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Reviewer: wazzoes (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 38

OMG so touching cant wait for more

Reviewer: lauras1sttime (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 38

OMFG I AM SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW!!!!!!

Finally Edward was able to fight off a flashback (fyi I wanted to stab James even harder than ever over that one sentence flashback) and get something he wanted! :D I'm just so freaking excited!!!!

AMAZING chap girl!

Oh and thanks for the TY : ) I was so happy to do it. I luv you and this story so much! :D

Reviewer: tatie1970 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 38

Yay ! finally ! Sweet chapter, keep this up.

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 38

great interaction; wonderful descriptions & emotions

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 38

This was a great chapter!

I'm glad that Edward was there for Bella and that their relationship is making a little progress. =)

Looking forward to your next chapter!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 38

OMG!!! I'm trying to find words to describe the joy enduced by this chapter, but I can't. I'm so happy Edward and Bella have come to love and trust each other this much. They both have demons in their past that only the other one can help them overcome. Great chapter, can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Nautica7mk (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 38

Woohoo. I'm so glad Edward is willing to atleast try to be intimate with Bella, and I can very well imagine him to one day truly enjoy the act with someone he loves. Through all of his trauma, I'm surpisingly looking forward to his development and self-discovery of true sexual intimacy. He'll be in for a surprise. lol

Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 38

I'm sitting here grinning from ear to ear. They are just so cute together! I'm so glad to see that they're making even more progress, and that Edward seems intent on making his relationship with Bella work. They're just so darn cute...

Reviewer: bookworm7073 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 38

I'll say it again; your story should come with a warning label such as " Caution:  Reading this story will cause freeflowing tears", or " Make sure you have tissues before reading."  So beautiful!

Reviewer: skimbo06 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 38

O Gawd. What has she awoken. I cant wait for more. YAY! :)

Reviewer: usagicullen (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 38

Yay! Good for Edward, nice to see him go forward yet again in his slow process of healing. 

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 38

I just loved that he was there for her when she was upset and needed him.  Again, he surprised me by touching Bella and kissing her.  I didn't expect it.  I am very curious about what will happen next for them.  (I realize I say that a lot.)  But whenever I finish a chapter - I am eager for the next.

Again ...great job!

Reviewer: Star Crossed Lover (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 38

Ahhhhhhhhh! finally!

Reviewer: litttlelizzy (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 38

whoo hoo it is about time!! I love this chapter!

Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 38

Wow a kiss (or few) well done Edward - I'm glad he managed to do that and even knows that it's right with her!!

Achilles

Reviewer: deya (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

OMG OMG OMG Nilla, i'm sooooo happy. This chapter is so beautiful and the first kiss so perfect written.

You are the best :)

Reviewer: KaiaRose (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 38

So beautiful!  I love how Edward and Bella are healing together!

This story is so sad, yet so tender.

Reviewer: AlexaET (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 38

I ..... can't......breath......

I'm hyperventilating at the moment....thanks Nilla *rolling eyes*.....

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!

Speechless.......

Just give me a little while and I will pour my soul in thread....

Reviewer: Fesh (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 38

-squeel- Edward kissed Bella! Edward kissed Bella!! Edward KISSED Bella!!! I really really loved this chapter it was so sweet and awkward and lovely. Has left me with a huge smile on my face. Thankyou for updating!!!

Reviewer: Bluecanoe (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 38

You go Edward!  That was so damn heartwarming, but a kiss is such a HUGE step for Edward, to actually associate something so tender with pleasure and warmth instead of revulsion.  I loved this chapter!

Reviewer: gbasjw (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 38

Sigh - I have a big smile on my face after reading this chapter. Such a sweet potrayal of their new romance & their mutual healing. I just love them together. Thank uou.

Reviewer: twilight15 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 38

Gahhhhhh!!!! I'm totally speechless.... they kissed! yay!

Reviewer: trixie11 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 38

Oh my God! Oh my God! Such a great chapter! I think I was more excited by Edward's first kiss than I was for my own! So sad for me... :( Keep up the awesome writing. YOU ROCK!!!

Reviewer: aswinfor (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 38

Beautiful.  In this totally sad, screwed up story, their first kiss obviously not without drama, but perfect for them.  You wrote it wonderfully.  I ache for both of them.  You are a wonderful writer and I am sooooo happy to have them both at this point.  The way Edward has overcome so much and Bella's help in all of that.  It would be nice if more people like the Bella you've created here truly existed, especially in this age group you're writing about.  I truly love these two characters you've created.  Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: DaisyAllday (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 38

Finally, poor guy.  I've been wanting something to go right for him for so long.  It's depressing to think that this shit actually happens to people and screws up their entire lives.  Hopefully, this Edward will have a very happy ending.

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