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 31
thats cool they are going on a date, just coffee as bella says start simple but the whole thing sends edward into panic mode, i hope he copes with the official introduction to charlie maybe bella could touch him somehow as her touch is so good for him, great stuff
Author's Response: Yeah, that would probably calm him. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: AlexaET (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 31
OMG I was smiling this huge crazy, creepy smile when Charlie released the 'bomb' Oh crap! I'm with u Bella, I really wasn't expeting that, and then I think it and it's stupid cause of course Charlie was going to ask to meet him, but I was just so caught up in the moment I just forgot how 'fatherly' he was!! Oh crap!!
This is going to be a big one for Edward, I think he can do it, for Bella, and without touching Charlie's hand, maybe Bella should explain Charlie that he is really 'socially shy' ..... so now I'm thinking maybe next chapter we won't get to see the 'date' eather, cause it's going to be around Bella telling Edward her father want's to meet him, or simply Bella trying to convince Charlie that is not a good idea..... I don't know and I can't wait to find out....
Nilla really, were do you come up with this? It's been 31 awsome chapters and I can't get enough!!!
Ok back to the sex 'thinking' hahahahahahaha at this point I just want a hug.... yeah sorry I've been bothering with u for a while but every time they are together I just want them to hug!!! Hahahahaha, so please be nice and make it happen.... please!! I know u can convice Lonerward that it's good to hug....talk to him and see what he tells u ok???
Well I'm going to the forum to see what everybody is saying about the chapter.... freaking out as I am? Maybe.... U rock lady :D
Peace OUT!!
Author's Response: Honestly? I really, really want them to hug as well. *lol* Won't stress it, though. We'll getting there. The next chapter should be up soon, then you'll find out if you're right about what will happen, ;) Love reading all the comments in the forum just as much as I love reading the reviews. :) Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 31
Excellent chapter!
I think that Edward meeting Charlie might be a little awkward or stressful, but I think it will go well. =)
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Hopefully you're right. Thank you so much, more coming soon. :)
Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 31
Ooops... I wonder how Edward will react when Bella tells him he has to introduce himself to Charlie. I hope he can manage it, because I really want these two to go on that date! It will probably be very difficult for Edward, but he has come a long way since he met Bella, so hopefully he will be able to handle this as well.
Author's Response: Let's hope so, yeah. Thank you very much for leaving a review!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 31
LOL.
Reviewer: loyalluv (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 31
Poor Edward! I am so freaking happy there are starting to date but I wonder how the poor boy is gonna handle all of it!
Author's Response: Yeah, it won't be easy for him. Hopefully Bella will be able to help him calm his nerves. ;) Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 31
Oh boy! Can't wait for the big date! Love this story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: francy_princess (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 31
cant wait 4 the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, it should be up soon. :)
Reviewer: lovesam66 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 31
Wonderful chapter:) I seriously can't wait to see how this whole thing plays out.
Author's Response: You'll find out soon. Thank you so much!
Reviewer: wazzoes (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 31
brilliant keep it coming
Author's Response: Thanks, will do. :)
Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 31
I love being inside Edward's head. Not always a fun place but very insightful. How will Edward react to meeting the dad? Can't wait to find out. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: You're most welcome. And you'll find out soon. ;) Thank you!
Reviewer: edwardluva84 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 31
Another great chapter! I'm a little worried for Edward though....meeting Charlie. I can see Charlie trying to be all intimdating and Edward freaking the hell out. Poor guy. Can't wait to see what you come up with!
Author's Response: Hopefully you won't be disappointed. :) Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 31
good chapter thanks
Author's Response: Thanks, and you're welcome! :)
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 31
Lol... that will be amusing :P
Author's Response: Maybe... :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: angel27eyes (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 31
Another GREAT chapter!!! I love how nervous and awkward Edward was in asking/accepting/stumbling into the date! it was cute! I really am owned....can't wait for more!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have posted the next chapter. :)
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 31
I KNEW IT!! LoL knew she wasn't gonna get off scott-free ha ha
Oh poor Edward tho...dun-dun-dunnnnnn!!
Author's Response: Poor Edward indeed... Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Fesh (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 31
Hehehe Edward introducing himself should be interesting!! I really really hope he doesn't screw it up somehow.
Edward being so nervous about dating Bella is adorable -sigh- I love Edward!
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I just love writing Edward. :)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 31
Oh how I love Possessiveward. He was too adorable with his nervousness but his fear are heartbreaking.
I am so looking forward to their date ... and meeting Charlie! ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! And there will be more soon. :)
Reviewer: TammyDevil666 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 31
Ah, meeting the parent, that should go over well...lol! I hope Charlie won't scare the boy with his shotgun, that's the last thing Edward needs. He's already freaked out about this enough, but I'm glad they're finally giving the whole dating thing a try=)
Author's Response: Let's hope Charlie will play nice. ;) Thanks for reviewing!
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