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Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 32

Ahha I totally googles that shit the other day!! Lol. I was really hoping for some BxE coffee-shop-date action.... But I guess that can wait =3 loved that chapter. Update soon

Author's Response: Absolutely! :) Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: RaeCullen (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 32

Aww poor Lonerward. He's so damn cute. I just wanna put him in my pocket and keep him forever! =) Can't wait for their date! 



Author's Response: So happy you like Lonerward. He's adorable, isn't he? :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 32

Ahhhh

Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 32

good chapter sweet thanks



Author's Response: Thank you, and you're welcome. :)

Reviewer: Azrielstar (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 32

Awww- I like Emmett. Though, I wish we woulda got to see some of the date:)

Author's Response: All in time. *lol* Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: maserati (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 32

Edward is making big strides as far as I'm concerned.  I know it's like otwo steps forward, one step back, but that puts him a little ahead each time, right?  Nice to see that Charlie is acquainted somewhat with Edward's condition and didn't tell Bella she couldn't see him.  I hoe their meeting goes well.  Great story and writing.



Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 32

so cool that Emmett was nice and supportive, in his way.

If Edward shows up with flowers, I bet Bella will cry..in a good way



Author's Response: We'll just have to wait and see. ;) Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 32

Even without all the issues, I would imagine most guys feel the way Edward was and Emmett knew that and helped him.  That was a great chapter, as always.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the chapter, thanks for letting me know!

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 31

Lol... Poor bella and edward are so screwed!!

Reviewer: francy_princess (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 32

cant wait 4 the next chapter!!!



Author's Response: Thanks, it should be up soon.

Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 32

aww, Emmett and Edward are actually bonding. I can't wait to read about the date.

Author's Response: Hopefully you'll like what's to come. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 32

Some nice interaction between Edward and Emmett there; it was good to see that Emmett actually does care. I wonder what Edward will do about the flower thing... And how will his meeting with Charlie go? Hopefully good enough to make Bella and Edward get away on that date!



Author's Response: You'll get some answers in the next chapter, which should be up soon. :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 32

Great chapter!

I'm glad that Edward agreed to meet Charlie. Let's just hope the meeting goes well.

I have a feeling that Edward might get a flower, just to show her in a way how he cares. =) Maybe...I'm not really sure.

Looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response: Hopefully it'll be up soon, I've alreday posted it. Thank you!

Reviewer: lauras1sttime (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 32

AWWW yay! Emmett and Edward are sorta getting along! : )

I can't wait to see if he gets her flowers!!! :D

Awesome chap my dear



Author's Response: Aw thank you! :)

Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 32

awww.. Emmett IS trying..



Author's Response: He really is, yeah. He cares. :)

Reviewer: Kairi J (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 32

Laughed so hard at the flowers bit, it's priceless. :)



Author's Response: Enjoyed writing that part. *lol* Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 32

oh i'd like to think that edward can mend some bridges with emmett, maybe with less rosalie about he will have less negative thought about edward, will he or wont he get flowers? and what does charlie know that bella dosen't?, i'm pleased that the thought of meeting charlie did not diminish his desire to go out with bella, great chapter thanks tracy



Author's Response: Thanks for your review, I'm happy you liked the chap. :)

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 32

Great chapter I loved how Emmett stepped up and is trying to be a good brother. More please soon.

Author's Response: More coming soon. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. :)

Reviewer: darcybabe (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 32

I'm so excited about the date - and even more excited that Edward's made the decision to meet Charlie so Bella won't have to lie to him. Hopefully this is the beginning of a better relationship between Edward and Emmett. I honestly can't wait until your next post...well, all your posts. I absolutely lovethis story. Thank you!



Author's Response: You're very welcome. And thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: twiggs66 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 32

Well, that went good...at least Emmett and Edward are talking.  Surprise about Rosalie, wasn't expecting that.  I figured that Edward would talk to Emmett about meeting Bellas dad, but maybe thats a better conversation for Carlisle.  I can't wait for the meeting w/charlie and the date...too excited!



Author's Response: Glad you're excited, and you won't have to wait long for the next chapter. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: smithle1 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 32

Emmett is so sweet! I hate that they fight, and I hope we get to see their relationship get better. Nice chapter.



Author's Response: Thank you! I love writing Emmett. :)

Reviewer: sangwen (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 3

Loved that Bella stood up for herself and kicked him in the balls. Great chapter.



Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: twifan20 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 32

I love this story!

I'm so glad Emmett is trying to help Edward, even if Edward isn't ready to except help.

I can't wait for the next chapter... and the first date!



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I'm happy you like my story. :)

Reviewer: MJ Mason-Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 32

ooooooooooo   so sweet:):):)



Author's Response: Glad you think so, thanks! :)

Reviewer: perfect Rob (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 32

I really like the way you write, very much!

Everything in this story comes natural, according to the characters of course ...i'm so anxious for the first date...

I like Edward's reaction.He's scared but he wants Bella so much and maybe for the first time he's willing to  to fight for something in his life!It's such a healthy reaction,while thinking what he's been through...

 

 



Author's Response: I'm so happy you like my writing, thank you very much!

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