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Reviewer: MoriaAngel (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 38

I love the new chapter, and the kissing!!  Ohlala!! 

Thank you sweety :)

Reviewer: beacullen (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 38

Aww, these two are soo cute together, their innocense is heartwrenching, and Edwards hurt is so deep and hard to take.  I'm glad he made the decision to fight back against his fear.  Thanks for the great chapter

Reviewer: Kairi J (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 38

It's about freakin' time, haha. Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Martimolius (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 38

can't wait t'ill the next chapter!

love the story

x

Reviewer: crazy1962 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 38

Awesome chapter, I am so glad he is finally getting some comfort in his life all be it slow go he is making progress with Bella. I just love this story and am looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Nightchill (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 38

wow! talk about progress! I hope it doesn't come crashing down on him and Bella later

Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 38

Utter perfection!!  I am all choked up and I hardly ever get that way.   So happy he was able to push past the horrible memories to create something wonderful with Bella.  Thanks for the update. 

Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 38

OH MY GOODNESS!!!! I cant believe he made that leap!! I cant believe he kissed Bella. This is the best thing that has happened!! I am so excited that he was able to get past the shit James has put him through to be able to kiss Bella and enjoy it. I know this wont be easy for him but it is a huge hurdle. I get sad sometimes when I read this story because I know sick things like this happens to little children all the time but to think that they are able to grow up and be a positive person and live a normal life even though they have experienced something so horrible is a relief. I am so proud of Edward. It was so nice that he was able to put aside his troubles and help Bella through her problems even though they are super minor compared to the issues he has to deal with on a day to day basis. Edward is so strong and i dont think he even realizes it. This chapter was AMAZING Nilla and I am very happy about the progression. Cant wait for the next update!! They are always better than I can ever imagine!!

Reviewer: lord periperi (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 38

my feelings just got a meltdown of their own...this chapter was like a rollercoast ride, and when i felt i was on top of the world when he cuddled her, you brought it up a notch!

therapy's next to tackle,i suppose? ;)

Reviewer: RaeCullen (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 38

Eeeep! Their first kiss!!!! It was so perfect for them!! Le sigh. I love you Lonerward. So sweet. Thank you!

Reviewer: MJ Mason-Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 38

yeah:):):):) more more more pleeeeeease I love it thankx:):)

Reviewer: radioActive (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 38

Yay!  These poor kids totally deserve this!

Reviewer: Meikela (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 38

Yay!!!! I'm so glad he took the risk! I'm cheering over here in my chair. :-) I know we have a long way to go, but progress is progress.

Reviewer: Ramona89 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 38

Finally! There first kiss.

And it's so great that Edward tries to forget about James and what he did to him and still feels comfortable with Bella.

Perhaps he now realises that a therapy could help him deal with his past?

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 38

Hooray! Small step but so very important! I really love this story. It  is both horrifying and inspirational. The connection, the way they complement each other, the empathy is lovely. Thank you

Reviewer: jemappellegenevieve (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 38

uhh...we need a 'like' button on here like they have on facebook.... LIKE!

Reviewer: Twilight_Fanatic123 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 38

Yay! I'm SO happy about the ending! The fact that they kissed AND the fact that Edward is slowly but surely becoming more comfortable about himself and his relationship with Bella. It makes me all warm and fuzzy inside! :)

I'm looking forward to more! Don't keep me waiting TOO long...

Reviewer: jacmom (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 38

AWESOME!!!

Reviewer: TammyCullen (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 38

Oh! I love their first Kiss!! I want more!

 

Tam

Reviewer: wazzoes (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 38

OMG so touching cant wait for more

Reviewer: lauras1sttime (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 38

OMFG I AM SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW!!!!!!

Finally Edward was able to fight off a flashback (fyi I wanted to stab James even harder than ever over that one sentence flashback) and get something he wanted! :D I'm just so freaking excited!!!!

AMAZING chap girl!

Oh and thanks for the TY : ) I was so happy to do it. I luv you and this story so much! :D

Reviewer: tatie1970 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 38

Yay ! finally ! Sweet chapter, keep this up.

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 38

great interaction; wonderful descriptions & emotions

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 38

This was a great chapter!

I'm glad that Edward was there for Bella and that their relationship is making a little progress. =)

Looking forward to your next chapter!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 38

OMG!!! I'm trying to find words to describe the joy enduced by this chapter, but I can't. I'm so happy Edward and Bella have come to love and trust each other this much. They both have demons in their past that only the other one can help them overcome. Great chapter, can't wait for the next update!

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