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Reviewer: StoryPainter (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 38
Yay! Go Edward! I'm like a proud mamma bear here :-) You cointinue to knock my socks off with each chapter and I love it. This is my favorite story right now, I swear. It's all kinds of awesome.
Thanks, chica, keep 'em comin'!!
~SP
Reviewer: BellaLovesEdward729 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 38
oh my!!!!!!! first kiss yay!!!! :) cant wait for another!!!!
Reviewer: cullenarymasen (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 38
Finally! Great chapter. Can't wait for your next update.
Reviewer: Leanne (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 38
Yay for Edward!
Reviewer: yameen (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 38
yay edwards first kiss how sweet.
Reviewer: Msarkie (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 38
Oh, this chapter made me tear up! He's come so far.
Reviewer: 3dawns (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 38
I love this story. He is so beautifully broken, not beyond repair.
Reviewer: zoe3 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 38
Oh My Goodness! You can't just leave it there! haha What a wonderful chapter. I love that Edward was able to help Bella emtionally when she needed his support. And I'm doubly glad that he was able to push all the disturbing thoughts to the back of his mind. Thanks for writing! I'm in love w/ your Bella and Edward! :-)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 38
"I wasn’t just kissing a girl. I was kissing Bella. And I never wanted to stop."
I can't tell you how happy this makes me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: AMusefan77 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 38
Wow!! Nor just one but two kisses!! I'm so proud of Edward for taking care of Bella and refusing to allow James to mess up his special moment with her. I wanted to gag when he remembered what James did to him. He's so strong and I was sure it would be a big relief for him to have her know it all. Wonderful. The buildup and Edward's reactions were perfect and realistic. Can't wait to see what Bella was thinking and what she'll decide about going to Phoenix.
Reviewer: lovesam66 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 38
Omg * happy dance* they kissed and he didn't freak out!!! Well didn't freak out majorly this is such a big step for Edward ans Bella!!! I really really love your story it's one in a million!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 38
whoo-hoo!!! HOLY HUGE step!!!
Has Edward ever really had an erection? Hass he had one when looking at a girl? I wonder if he will freak if Bella causes him to have such a physical reaction or not. hhhmmm Can't wait to see.
Reviewer: smithle1 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 38
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Tiffylh4 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 38
All i can say is YEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Finally!
Reviewer: darcybabe (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 38
That was so beautifully handled. I was wondering how you would write this chapter, and as ever, you could never disappoint. Your writing is absolutely amazing, as was Edward. I am so proud of him! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 38
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THEY KISSED, REALLY KISSED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I had to read this chapter three times, it's just TOO good (except the jamesob part of course.. poor edward) but now he is actually thinking he deserves that happyness, I'm so happy for him! I think he was feeling so strong because she was the one needing help this time, and she was after him to get it.
wonderful chap nilla, thanks so very much!!!!
Reviewer: Kitkat918 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 38
yay! first kiss!! i loved it :)
Reviewer: HelsBells (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 38
Oh yey they kissed!
Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 38
I am so glad that Edward is finally starting to see the need in himself by seeing the needs in Bella. It is a delicate line, but one that is difficult if not considered.
They finally kiss. And I am glad that Bella understood when to back off. That is wonderful. I really hope they get their stuff worked out and that they can have their own kind of HEA. It may be a long, difficult road for both of them, but I hope they get it.
Thanks again for a nice chapter. It is smooth in writing. I like where this story is taking us! ~ADT
Reviewer: guineapig (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 38
awwwww wow great chapter, soo glad they kissed :)
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 38
woo-hoo!
*does the happy dance!*
i feel like celebrating our boy's huge milestone! great chapter!
Reviewer: Bled Dry (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 38
Love.
Reviewer: lainarae (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 38
Yay!
Reviewer: SonnieShine (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 38
Yay! Progress! I can't believe how much I adore this fic!
Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 38
YAY!
Don't have much more to say than that.... so I'll say it again.
YAY!
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