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Reviewer: Martimolius (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 39
OMG so heartbreaking
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Reviewer: jacmom (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 38
loved it!
Reviewer: jacmom (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 39
thanks for updating, excellent chapter!
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 39
He breaks my heart. Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: Ibblet (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 39
awwww! poor poor...all of them......so wonderful
Reviewer: wazzoes (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 39
porr Bella and Carlisle and poor Edward
Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 39
Omg that was so hearbraking to read! Bella admitted shes in love with Edward only to have him run away, so sad. Im glad she told him though. Edwards and Carlisles convo was intense, I feel so bad for both of them. I cant wait to see what happens next!! Thanks sooo much for the update!! Your amazing! :)
Reviewer: janlb123 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 39
Thank you - yet another great chapter of this wonderful story!
How typical of Edward's distorted world view, that he yet again pushes away anything that threatens to break down a little more of the barriers he's put up. It must be terrifying for him to accept love, which will of course make him more vulnerable than he already is.
I know someone in RL who suffered only a fraction of the abuse that Edward has in this story, and have seen just how devastating to self-esteem any level of abuse can be. This fic rings true, from what I've seen.
Update soon, please!
Reviewer: Mommyo2 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 39
That was a very sad chapter. I cried with Carlisle in the end. I feel so bad for Edward, I just wish he could see himself the way Bella and Carlisle and Esme do.
Reviewer: tatie1970 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 39
OK Carlisle, perhaps you can't fix it but you surely can be of assistance here. Great chapter.
Reviewer: ast (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 39
awwww. ... why Edward always regards himself so....... lowly..... and unworthy..... I really hope he starts seeing himself clearly.... also I don't want him to break up with Bella.... :(
update soon.... :)
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 39
Sad but a point I think Carlisle and him had to confront.
Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 39
*slams head into desk....then bows down on her knees in front of you* Please please update soon!! I absolutely love this story!!!!! Sad yes and I am sad it happened to Edward and not Bella but still i'm addicted to this story!!!
Oh and I know you should be updating instead of answering reviews, we all want an update faster but, on FF and on here, do they have the same chapters or is one ahead of the other? That's happened before so i just wanted to know :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. :) There are as many chapters up on both ff and here, but I always post the chapter at this site first. Then I post at ff as soon as it's been through validation.
Reviewer: stage_left4life (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 39
omg! cant wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: iwannabe (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 39
Oh man, that had to hurt Carlisle. Here he is trying to do his best and Edward just can't accept that someone could love him. Sigh....
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 39
Unfortunately, I'm not surprised that he ran...so sad!
Reviewer: SonnieShine (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 39
Aww We all love you Brokenward! And I for one loved this update, especially coming so soon after the last! Can't wait for another!
Reviewer: yellowdandylions (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 39
ohhh..
very sad
Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 39
o edward is just tugging at my heart. he's never had anyone admit they loved him...it's up to his family to help him understand his new found feelings...carlilse didn't fail him but i know the family could've tried a lot harder with edward instead of just letting him be. great chapter
Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 39
Wow! What a revelation for Carlisle to know that Edward doesn't feel like anyone loves him! So sad! :(
Reviewer: beacullen (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 39
Oh my , that is just sooooo sad, I feel bad for all of them. Man is it ever gonna be just a happy time for them all? Thanks for the great chapter.
Reviewer: AlexaET (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 39
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!
How could u ended like this Nilla!
OMG.....amazing chapter! Amazing!
I feels sorry for all of them, Bella, Carlisle and most of them all Edward....
But for once I feel ok with this development. I think it has to happen for things to move forward. For Bella to understand Edward it's indeed in need of help (which I'm sure she isn't oblivious of), for Edward to realize he need the help himself....
I don't know, maybe Bella will decide to go to Phoenix, and the separation will be beneficial for both of them. A little time apart, a lot of thinking....
Love it Nilla....without words :D
I need a hug.......
Peace Out!
Reviewer: Pebbles_and_Pink (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 39
This has got to be one of the most heart breaking things I have ever read in the Twilight fandom. I just want to curl up and cry or grab Edward in a hug and never let him go. Beautiful chapter Nilla, I cannot wait to see how you resolve all of this.
Reviewer: Belli (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 39
you can't just end it there!
Reviewer: x_darla_x (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 39
Yeah- Carlisle did fail him, if he never let Edward know that he was/is loved. What an idiot!
Poor Bella...to be left there after that admission.
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