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Reviewer: AlexaET (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 34

Finally the complete 'truth' is out!

It was just so sad, poor Edward, but at the same time as soon as Bella figured it out I sighed with relief....she needed to know the truth, in my opinion they couldn't start a true relationship without her knowing everything.

I don't know what is going to happen next, but I can't wait to find out, cause it's going to blow my mind.... this story always do....

You're the greates Nilla!

Reviewer: Twilight_Fanatic123 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 34

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!! :D

I'm so glad it's finally out in the open. Of course, it will take a while for Edward to heal - or even improve - but I've been waiting for this for like, 10 chapters! :)

YAY!!!!

Reviewer: Sara0123 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 34

whoa intence chappy. The way she found out was great (minus what she found out of course) because I couldn't really see Edward come out and tell her. I thought this chapter was briliantly written :) awww she is giving him a hug can't wait for next chapter

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 34

Aww...good Bella!

Reviewer: PINKSAPPHYR (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 34

Whoof.....That was a hard one, especially the end.......But completely necessary i must say..

Keep writing, you're doing a great job

Until the next update ;)

Reviewer: Leanne (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 34

I think you done that perfectly, anything more 'scripted' where he planned to tell her wouldn't have seemed as right as this did. Well done.

Reviewer: Ramona89 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 34

Finally she knows what happened to Edward, well not all the details, but she gets the picture.

And she reacts like everyone, but Edward, knows. She doesn't run away... You Bella is really strong and I like that...

You shouldn't be nervous. It was a great chapter.

Reviewer: pugsmomma (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 34

Such a great chapter - each one gets better and better, though I never expect that it could possibly.

Amazing story!

Reviewer: cullenarymasen (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 34

Great chapter.  Very well written.  You shouldn't be nervous about it, Bella needed to know.

Reviewer: litttlelizzy (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 34

That was a wonderful chapter! Very emotional I really think that was the best way for her to find out now maybe he can start to learn and heal.

Reviewer: usagicullen (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 34

Amazing chapter. I loved the last few sentences the most. "Only deep, genuine sorrow." Such a perfect line.

I think this chapter was very well written. It all seemed very genuine and realistic. Bella's reactions and Edward's reactions fit the situation. Bella would have understood what Edward was trying to say and Edward was so tired of hiding things. 

Great job and can't wait for the next chapter. Poor Edward needs more than a hug.

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 34

that was a surprise ... excellent though ... very emotional but believable

Reviewer: radioActive (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 34

I think you did perfectly...now these kids can really work forward.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 34

"To my astonishment, I could see neither pity, nor repulsion there. Only deep, genuine sorrow."... I've been so nervous about how Bella would find out, and I'm so glad she is there for him and it's all out in the open. Now, perhaps, he can begin to heal.

"And then, almost like in slow motion, she put her arms around me."....So perfect!

Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 34

I can definatly understand why this chapter took some time to write. Scary. heartwrenching. tragic. Will he ever be able to be even somewhat normal? I am afraid you are going to end up having to write 1000 chapters before he is ever at a point where she can give hima chaste kiss let alone a real romance. I feel for them both. It is painful. I am by the way glad they left and went to the meadow. It fits them. looking forward to your next post thanks

Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 34

Wow, I'm speechless. What a fantastic chapter. I never expected Bella to figure out Edward's problems and it worked perfectly. Edward didn't have to say the words out loud, for now. Thanks for such a great story and excellent chapter, you did a great job with a tough subject. I appreciate you sharing your story, I really enjoy reading it.

Reviewer: jaime12576 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 34

What a great chapter and honestly it felt very real. I'm glad Bella knows to an extent what Edward went through. I hope this story helps people who are reading it and who might have gone through something like this see they are the survivor ( I hate the word victim) and can maybe start to heal.

  I know a few chapters back you said people were complaining your chapters weren't long enough.  I say ignore them. I appreciate that you don't put a bunch of filler in your story.  I know when I read the newest chapter I will be getting only the best of your hard work.  Keep up the great writing.

Reviewer: santa muerte (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 34

 

So glad she knows everything. Hope Edward doesn't push her away, but whatever happens, I'll be here to find out. Great chapter. Update soon.

Reviewer: kitty2 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 34

I'm so glad she finally knows the extent of Edward's abuse, now... I have no idea where they're going to go from here, but I'm anxious to find out :)

Reviewer: erinnnzomg (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 34

This was the perfect combination of awkward and heartbreaking. I loved how the truth came out in this.

erinzomg

Reviewer: Bluecanoe (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 34

It was heartbreaking, but honest.  I'm relieved that she was able to see the truth, and he needs to know that she can see the truth and it changes nothing about the way she feels.  I hope he does?

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 34

This chapter was so sad and painful to read, but very well written. I think you represent Edward as a child of sexual abuse so well. I didn't expect Bella to find out this way, but I think you did a really good job of presenting this situation. You can tell the love they have for each other. Can't wait until the next chapter!

Reviewer: AltheaJ (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 34

Great reveal!

Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 34

LOVE LOVE LOVE

Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 34

Poor Edward! I thought the way Edward revealed his being raped was perfect for his character... and I'm glad Bella figured it out b/c it would have hurt worse if he would have had to spell it out to her! I can't wait to read on! xx

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