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Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed)
April 09, 2010 04:17 AM · On:
I'm sure Edward was somewhat laughing in the inside because of seeing Bella standing in front of him with a purple bathrobe on. *grin*
Let's go see if he's going to help make her cookies.
Author's Response: The bathrobe, yeah. Had to be quite a sight. *lol*
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed)
April 08, 2010 03:58 PM · On:
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed)
April 08, 2010 03:36 PM · On:
I've been reading this story for a few weeks now, having skimmed through the beginning chapters a bit, and then following updates, but it's time to read this story from the beginning to the latest chapter, really. I know by now that it's very much worth the read, so, that's what I'm doing now. ^^
I don't have much to say yet, but when I do, you'll be hearing from me.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm looking forward to hear what you think. :)
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed)
April 08, 2010 06:01 AM · On:
omg finally i got to read my update :D this was amazing my dear i was just sooooo surprised at the interaction between emmett and edward and i love that alice was trying to beat emmett down with a spatula haha that just seems classic to me haha you are brilliant and i hope to never have to combined two chapter reviews in one again :( that i just get to read them as they come :D i cant wait for more to see if chose to bring flowers and how the date and meeting charlie went :D Incredible :D
Author's Response: Aw thank you as always for your lovely review! Really happy you liked it.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed)
April 07, 2010 10:20 PM · On:
Aww Emmett's not so bad.
Author's Response: He's getting better. ;) Thanks for reviewing.
April 07, 2010 08:58 PM · On:
Great Chapter! I know this might sound cheesy, but every chapter is a growing experience for them and it's very profound.
I just wanted to let you know that recently a blog has been put together called `The Taste On My Tongue` and a group of us are putting the finishing touches on it. Us as mods on the website have to pick a completed fiction to write a review on, and then a WIP fic to write a review on.
I just wanted to let you know that I have personally picked your WIP fiction, and I have been writing a review on it. Great one of course ;) We have our first meeting this friday and the reviews will be posted on the site and a notice goes out to the authors who we chose to write a review, letting them know where to find it.
This is one massive review, but again, great job on this story Nilla!
Author's Response: Wow, I'm really honored and grateful that you chose to write about this story. Thank you. I'm looking forward to reading it! :) And I'm so glad you liked the chapter, thank you so much for your review!
Reviewer: CanadianMommmyX2 (Signed)
April 07, 2010 06:49 PM · On:
Fantastic story. I was hesitant to start reading it, but now I am hooked. So well written, and handled with sensitivity. Very well done! Looking forward to the updates!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! More coming soon.
Reviewer: persuasion72 (Signed)
April 07, 2010 06:36 PM · On:
for some reason I didn't realize this story was out there until last night...read the whole thing in one sitting. Love how you are tackling the subject of abuse...heartwrenching, but wonderfully done. Edward is so vulnerable, so dead inside. An interesting way to connect to the series. Thank you for writing...looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know you're enjoying my story so far! I've posted the next chap for validation, hopefully it'll be up soon.
Reviewer: jennrae (Signed)
April 07, 2010 04:19 PM · On:
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: slaybelle (Signed)
April 07, 2010 01:05 PM · On:
I just found this last night - I'm not entirely sure HOW lol I don't remember but it is WONDERFUL!! I read all 32 chapters today during downtime at work (it was that good!) and I literally shouted NO and put my head on the desk when I got to the end. I got some strange looks lol
I can't wait to read the rest. Fantastic job!
Author's Response: Yay, a new reader! So happy you like it so far. Thank you very much!
Reviewer: reader_giggles (Signed)
April 07, 2010 12:19 PM · On:
awww...how sweet is emmett. i knew the boy had it in him deep down inside....way way deep but still there. he did the whole big brother thing in his own style & to use a cheesy oft used expression "made it his own"....yep sounds cheesy as heck but it is right. i got all warm n fluffy thiking of emmett before i was like whoa....edward!! wat's up with rose & him....hope they get back together soon. eager to read more.
Author's Response: More soon, and you'll find out about Rose and Emmett eventually. ;) Thanks for leaving a review!
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed)
April 07, 2010 07:33 AM · On:
Awwww ... Emmett can be sweet when he wants to.
I hope Edward does give Bella flowers ... or flower.
Author's Response: You'll find out soon. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed)
April 07, 2010 06:42 AM · On:
Awwww Emmett being all sweet to Edward and giving him some brotherly advice. You painted the best mental image when you described Alice threatening to beat Emmett with a spatula if he came upstairs to bother their brother. *LOL*
Can't wait to see how Edward continues to handle the countdown to the big 'date' and importantly, how he's going to deal with introducing himself to Charlie.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the spatula part, so did I. *lol* Thank you so much for your review!
