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Reviewer: maria1991 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 48
i wonder what edward will do!!!!urs chapters always roooock!!love reading them!!write moree!!!
Reviewer: BHBabe (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 48
Sweet chapter. It's nice to see you allow these characters to have real feelings, consistent with their histories.
Looking forward to seeing how B and E move forward and how E perhaps begins to recover from his history.
Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 48
great chapte...Edward is slowly coming around
Reviewer: lauras1sttime (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 48
Awwwwwwww Edward is doing so much better! :D
I can't wait to see what he has planned for Bella!!!! *happy dance*
Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 48
Awww. Edward! Thanks again for the chapter. Have a good weekend, Nancy
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 48
Very nice and yay for Carlisle regarding sleeping arrangements. It's not always about sex-even with teens.
Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 48
It is so nice to see him accepting physical touch, even if it is only just a little bit. *sigh*
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 47
I kinda miss Edward. I felt bad for him because his mother obviously didn't care enough about him to want to get better for him.
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 47
Wow, I'm sorry for not reviewing the past few chapters but it's been pretty intense and all I could do was keep clicking 'next'...
Poor everyone. It's a lot to take in, but I feel like healing is begun and the next big step is right around the corner...
I'm excited for the next update! Thank you for writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your reviews! More coming soon. :)
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 34
Didn't see it coming, but like the way it unfolded.
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 28
Tears. Seriously - this was done so incredibly well.
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 14
That's better! I should have known she would pull through...
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 13
Bella's pushing him too hard! She keeps thinking that she won't, but does the exact opposite. She needs to lay the hell off and be better for him because that's not what he needs right now.
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 9
Woah! Edward grew a pair - geez! I have to say I didn't expect him to go toe to toe with Rosalie quite so soon over Bella, but as he didn't seem to expect that either, I suppose I hardly could have. Now a car ride where they're all alone together...
Squeal!
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 6
No, it's ok he didn't get to help with the cookies. Slow and steady... wouldn't want to rush into anything... I don't mind the chapter length just so long as there are many, many chapters to come. Loving your story.
I like that Rosalie's not such a bitch.
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 5
HA! Oh this is precious. I love the kitchen meet.
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 3
GO BELLA! Poor Edward. He's not a dick. He's just a beautiful, socially inept snuggle bunny in a jerk suit.
Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 34
Great job with this chapter!!! I'm glad you worked the big reveal in the way you did. You're doing a wonderful job writing Edward and letting us know the inner workings of his mind.
Reviewer: lovedwardalways (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 29
Awe how cute he wanted to make sure she was okay and then she talked him to sleep.
Reviewer: lovedwardalways (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 28
I love when you work parts of the book into the story it just proves what a great writer you are very creative. I am glad he is letting her in.
Reviewer: lovedwardalways (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 27
Everything is going good in his life and then he gets thrown a curve ball again. I loved how he asked her to dinner in his own backwards way. That is sad that he is hurtthat Carlisle did not tell him about James I hope James is in great pain and suffer a slow agonizing death.
Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 8
Love the story so far...my heart just breaks for Edward!
Reviewer: TammyCullen (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 47
Please please please please please please, update soon, I can't wait for the next chapter please please please please
Tam
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 47
You did Edwards history very well and I look forward to seeing more.
Reviewer: lovedwardalways (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 17
Awe I loved that chapter. He finally held her hand with out something freaking him out. I loved that she stood up to mike and defended him.
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