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Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 46
It's fabulous seeing Carlisle have some hope and positive reaction.
Love Bella protectiveness.
Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 46
Wonderful chapter!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 46
Little by little - bit by bit -- he is changing. I like that there is a slow progression to this story.
Reviewer: rosy (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 46
thank you Nilla, as you promised, you updated new chapter so soon. thank you again.
and now again i am very much looking forward to read next chapter!!! sounds like i am so greedy about your story;))) but it is true!! thank you so much for your wonderful story and i hope edward could accept esme's love for him really soon....
Reviewer: starsong (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 46
Another great chapter! You do such a great job of capturing the emotions of the character- even in the flashback it was easy to experience the disorientation and panic. And the characters react in a very realistic way, and very in-tune to their personalities. I can't wait for more, and I am glad Bella is finally going to hear the full story!
Reviewer: khytruckle (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 46
Thank you for updating so frequently. I really like the way you give flashes of Edward's horrific early life without being too graphic. I like all of these characters very much and appreciate the frequent updates.
Reviewer: iwannabe (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 46
OMG, I'm gonna have to get a full box of tissues, aren't I? I think I'm going to have to do some meditation to hear Edward's story and maybe a few sleeping pills of my own after.
One part of this chapter I loved the most was Edward crawling up and cuddling beside Bella with his head on her chest. I found that to be so touching and so telling of the level of trust Edward has in her.
Great chapter :)
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 46
Poor Edward. I am really cringing at the details that are about to come out. I must admit I'm curious to see if Victoria details will come to light. I don't get what is going on with her. She's supposed to be helping Edward, not making things worse.
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 46
Cliff hanger...I should have known. Thanks for the update. I will of course be waiting for the scoop from Carlise. :) Nancy
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 46
so intense....but I loe this story
Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 46
Oh, very interested to hear the full story, but I'm hoping that hearing it through Carlisle will be les traumatic...
Reviewer: wazzoes (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 46
noooooooooo you cant leave me hangng like ths
Reviewer: darcybabe (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 46
I was so glad to see your update this morning. I can never seem to get enough of this beautiful, heartwrenching story. While I'm dreading what Carlisle has to tell Bella about Edward's childhood, I am hoping it will help her better understand him, and also bring them closer together. While my heart aches for Edward, it also breaks for Alice. Her special night with Bella - her entire life, really - has to revolve around what is good or not good for Edward, and I can't imagine how difficult and emotionally frustrating that must be, even as good and generous a person as she is. I am very curious to see what happens next. (Okay, I'll be biting my nails until your next post! Please hurry!) :) Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Intricacy (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 46
oooohh! you can't stop there!! that's unfair!! (stomping my foot like a 4-year-old) that was so short!
Pleaeaease, update soon!! Pretty pretty please with cherry on top!!
Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 46
I'm glad Edward let them fix his hand, and he sure needs a full night's sleep. But I'm a little worried about how Bella will react when she hears the whole story... I really do hope it won't make a difference, that she will still be there for Edward afterwards. Bella leaving him would probably be the worst thing that could happen right now. They're making such progress and are so cute together that I don't want anything to ruin it for them.
Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 46
I am in tears at 6 a.m. What a great chapter. I am truly thankful that you are able to update as often as you do. I love this story and am glad I don't have to wait weeks for an update.
Reviewer: joli (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 46
oh man you suck hard core leaving us hangling like that, insert wink here.
Reviewer: kyles1979 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 46
dun dun da dun!!
I can't wait for her to hear his full story, I think she deserves it after all she has been through with him.
Great chapter, looking forward to the next one all the more now!
Reviewer: guineapig (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 46
Ahh What a place to leave it!!!
your killing me Nilla.......*sob*
I really loved this chapter though :)
Reviewer: fsugirlga (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 46
So good!
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 46
I heart the Bella & Carlisle conversation :) Perhaps not so much next update because I'm sure Bella's going to hear some things about Edward's past that will make her want to cry for everything he's gone through as a child; but I thought it was such a great indication of Edward's trust in both Carlisle & Bella that he'd allow his father to speak about his past when he just can't himself.
I can totally understand Bella's question to Carlisle as to whether Edward can ever truly get over the abuse - the change in Edward's demeanor and trust is signficant so it's only natural that they want to be closer together eventually but Bella's going to worry endlessly about pushing him too far too fast.
Cannot wait for the next update :)
Reviewer: aileas (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 46
aw, bummer! I was thinking we would finally get to hear the whole story, and now we have to wait a bit more still! Ah well, it does make sense to cut it here - otherwise you would have to include the whole story in here, and that's bound to be a fairly long sequence, too long for the usual size of your chapters :-)
but please, do try and update soon!
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 45
Ah, now I have to wait for an update!!! Noooo!!! :)
Seriously, this story has touched me more than I can say. I am looking forward to the next chapter :)
I noticed Victoria's last name is Masen...I am wondering if she is a relative to his mom...
Love the story!
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 33
That's so sweet...Freesia...I would have dried that flower so I could keep it forever...I love how Bella was all "I don't think so ho-bag!" Hahahahaha :)
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2010 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 32
I have been hoping and waiting for Edward to start building relationships with his family...Yay :) I know there is still a long road ahead, but yay anyway :)
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