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Reviewer: team rob (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 5
cute
Reviewer: team rob (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 2
i think i will like this story
Reviewer: Belli (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 35
I don't usually review because i suck at them, as i have a lot to say which gets all muddled with emotions and trying to work out the plot blah blah blah.
So all i really want to say is that I'm glad/hoping that Bella is going seek advice from an adult because there are so many damn ff stories where these teenagers, who are up to their necks in trouble, try to sort things out on their own. But who will she ask?
Author's Response: I agree. Keep reading and we'll see what happens. :) Thanks so much for your review!
Reviewer: wazzoes (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 35
so beautifully written
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so happy you think so. :)
Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 35
wow such an emotional rollercoaster, great story
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: ifka (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 34
I know very little about psychology or how people would react after being abused, so can't really comment on that. All I can say is that this chapter was very moving and well written.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 35
im sure that bella is wondering why the mother didn't do anything?! i mean what a horrible thing to do! i hope they both die and rot!
Author's Response: I son't blame you for feeling like that. Thanks for your review!
Author's Response: I don't blame you for feeling like that. Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Fesh (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 35
"Bella was still mourning the loss of her mom. So how could I possibly tell her that I wished my mother was dead as well?"
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 35
That wasn't so hard now, was it? It lessens the power of the past over Edward.
Author's Response: Let's hope so. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 35
whew!!!! just finshed all these chaps...i really how u progressed this story step by step. u didn't rush edward and bella into anything. you are letting them progress slowly and allowing edward to come to his own terms with bella. you hear crazy stuff about what children go through but very rarely do you hear what happens with the child after the abuse....this story is so enlightening. you have truly outdone yourself and i commend you on your awesome talent.....
Author's Response: Your kind words mean a lot to me, thank you! :)
Reviewer: catthomas32 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 35
Again, beautifully, handled.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks!
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 35
Wow, so far for him although far from through. Thank you for letting us in to see it all.
Achilles
Author's Response: You're welcome. And thank you!
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 35
So much has happened in the last three chapters! I cannot wait to see what happens in the next!
xoxo
Author's Response: Next chap should be up soon. Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: laylaywo (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 35
These last two chapters were awesomely written. Such insight into that situation. Not only into the feelings of divulging a secret like that but the feeling that a significant other feels when hearing that their loved one has been so hurt. Very powerful! And good for you! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 35
wow Bella was really intuarie to realise exactly what Edward had been through. i think his responce was typical but he r ecovered pretty quickly.
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 35
wow Bella was really intuarie to realise exactly what Edward had been through. i think his responce was typical but he r ecovered pretty quickly.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: lissy82 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 35
SOOOO really Good!!!! i mean just heart breaking. I honestly say that was best way should could of found out. Imagining any other way would not have worked.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really happy you enjoyed it, even though it was heartbreaking. :)
Reviewer: beacullen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 35
Wow that was a good chapter, Thanks
Author's Response: You're welcome, I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you!
Reviewer: iwannabe (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 35
WOW, that was really powerful. I am anxious to see how far along Edward will be revealing his secrets. I can only imagine it would be like trying to unsnarl thin gold chains that have been hopelessly tied together in knots. Painstaking and frustrating on both counts. Bella sure has her work cut out for her.... Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)
Reviewer: jennrae (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 35
You write so beautifuly! Thank you for this story and expressing the pain. And consquences of sexual abuse to children.our family has experienced this and although we refuse to let this experience define our child - they are so much more than their abuse- it has forever changed them. Looking forward to the next update. I am lemonmartinis on twitter.
Author's Response: Aw thank you so much. Your words mean a lot. More coming real soon.
Reviewer: GlitterInMyHeart (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 35
I know spamming you with "MORE" won't really help, but I can't help but try.
Ill take my impatient ass somewhere else till the nxt chapters up =D
great chapter
Author's Response: *lol* I don't mind. Just posted next chapter for validation. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 35
god how i love this story, it's so heart felt and emotional which you have nailed completly bty, bella seems to know instinctivly what to do to calm and help edward, now she knows and he begins to be reasured that she is not going anywhere, their moment was beautiful as it proved this to him and allowed bella to trust him not to run again, thanks, cant wait for more tracy
Author's Response: More coming soon, thank you so much for your review!
Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 35
another great chapter. You had me nervous at the teaser I thought Edward was going to reject her. I am so glad that was not the case. I still have my fears that Bella is going to hurt him unintentionally. Only because everything is offensive to him and it takes him a minute to realize that she is only trying to help him. She also pushes a little too much. I am glad that he now believes that she will not go anywhere because I know she wont. She loves him too much and she wants him to get better. When they actually get to a point where he can be romantic with her it will be so sweet. She will be the one making it special for him. I feel so bad for him and I hope before the end of this story he can face his fears and live a happy and somewhat normal life.
Author's Response: I'm very happy you liked the chapter. Thank you very much! :)
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 35
Oh, so well done! I just read it a second time because yesterday night I received the update right before bed.
I guess most of the shock will come for Bella when she's alone in her bedroom, when she has the chance to think about this when she's alone? I hope Edward will send her a text, or she to him. He needs to know that they're okay, again.
Any idea how many chapters are still left? I'm just asking because you've already 35, which is a nice amount, but there's so much more to happen, so I'm looking forward to a very high chaptered fic?
And no, that's not a 'you should put more in your chapters' thing like some people have been saying. Write it the way it's natural to you. We don't need 10k chapters each week or something. Not all of us do. In fact, I think it's a nice length for chapters, so don't change it. ;)
See ya soon!
Spikey
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, and I'm glad you think the length of the chapters is ok. Sorry, but I have no idea how long the story will be. Many have asked, and I just don't know. I'll keep writing until I feel there's no need for more. I once wrote a 96-chapter Spuffy story (the chaps were a lot shorter but still) so I can go on for quite a while if necessary. *lol*
Reviewer: francy_princess (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 35
cant wait 4the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: I'll hopefully be able to post next chapter tomorrow. Thanks for reviewing!
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