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Reviewer: Mommyo2 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 8
So intense, so absloutely amazing.
Reviewer: Mommyo2 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 7
Oh, poor sweet, broken boy...that last line literally broke my heart. That is the most pitiful thing I have ever read. :(
Reviewer: Mommyo2 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 5
I absolutely adore this story. Phenomenal job.
Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 33
Aww loved this chapter so much. The meeting with Charlie went well I thought. It was adorable how nervous Edward was giving Bella the flower, very sweet. Of course its Freesia ;) I really liked how bold bella was in dealing with Tanya, that was great! im soo excited to see what happens on their date. Thanks so much for the update, your amazing.
Author's Response: You're welcome, and I'm so happy you liked the chapter. Thank you! :)
Reviewer: lexy lujan (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 33
hahaha, daaauum bella! that was awsome! i loved it; you just made my day.
Author's Response: Aw thank you! :)
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 33
Love Charlie and his storys and The wayBella handled Tanya rocked! Just awesome. UPdate again soon!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! And I've posted the next chap. :)
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 33
that was freaking funny! i hope that tanya has gotten the hint and vack's off, o ri woud complain to the management! what a tramp!
Author's Response: Glad you think it was funny. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lionandthelamblove7 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 33
Ha! I really liked when Charlie was making Bella blush even more than she usually does, oh! And the ending part when Bella's all 'sheman' on Tanya. lol. Who am I kidding? I LOVED IT ALL!!! I can't wait to read more!!
-lionandthelamblove7
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And the next chapter is up. :)
Reviewer: Kairi J (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 33
that's sweet! roses are a little too over done in my opinion. boring, overused and way too symbolic for a first date.
Author's Response: I agree about the roses. Glad you thought it was sweet. Thank you!
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 33
Rofl!!! Hilarious!!!
Author's Response: Happy you liked. :)
Reviewer: baby_pau (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 33
Ohhh!!! i like it, is a great story, i love just the way Bella is always traying to suport Edward, and how their relationship is evolving. The whole issue of child abuse i dont like very much, so i just skip those parts.
Author's Response: I realize some parts of the story isn't for everybody. I'm really happy you like the story though. Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 33
Go Bella....that, was hysterical!
Author's Response: It was, wasn't it? *lol* Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: trixie11 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 33
Call me crazy but I always feel kinda bad for Tanya in stories. I mean, she is usually a nice girl who is just trying to land that mega-hottie Edward!! Can any of us girls really fault her for that? :-)
Author's Response: I think it's safe to say no one should blame her for that. :) Actually, I don't have a problem with Tanya in the books. But I know that in most fics, she gets portrayed as a mega bitch. I had originally planned to use Jane in this chapter instead of Tanya, but then I changed my mind. Anyway, thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 33
Way to go Bella! lol (I hope Tanya doesn't spit in her latte!)
Author's Response: Let's hope she doesn't... ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 33
“Um, hello? Are you capable of taking a simple order without molesting your customers, or do we have to file a complaint and take it up with your pimp?” ... That is so funny..I'm glad she stood up to the bitch!
Author's Response: I have a feeling Edward's glad as well. :) Happy you liked it. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 33
"chop, chop" ? bit much- no?
Author's Response: Think so? Maybe, maybe not. Bella won't let anyone ogle her man. :)
Reviewer: bellacullen76 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 33
I've never reviewed a story before even though I've read several stories on this site. I have to say that this might be my favorite one. Thanks for all of your hard work writing this. I have to say that I don't picture the same characters in my mind that I see when I've read Twilight and other fanfics. This is a story that I could see published with its own characters.
Thank you.
Author's Response: You're very welcome, and thank YOU, for leaving such a nice review. Your words really mean a lot to me.
Reviewer: Meikela (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 33
LMAO! Chop chop indeed. :-) Have I told you yet how utterly in love with this story I am? You do such a brilliant job of portraying a broken Edward and an insecure, yet caring Bella. I have 35 alerts in my inbox at the moment for other stories, but I jump to read this one first everytime. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for your kind words about my story. I'm so happy you like it so much. :)
Reviewer: bookluver (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 33
I love this story
Write more
Author's Response: Another chapter is up, hope you'll like it. Thank you. :)
Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 33
Go Bella! Loved the strop at Tanya, lol.
Author's Response: Glad you loved it, thanks. :)
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 33
hahahahahahahahahhahahahahaah too fucking funny .
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed. :)
Reviewer: francy_princess (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 33
cant wait 4 the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Well it's up now. :) Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 33
My goodness what has gotten into BElla asertiveness to the max.
Author's Response: She stands up for her man. :) Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: RaeCullen (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 33
Awww that was seriously so sweet. He's so cute bringing her flowers! God I died laughing at what Bella said to the waitress. Too funny. I cant wait to see Edward's reaction to that!
Author's Response: So happy you liked that part! :) Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: AlexaET (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 33
I hate it!!!!!!!!! No the chapter Nilla, don't get me wrong!!!!!!!!! The chapter I like it a lot! What I hate it's that I was wrong all along and Edward indeed brought a flower to Bella! It's not that I don't like to lose but..... mmmm...... yeah I don't like to lose hahahahaha......
I really like the 'interaction' between Edward and Charlie, I'm glad Edward was brave enough and that Charlie was nice enough, so there! Poor Bella was sweating bullets, at least something went right :D
I hope to see more of the date next chapter tough!
The only tiny bity wity think that was not my favourite was the first part hahahaha...... it just felt like half of the chapter was prolonguing the date and it didn't gave me any new peace of information I didn't know, Bella it's really taken with Edward and hopes one day he can love her back, I knew that, she will stand by his side and bla bla bla, I knew that!
Oh and the one thing I was smiling so big it's that she didn't let Alice help her! That was amazing!! That's why I like this Bella soooo much!
Well Nilla can't wait for next chapter, I'll keep my dress on for the date :D
Peace Out!
Author's Response: *lol* You made me worried there for a moment, I'm relieved you didn't hate the chapter. :) More of the date in the next chap, thanks for reviewing!
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