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Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 46

This was a great chapter! I loved everything about it!

I'm so glad that Edward let Carlisle work on his hand and let him tell Bella the full story. Hopefully she can understand Edward better and they can grow closer.

Looking forward to your next update!

Reviewer: x_darla_x (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 46

Man, I love this story. Every chapter is beautiful and heart-breaking. Most stories have chapters that aren't quite as good as others, but every chapter you write is just as amazing. Every. Single. Time. It's excellent and I'm always left wanting more. Well done.

Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 46

I just have to tell u again how much I love ur writing style, your words flow so smoothly and fluid which makes it so much easier for the reader to digest..so thank you...I feel so bad for Edward and poor Esme and Carsle..hopefully he will allow them to hug/physical contact soon..I am also luving Bellas strength!

-B

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 46

Ugh.  Why stop there?

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 46

OH HELL TO THE NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

 

you did NOT just cockblock us with a cliffie at THE MOST IMPORTANT part of this story!

gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!

(mutters to herself, walking away, "evil, evil evil....." ;)

for the love of all that is holy, please update soon.

Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 46

What a Cliffie!

You are an amazing writer, I feel I can connect with both Bella and Edward as characters because of the great job you've done with writing them.

Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 46

it's such a relief edward is sleeping in peace!

I'm sad for bella, for what she is about to hear... I hope carlisle can give her the sleeping pill after the conversation...

great chapter, and of course I'm crazy for the next!!!!!

thanks nilla!!!

Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 46

OMG I AM SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!! WE WILL FINALLY GET THE WHOLE STORY ABOUT EDWARDS PAST!! THIS CHAPTER WAS REALLY GOOD!! 

Reviewer: TwilightTucker (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 8

Hey, just found your story...lovin it. You are writing in a manner that lets me get to know the characters and how they feel.  That helps it feel more realistic. Some authors jusst seem to write dialog and rush too quickly from one person's comments to anothers and don't describe what is happening and what is going on.  Those stories are the ones I can't even keep reading.  This is good.  Looking forward to continuing.

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 46

Another heartbreaking chapter to this heartbreaking story, but I'm totally loving it all!!! Glad Bella is giong to hear the whole story and I hope she help Edward even more. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: lauras1sttime (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 46

Oh shit I'm so scared of the next chapter! *bites nails*

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 46

OH Honey...this is PHENOMENAL!

Edward has been thru so much and I can't help but cheer and cry happy tears that Bella was able to help him thru this tramatic time. Just listening to just a small bit of his past in this chapter had me seeing red and wish I could just get a chance to rip James to shreds for putting Edward thru such pain.

I can't help but wonder what Elizabeth was thinking when she let a monster like that near her son. I have children myself and I can't fathom anyone hurting them. I would die first before I would allow anyone to touch my babies like that(The expression over my dead body comes to mind).

Sigh...You are such a talented author, I am honored to be on this journey with you.

Reviewer: maddylyn (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 46

i have a feeling the next chapter I will need to get me a new box of tissues.

 

Reviewer: mayghen12 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 46

love the update

Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 46

Oh the poor, poor boy!!!  I loved this chapter, just as I love them all - I really don't believe you've taken a single wrong turn yet, and that's quite a feat (I'll go knock on some wood right now, just so I don't jinx you).  I can't wait for Bella to finally have the full story, so that WE can get the full story, because I'm sure there is more for us to learn about his past (I know for a fact that I've probably been downplaying the severity of his abuse - and I've allowed my thoughts to get pretty high in that regard! - just to spare myself).  Part of me will be relieved to finally know it all, but I also know that a big part of me will probably have a VERY hard time reading it without crying for the poor kid. 

Once again, I love this story, and I love how you are writing it!

Reviewer: AlexaET (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 46

Ahhhhh!!!!!!!!

I want to know! I want to know!

How can you leave me this way!

Poor Edward! I just can imagine I need to go and buy a complete six-pack of tissues for next chapter!

Am I right? Or do I need to be close to the toilet cause I'm going to puke?

Ugh....just thinking about it is worrying me!

Hugs,

Alexa

Reviewer: kaykay86 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 46

cliffie!!!!!!!!!! argh! amazing story btw! love it! =D

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 46

Oh, the full story. I can't wait for the next chapter!! :) Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 46

“And that’s why I think you deserve to hear the full story.”...This is gonna be tough

Reviewer: bellasbestfriend (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 46

SO EVIL! How can you leave it at such a cliffhanger? Waiting eagerly for next chapter.

Reviewer: laced (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 46

wow i cant believe ur actually gonna do this u rock keep writing much love

Reviewer: silver sniper (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 46

You are beyond evil for leaving it there!  This was such a heartbreaking chapter, but it is amazing that Edward is letting Carlisle and Esme touch him even a little. 

 

Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: smartasssbich (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 46

Another great chapter...This story always gives me a good cry. I can't wait for the next chapter but I have a feeling it's going to be a real tear jerker!!

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 46

Thank goodness for the heads up.  I won't read the next update in public.  I could barely suppress my tears reading this one.  There are some big changes that Edward is undergoing.  Just being open to a relationship with Bella has allowed him to get a different perspective on his life and the people in it.  I'm with Carlisle, there is hope.

Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 46

i am anticipating that the next chapter will give us serious heartfail ...

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