Reviewer: gbasjw (Signed)
April 07, 2010 03:05 AM · On:
It was nice to have a chapter that wasn't totally angsty :) Also very sweet to see some somewhat "normal" conversations between Edward & Emmett. Maybe a bit of a breakthru there? Edward still has so far to go but these babysteps are so gratifying to read.
Author's Response: Really happy you enjoyed the Ed/Em bonding. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed)
April 07, 2010 02:10 AM · On:
aw, i loved this. everyone's trying so hard...i'm nervous that something terrible is just going to derail it all.
Author's Response: Let's hope not. ;) Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed)
April 07, 2010 01:45 AM · On:
Really great chapter! I love Emmett and Alice giving little tips to Edward lol it was cute. I am really like Em being nicer to Edward and the whole flower article was great. I cant wait to see what happens next...if Edward picks out a special flower to give to Bella. Thanks so much for the fast update! Love this story so much. Its really beautiful. Cant wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind review. I'm really glad you liked the chapter. More soon.
Reviewer: Sara0123 (Signed)
April 07, 2010 12:48 AM · On:
I really love this story. Read it faithfully everytime you update, so I was just wondering, When are they finally going to go on their date? I mean we know Edward is nervous and charlie wants to meet him so why did we get another chapter with basically the same info as the past 2 or 3?? Everytime I see you updated I keep thinking yay their date finally but then nope just another filler chapter??? Please don't get me wrong this is one of my favorite stories on here but I am just getting alittle inpatient I guess :) till next chapter hopefully it will finally be there date
Author's Response: Well, to be honest, nothing will ever be rushed in this story. It may seem like the progress is slow, but I feel it's necessary. While I do see your point, I don't see the things leading up to the date as filler, it's all important for the story. You're going to need a lot of patience. ;) But the date will happen, I promise. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: AlexaET (Signed)
April 07, 2010 12:38 AM · On:
Ok..... I don't know what is happening but I seem to just not get enough..... ugh I know things have to be slow to be good but my crazy mind doesn't work that way and I want moreeee hahahahaha........ it's just like everything is happening in slowwwww motionnnnnn and I want to take the spatula and hit Alice with it cause she is wasting my Lonerward and Supportella time......
Ok now that I'm better I think I can say I like the chapter a lot, I was scared there for a moment with Charlie's reaction but I think it can work, he can behave and Edward can endure 1 minute of saying hi, I'm so glad Bella told him about the 'hand-shacke' that's important hope he doesn't forget....
I'm so glad Edward is willing to do an effort, he knows Bella is worth it.... I'm also happy that Emmett and him are kind of 'bonding' in their weird kind of way and I'm still not convinced with the all 'flowers-for-date' thing..... maybe later but not now.... but oh well those are just my crazy toughts.... do whatever u please Nilla I will still love it :D
Ps./ I want a hugggggggggggggggg hahahahahahahaha
Author's Response: *lol* Thanks as always for your lovely comments! I hope you'll like the next chapter, which hopefully should be up real soon. (And I promise you'll get your hug eventually... :) )
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed)
April 06, 2010 11:17 PM · On:
Aww! Go Emmett!!!
I am SO glad Edward is "tolerating" his siblings more & trying to be more civilized!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I'm really happy you liked it. :)
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed)
April 06, 2010 11:11 PM · On:
Awesome! I was hoping that Edward would try to open himself to the possibility of having a less antagonistic relationship with Emmett. Emmett could offer him so much as a male friend and as a brother.
Author's Response: Very true. More Em/Ed bonding later on. ;) Thank you so much for reviewing.
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed)
April 06, 2010 10:55 PM · On:
Lol, poor Edward.
Author's Response: Indeed.
Reviewer: Habebti Heather (Signed)
April 06, 2010 09:29 PM · On:
I have to admit I am really pleased that there are finally some signs of family unity and friendship regarding Edward in the Cullen household. I really missed it. That bond is one of my favorite aspects of the cannon characters. Love the direction this is taking. Thanks for the post.
Author's Response: You're welcome. And thanks for the review!
Reviewer: carbella02 (Signed)
April 06, 2010 08:51 PM · On:
Great chapter!!! Love it!
Hurra for Emmett!!!!!!!
What did happend betwin him and Rosalie?
Author's Response: You'll find out more later on. ;) Thanks for the review, so glad you loved the chapter.
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed)
April 06, 2010 08:14 PM · On:
awwwwww so cute !!! bonding !!!!!!! more please :)
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you thought it was cute. More asap :)
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed)
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April 06, 2010 08:11 PM · On:
ah Emmet was being a good brother. Loved it like always and I can't wait for more update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, more coming soon. :)
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