Hey again, Nilla,
I just hope you all realize how much I appreciate your wonderful reviews, even if I just give you a simple 'thanks for reviewing' in return.
Sweetie, do you know how much we appreciate you giving us a simple 'thanks for reviewing' line? Cos we do. There's so many people out there who don't even do that, so when someone does, we just love them. ^^
Writing is one part, the reviews is what you kind of do it for, it's your only payment, but for us a 'thanks for reviewing' is the payment we get for taking the time to drop off a message. And again, it's da bomb that you care so much for trying to give us something back after writing for us. *kissyface*
So instead of calling, I had settled for sending him a text message, just telling him I hoped he was all right and that I’d see him soon.
I love that you listened to me about this! :-D
Aka I mentioned either in a review or perhaps even on the forum that I hoped she'd at least text him to reconfirm she's not running from him. She really needed to do that. Even if he didn't read it at night because he was asleep, but woke up to it in the morning.
And then she gets all panicky that he doesn't reply. I checked back to the last lines of Edward, because I knew that there was one of the POVs in which sleeping or bed was mentioned, but I saw it was Bella that didn't get to sleep much, rather than perhaps the 'Edward slept somewhat well' that I was hoping I'd see. If he was still in bed, then perhaps he wasn't too stressed about her knowing, that he was comforted in the fact she didn't seem to want to run away yet. I hope he did sleep well.
Phil wants to sell the house. Right. Well, it's hard living in it, I'm sure. How would that go money-wise? If the house belonged to Bella's mom, since she grew up there, does that mean the money is hers? Or a part of it is? Did Phil help with the downpayment? Hmm... Complicated.
I'm happy Edward reached his hand out towards her, and that he took her upstairs away from the others. I wonder what she'll do when they do enter his room. Will she need to be comforted (fly towards him) or will she be slightly horrified again at her appearance? I hope not.
On the forum they've already expressed their desire for Edward to go along on the trip to Phoenix. That would rock, if he gets permission, and if she wants him there. Well, it would hurt her if they were apart, so... And it's not like Edward's parents would have to worry about too intimate stuff happening between them. Heck, they'd be even pleased about that.
A small boo boo or two, if you'd like them?
out for the summer. The we can-“ = Then we?
ended up outside the Cullen’s large house = Cullens' large?
I'd like to hug you for a nice chapter, again, but squish you a bit for letting it end there, because the next one has great potential. :-P
I'm looking forward to more. See ya next time, or on the forum, if I make it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your long review and interesting comments. And for pointing out those two little mistakes, I've changed them now. *blush* I really appreciate it. :)