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Reviewer: _yay_ (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 48
is he going to try and make cookies???? :-)
can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Buniq (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 48
Ooooooooh, can't wait!!
Reviewer: opalmoon (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 48
Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep em coming! :-)
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 48
Can't wait for the actual sleepover to take place. I'm so happy for Edward and his slow progress.
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 48
Looking forward to their night together
Reviewer: hotforedwad1998 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 26
This is the best story i have ever read on this site. In fact it is the best Twi Fic I have read. I have only been reading this for two days, and i am on my way to read chapter 27 now. Thanks so much for posting this on here. And I totally agree with you about the chapter lengths.....they should be as long as YOU want them!!!!!!!
Thanks again,
hotforedwad1998
Reviewer: Tralalaura (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 48
Love the chapter!!! I love the little details you never forget, like in the phrase "Alice pushed her half empty bowl of cereal away," you don't forget his pessimistic veiw on the half empty, not half full. I honestly appreciete the detail! Thanks for the fast update, love this sweet chapter, no drama....yet! Cant wait for the next update!!!
Reviewer: Mommyo2 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 48
Leaving me desperate for more!! I cannot wait to see what Edward has planned!
I almost clapped when Carlisle touched Edward's shoulder!! YEA!!! I am soo happy! That is a huge step for Edward.
I know it's been said before but this story is amazing! I LOVE IT! Thank you so much for updating as often as you do!!
Reviewer: francy_princess (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 48
cant wait for the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 48
I love the fact Edward is thinking of his family and Bella's feelings more now. He is really having an awakening and it's lovely to view. You are the best, Nilla. You truly bring him to life, struggles and all. Kudos to you, girl xoxo
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 48
It seems like Edward is starting to balance out. Good. Great chapter - love your characters. Thanks for writing!!
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 48
Love this story! Write more soon please! :)
Reviewer: Longing for Edward (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 48
I love how you are showing the progress that Edward is making without doing the instant recovery as so many fics do.
He was hurt and tortured over time and now he is healing over time and now that he is allowing himself to see how his family fells about him this is real progress.
The gentleness of Edward and Bella together makes me sigh - I really look forward to seeing his idea for how to show Bella what she means to him.
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 48
The major thing I've noticed about Edward since he's met Bella (other than the obvious - not being so uncomfortable with being touched) is the fact that he's actually engaging in conversations with people, mainly the members of his family. He'd always kept Carlisle, Esme and even Emmett & Alice at arms length, not only physically but with his ability to particpate in a discussion. Now he's actively striking up conversations, even if it is because he's pissed with being talked about without having import.
Loved Carlisle's quick intervention when Esme was talking 'sleeping arrangements' and his point that Edward & Bella were old enough & mature enough to organise something that made them both comfortable.
Very much looking forward to not only seeing what Edward has planned for Bella, but also to reading about the sleepover. :)
Reviewer: puja (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 48
gr8 gr8!!
waiting for the nite!!
Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 48
Awww great chapter!! Im loving Edwards interaction with Esme and Carlisle so much, and him not totally freaking when Carlisle touched him. Hmm I wonder what the idea Edward has for him and bella. Ahh I cant wait for the next update! Thanks so much for the update, amazing as always <3 I seriously cant believe how much i love this story
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 48
More please.
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 48
great chapter, edward is accepting carlisle touch now as well, bella has done him a world of good, fantastic story thanks tracy
Reviewer: rpattzgirl11 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 48
ohhh, can't wait to see what Edward has plans for!! I know this is wrong...but wish Alice would just let E&B be together...but I know...people need people besides Edward, right?
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 48
Ooooh..I want to know what Edward has planned. He seems more at peace now that Bella knows. I think his relationship with Bella and his ability to trust her has given him the perspective he needs to see how others in his life are just as trustworthy as Bella is.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 48
so sweet
Reviewer: justjanice (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 48
Great as always!
Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 48
cant wait for the sleepover!! =)
Reviewer: wheelscpa (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 48
i'm glad to see that Carlisle finally got to have some physical contact with Edward - I was really feeling bad for him and Esme. It's hard to raise a kid that has such exteme issues and stay above water emotionally yourself.
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 48
Wow. He's turned the corner! Yay! He's starting to let his family in as well.
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