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Reviewer: pluekaymapropayvee (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 38
about freaking time! haha.
that was a good chapter, they've made a lot of progress :)
Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 38
Wonderful chapter!!
Reviewer: bettin_on_alice (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 38
eep! i seriously love this story. i feel bad for edward though cuz he can't do anything normal because stupid james. grr. but thank you for updating! can't wait for the next chapter:)!
Reviewer: staryeyegal2004 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 38
o yay!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 38
Bella and Edward are busting through walls together. Totally awesome!!!! I'm very interested to see how sex/lust will addressed in their relationship.
Reviewer: therunaway (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2010 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 38
YES THIS IS SO EXCITING! I'M SO HAPPY TO SEE HE KISSED HER!
Edward is evolving/healing into such a wonderful man!
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 38
This is the sound of me screaming. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh, my God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
He did it!!! So seriously worth the wait!!! And sooo sweet. This chapter was a rollercoaster of will he/won't he. But he found the courage and he did. And of course, it's Bella. Not some random girl. His first kiss, with the (who are we kidding here??) love of his life. Yay!! I'm so proud of lonerward. And I'm a bit concerned (in a good way) over his last line...And I never wanted to stop. I think I could deal with that. LOLOLOLOLOLOL...sleep well, Nilla, knowing you made ALOT of people VERY happy tonight. :)
Reviewer: seattlegirl (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 38
Yeah for Edward!!
Reviewer: Edwardina (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 38
I LOVE that he made a conscious choice to not let James control his life. This is wonderful! So realistic, so healing. Thank you for writing it.
Reviewer: carbella02 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 38
Yes!!!! Love it!!!
Reviewer: monimolina (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 38
Yeeeeeeeeesssssss!!!!!! Oh my Gosh! This is so great!!!!! Thank you so much, this chapter was amazing. I am so excited... They finally kissed!!! And he loved it! That is so great! Thanks a bunch, I loved this chapter. They are getting so much closer and he is really trusting her now and the way that you're developing their story is so sweet... Can't wait for next chapter!
Reviewer: maria111 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 38
i cant believe you cut that chapter and you left us wondering what is going to happend LOL i am glad edward comfort bella i was getting a bit tired all the time to see bella doing it and i am glad edward realise he still has the strength to continue...
update as soon as possible i am dying here to read nex chapter :)
Reviewer: Schlager G (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 38
Best first kiss ever!
Reviewer: coldplaystalker (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 38
FINALLY!!!!!! HE KISSES HER!!!!
Reviewer: Bella Alice Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 38
Am so happy with the way you are taking the story an looking forward to what happens next, am hoping Edward keeps moving forward x
Reviewer: xxxCassiexxx (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 38
I may have gone squeeeee at the end of this chapter.... maybe just a little :)
Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 38
Beautifully done! I’m proud of Edward he didn’t allow James poison this big moment.
Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 37
I have to side here with Phill; Bella has no right to anchor him to the past when she flew away!
Reviewer: stage_left4life (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 38
awww man, i can't believe you ended it there... *sigh* i really love this story
Reviewer: martha (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 38
awww....love it!
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 38
OH wonderful.....They are truly getting there.
Reviewer: twiggs66 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 38
Yea! What a sweet way to introduce Edward to kissing. Great chapter, I thought for a second that Edward would sink back into the darkness, thank god he didn't, FINALLY he's getting a little bit of happiness. Looking forward to the next chapter and the reaction from both sides..
Reviewer: Buniq (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 38
best chapter yet! i am so glad that he was able to push aside all of the bad thoughts and live in the moment. GREAT KISS!
Reviewer: justjanice (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 38
Great chapter!!! : D
Reviewer: twifan20 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 38
OMG!! I'm so proud of and happy for Edward! I love that he wouldn't let James ruin their moment!
Thank you for such a wonderful chapter!
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