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Reviewer: Wild_Mage (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 50
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.....
So cute!!!
Reviewer: fudgie (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 50
Sweet!!!.....great update..keep em' comin'. ;)
Reviewer: gbasjw (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 50
I agree - they needed a little break from the trauma & angst. We all know that there's more lurking underneath all of these scenes but these light-hearted moments are needed nonetheless to move this couple forward. These little segments allow them to appreciate the joy & hopefullness that they bring to one another. Thank you for not leaving us with a deliberate cliffie going into the holiday. We all know the sex issue is coming but they need these little moments to build a positive foundation. I believe in these two...
Reviewer: twifan20 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 50
Awww.... what a sweet chapter! I love how far Edward has come.
Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 50
oooo what else for the sleepover? more soon please! eddie is softening up... yay!
Reviewer: beacullen (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 50
Yeaaahh! they can be so freaking cute! love it.
Reviewer: Jessybubblz (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 50
aaaaw :) :) :D
definitely not too fluffy!
i <3 fluff!!
Reviewer: Ramona89 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 50
I have to say I'm impreddes. At the beginning you said that you planned something like 20 chapters and we are by 50 now. And the story isn't over yet. I'm glad. I love this story and hope to read a lot more.
Reviewer: akoronka (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 50
You are killing me...can we get to the slumber party already!!!! Seriously i love the story - you are really talented. And i agree they need some fluff
Reviewer: Schlager G (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 50
I love watching Edwards's self awareness develop chapter after chapter!!
Reviewer: iliketoread2 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 50
they deserve more than just 1 break, about time they see some sunlight. He is an ass most of the time but I see the change and it's good. I like the story hope things keep moving this way thanks
Reviewer: therunaway (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2010 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 50
It's nice to see Bella and Edward transforming into a nice couple. Though I can sense a bumpy road ahead, I'm sure they will make it through.
Edward needs to be there for Bella now!
Great job, as always, Nilla.
-Kayla Cullen
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 50
oh whow sweet
keep up the great work and post soon
bye bye
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 50
i am glad that edward is trying to make an effort with his siblings but at the same time i feel so bad for them. Emmett constantly makes an effort with him in the past and gave up and he starts now to again try only to be pushed away again and alice never gave up on edward and was treated like absolute shit and here edward said something about her making an effort,...she made an effort to include edward always and everything else...i know i feel bad for edwards past and everything that makes him who he is but i get where rose came from at the same time...she hated seeing emmett get hurt and the rest of the cullens as she is friends with alice and she saw the effort they made with edward and he appeared not to give a shit about anyone.....she didnt know his past and neither does anyone else accept bella and his parents....so to her he really is an asshole...i can see how she would be defensive of emmmett......i feel bad for everyone...edward too but i really wish by this point he would make more of an effort with them like he does with bella...she has known and loved him for like 5 minutes and they have known and loved him for years...i can just see it from their prospective is all
Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 50
Who said it was too fluffy. I will kick their ass! Everyone deserves some happiness in life...even fictional characters!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 50
I like fluffy! Edward deserves some fluffy, I think! Great chapter!
Reviewer: nanuvamp (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 50
aww i loooved it, i guess im in a cheessy mood lol but soo cute ♥
Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 50
hahah...this chapter was cute!
Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 50
Love the fluff!! =)
Reviewer: francy_princess (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 50
cant wait for the next chapter!!
Reviewer: AlexaET (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 50
Oh wow chapter 50! 50!
Congrats Nilla! You've done an amazing amazing job!
And I loved the chapter, I really can't wait to see what they'll do with the day ahead....hopefully talk!
Sigh....beautiful
Hugs,
Alexa
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 50
Good!
Reviewer: Kaimuki (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 50
I like the fluffiness!
Reviewer: Sara0123 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 50
no,not too fluffy for me :) these 2 never get hardly any fluffy moments together. There is always something there to ruin it for them or some kinda drama I like when they can just be! I hope they get more monets like this on their night together
Reviewer: yameen (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 50
I actully liked the little break in tencion. I want to see edward move forward..though I know that peice will be short lived...nothing good can ever last, :) just like nothing bad can eather. I love your story by the way :)
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