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Reviewer: BHBabe (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 38
That was really nice. Thank you for the chapter.
Reviewer: KatVal (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 38
AAHHHHHHH! this is so exciting! i'm doing a happy dance for Edward! YAY! YAY! YAY! My heart aches so much for him.... I'm glad that Bella is replacing the horrible memories that James created with something positive and wonderful! GO BELLA! Please update soon and often... this story is definitely something that I can't get enough of.
Reviewer: itsyblue (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 38
Oh they are making progress. So sweet. Hope Bella is what Edward needs to push the horrid memories away.
Reviewer: livindol (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 38
Oh, the poor guy. I feel so bad for him...I really hope he can overcome this... I truly love this story...
Reviewer: santa muerte (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 38
Great chapter. Gives me hope. As alway wonderful job, looking forward to the next update.
Reviewer: laylaywo (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 38
Brilliantly written. That is all I got. Just fantastic timing, thought process, voice. Great job.
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 38
OMG!!! This is such a big step for him. I was actually crying for him. So happy he allowed himself this intimacy. Such a beautiful chapter. His evolution is more noticeable now. Thanks for that.
Reviewer: christine83 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 38
Yea! They finally kissed!!
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 38
:) Great chapter. But I hate James!
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 38
I think this has to be my favourite chapter so far!
Reviewer: mayghen12 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 38
Yay!!! they kissed i am so happy. can't wait until next update.
Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 38
Aww come on you end it right in the middle of them making out!! *pouts all alice like* NO FAIR lol! I can't wait to see what happens next!! :D Although I really wish he could start opening up to Alice and Emmett too :( I don't like Emmett and Edward not liking each other...Can't wait for another update!!!
Reviewer: wheelscpa (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 38
just when i thought it couldn't possibly get any worse - his past - you drop that additional bomb! wow - how fucked up could this james be! I actually cried at that one - dammit! as much as i want edward to bo ok and for this to work out for the two of them, in real life it just doesn't seem possible. this edward would be far to gone - angry as hell - and probably wouldn't be able to ever have anything but fucked up relationships in his life - including carrying on his own abusive tendencies in those relationships. coming back down to the fact that this is fiction and that this is also bella - i have hope that she will once again be able to be what he needs and save him and his family once again. *sigh* i have several stories i'm following, but i find myself waiting on the edge of my seat for this one to posted. good job.
Reviewer: dazzled09 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 38
Awww so good! I loved the chapter and I'm glad they are making progress and he said his girlfriend yay!
Reviewer: nbpowlk (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 38
aww lovely.
except for that james bit what a pedophile
Reviewer: allyjay67 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 38
yeah, at last..........they kiss. Way to go Edward.
Reviewer: Pat1983 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 38
Aww these two are so cute together!
Love this story so much, and also the fact that you update often is awesome!
Great update, glad that Edward is finally finding the strentgh to fight back and take control of his life...
Thank you so much for this story!
Reviewer: Tralalaura (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 38
FABULOUS!!!! "That was when it occurred to me. I was actually kissing a girl. No, scratch that; I wasn’t just kissing a girl. I was kissing Bella. And I never wanted to stop." My favorite line!!! Amazing, look how far Edward has come!!! Post the next chapter soon or I might just explode!!!
Reviewer: UrbanAngel (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 38
yaya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! go edward go! you're taking care of her and you decided to not give this asshole james power over this! this is sooo good! i'm proud of you! and you know: kissing's great ain't it?! :D
Reviewer: queeniescar (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 38
yay! they kissed! so so good. thank you x
Reviewer: hayleyjane (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 38
SQUUUUEEEEEE! I'm so happy for them :)
Reviewer: angel27eyes (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 38
HELL YEAH!! Their first kiss!!! you just made my day! I've been having a rollercoaster of a week and you have put a huge smile on my face!!!
Reviewer: candycane323 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 38
Aww, I'm SO glad they kissed. I bet they will both be so happy, and I think they both needed something happy. Great chapter!!!
Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 38
YAYAYAYAYAY!!!
They kissed, they kissed, they kissed!! *reads again* and Edward kissed her again!!!!!! I loved this chapter! *squeals* I hope Edward keeps getting stronger :)
Reviewer: Ready4Jasper (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 38
perfect.
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