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Reviewer: twifan20 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 45

I feel so sorry for Edward... but I have to admit I am happy for Carlisle... Edward is showing him he trusts him.

 

Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 45

o that poor baby...i wonder what caused him to go to the hospital the last time? it must've been very traumatic. can't wait for an update. kudos...

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 45

I can't help but feel so bad for Edward. I felt the gutwrenching pain in your words. I am amazed at how well you convey your message. WOW...

Reviewer: skimbo06 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 45

Feelin the love

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 45

Oh god honey this was beyound Brilliant..this is phenomenal! Such emotion! It is so heartbreaking to watch Edward go thru that, and he didn't lash out at Bella like Carlisle had feared. Maybe now Carlisle will understand that Bella is so good for him and Edward would never hurt her. Poor Edward must be reliving some nightmares and it breaks my heart that he is hurting so badly. But like Bella, I see hope for him. It warms my heart that he is showing the compassion he has...

I will anxiously await the next update!

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 45

Wow! Awesome chapter! So much emotion! Your doing an amazing job!!!!

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 45

Awww! Man whatta chapter!

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 45

:(     Fix it please?

Reviewer: LarissaCullen01 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 45

All words fail me, so I'm going to keep it simple; Best story ever!!!

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2010 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 9

So it appears that no one in the family truly believed anyone could reach Edward?  Except Alice amybe?  that's a little disheartening...still, not impossible to believe since it has been 6-7 years...

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2010 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 8

And the first piece of the Edward wall comes crumbling down...at least, there is now a crack in it...

Reviewer: AlexaET (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 45

Sigh and double sigh.... 

I wonder what happened in the hospital to make him feel so scared....mmm....

I really can't wait to know more, and most of all I can't wait for Edward to start healing, it just breaks my heart every time I see him like this...

And Bella...wow, she is always there! 

Lovely Nilla....hard to read but u have a way with words....

Alexa

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 45

Thanks for the update, I was really wondering what was going to happen at the end of the last chapter. It makes me sad to see Edward so traumatized but the tender way that Bella reacted was wonderful and then how he comforted her as well. Love this story!! =)

Reviewer: maddylyn (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 45

This is such a precious story.  I cry everytime I read it.  You should put out a warning *need lots of tissue*   I look forward to see them overcome such a tragedy. 

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2010 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 7

Wow...Edward...I am kind of speechless here...I just want to hug Edward...

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 45

i love this story and you i can never seem to say it enough this is by far one of the best stories i am reading i love how she realized he loved her and just couldnt verbalize it and im glad she went with him to see him even as alice told her they should just leave you are brilliant magnificent wonderful super haha all the positive words dear :D cant wait for more :D

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2010 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 6

I don't hate you for Edward not helping Bella with the cookies...kind of expected it actually...

I feel like Alice when I say that I just KNOW things are going to work out for those two...the road there will be bumpy as all get out though...

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 45

So glad that Bella was there to help.  They truly have an amazing connection.  I would love to know what everyone else was thinking when they saw Bella comforting Edward.  It had to be wonderful yet difficult to watch.

Carlisle has been doing a great job with communicating with Edward.  And I absolutely love it when Edward comforts Bella.  My heart swells.

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 5

Oh, Carlisle and Esme, don't give up on Edward just yet...

Hahaha, I hope Edward says yes to helping :)

Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 45

Oh my gosh!!!   You did it again.  Fantastic chapter.  The heartbreak and the sorrow are palpable, but now there is hope.  Thanks for the update. 

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 45

I've re-read this so many times. It was powerful and incredibly sad.

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2010 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 4

Didn't see that about Bella coming...then again, maybe that's why she is drawn to Edward even though he puts out a hateful vibe...

Reviewer: notreal17 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 45

okay dont they get by now that bella can help him when he is having a hard time. I am starting to get mad every time they tell bella to leave him alone!

Reviewer: lillinna (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 45

A little short but still amazing chapter, I would really like to see Emmets point of view of this chapter. Maby as an outtake? :) I hope you will uppdate soon.

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2010 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 3

Yay, Bella has a backbone!!!!

And Edward, she's working her way in...even if you don't see it...and she doesn't relaize it...

Keeps getting better, Nilla!

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