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Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 35

180 reviews and you deserve every last one of them! :)

Such a beautiful, heart-felt chapter. Bella always seems to instinctively know exactly how far she can push Edward before he breaks, but in a caring and productive way. It sounds like no-one has ever found the right balance before in pushing Edward to heal in a way that isn't going to put him so far outside his comfort zone that he falls apart.

I really felt for Edward when he expected Bella to be repulsed by him - of course those of us whom have never experienced that kind of abuse can't really understand the mentality that it was somehow his fault, but I can imagine that someone so impressionable of the age he was could be manipulated into thinking he deserved it. :(

Looking forward to reading more...not expecting a smooth ride but this story is just so granular and deep :)



Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I can't tell you how glad I am that you liked the chapter. Another will be up soon.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 35

I'm just waiting for Edward to come to terms and call Bella his girlfriend. I know that probably won't happen for awhile since the revelation, but still, a girl can hope. Love Bella's comforting nature! It's exactly what Edward needs even if he is a little hostile. He has every right to be though.



Author's Response: Yes. Let's just hope he'll keep letting Bella in. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 35

II think you're doing such a great job with Edward and Bella and how they are slowly crossing that bridge Edward has been so afraid to even go near. I can only imagine what a person would really be like in this situation.



Author's Response: I can only imagine as well. Thank you so much for the review! :)

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 35

I can't wait for more. Hopefully things won't be so sad next chapter? :(



Author's Response: We'll just have to wait and see... ;) More coming soon. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 35

Woow....

*sigh* slowly as we go. Now there's been hugging! lol whew these chapters are killing me too...



Author's Response: Sorry about that. *lol* Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 35

WOW that was a kickass chapter!! It was amazing. I am absolutly thrilled at how you are revealing everything, its great that Edward's secret is out so that he can see that Bella is gonna be there thru thick and thin. Fabulous my dear...



Author's Response: You're too kind. :) Thank you!

Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 35

Oh wow this chapter was unbelievable! It was written so beautifully. Their embrace was just ahh omg I loved so much that Edward didnt push her away and just cried. Wowww I really loved it! Everytime i think one chapter is so amazing, i get blown away with the next one :) Thanks so much for the fast update, so cant wait to read more!



Author's Response: You're most welcome, and thank you so much for your kind review. More coming soon. :)

Reviewer: Kairi J (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 35

you last statement for this chapter was very powerful. it touched a nerve in me, as well as Edward. great story!



Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 35

Yeah but all moms are not made the same. Excellent chapter very draining, but definitely a moving forward chapter.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, thank you!

Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 35

As good as the previous chapter! Bella is handling the situation beautifully,


 



Author's Response: So happy you think so. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: edwardcullenlover22 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 35

:)

Reviewer: loveswirl (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 35

Jeez, my heart hurts for them both. This story moves me, so much! Great chapter and it is so good to see that Edward had his breakdown, cause we all know he needed it!!!! Thanks for the words.



Author's Response: You're welcome, and thank you very much for leaving a review!

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 35

i love you seriously you are brilliant :D i want to give him a huge hug for going through everything he has gone through and continues to go through :( and then bella for being good for him and for losing her mom :( i just think that edward is soooooo much better off with bella in his life



Author's Response: He really is. :) Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: persuasion72 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 35

wonderful way to incorporate the meadow scene - the revelation of Edward's past as well as his fears about her expectations in a physical relationship

Edward doesn't know "how to be" with Bella, but she is willing to accept what he has to give



Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed the meadow part. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 35

OoO...Excellent, as always!



Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 35

Awesome chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: CanadianMommmyX2 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 35

I hope you do let us know about his birth mom.  I know from the glimpses into Edward's past that she was aware of what was going on, but what happened to her?  I hope we find out what led him to being with the Cullens.  I really enjoyed this chapter and the interaction between Bella and Edward.



Author's Response: Thank you! And I promise you'll find out a bit more eventually

Reviewer: fretgirl (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 35

I need Edward to resume therapy ASAP! Otherwise, I'll be seeking some professional help of my own.....

Great story, love the chapter!



Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 35

This chapter was really touching (no pun intented).  You handled it very well.  Our dear Edward is making baby steps forward.  Your Bella is amazing in her depth of character and caring.  Lovely story (despite the horror). :)



Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 35

Great Chapter! Wow. Bella has a lot on her plate, hope she can handle it, or maybe convince Edward into some productive therapy.



Author's Response: We'll see. :) Glad you liked the chapter, thank you!

Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 35

though the entire post spans only a very short amount of time it covers quite a bit of info. I need to read it again but I do really love the gradual breaking down of Edwards walls by Bella. Thanks for the post I am sure it was not an easy on to write. Looking forward to your next one.



Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing, another chapter will be up shortly.

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 35

What a wildly emotional chapter. I love EPOV you write him so awesome!



Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much. I try. :)

Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 35

another awsome chapter thanks



Author's Response: You're welcome, and thank you!

Reviewer: baby_pau (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 35

wow!!!! i like their reactions to the embrace!!! I like the chapter, small but good!!!. And the strong ending !!!!



Author's Response: Thank you! So happy you liked it.

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 35

poor boy made major progress today



Author's Response: Indeed. Thanks for the review.

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