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Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 50
Yes they definitely deserve a break! I really want him to be able to hug Esme... so close and yet... so far!
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 49
Rofl... I needed a laugh after all the drama ;)
Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 50
Awww amazing chapter!! :) I loveeed that Edward called Bella baby, too sweet! Im glad he felt so natural to him <3 Soooo cant wait for the next chapter!! Story is amazing!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 50
AAAWWWwwwww!!!! They ARE adorable!!!
I can't wait to see the next chapter with more about their sleepover!! Or if they'll share the room...or the bed ;-) I know I know, It'll be innocent. But it might awaken other "ideas" in Edward. Maybe he'll feel a little more brave.
Speaking of brave--I was SO hoping he was going to hug Esme!! That would have made her year!!
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 50
i completely agree... they needed a break and a little fluff is awesome!!!!! the end of the chapter was so freakin cute ... i just hope edward feels better about opening up to alice and emmett ... and carlisle and esme! it breaks my heart every time esme goes to hug him and can't!!
Reviewer: Mommyo2 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 50
Not too fluffy at all. They did deserve a break, these two have been through a lot lately.
Reviewer: itsyblue (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 50
Awww...what a nice chapter.
Reviewer: NornIronGirlie (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
A wonderful way to launch into a new story. The small glimpse into Edward's past makes me want to show him lots and lots of love and makes me feel so sorry for him. Poor guy. Great chapter!
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 50
That was cute fluff. They needed a bit of it. Edward is just too adorable even with his issues. :)
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 50
Too cute, can't wait for more.
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 50
Wonderfully fluffy ... do it again!
Reviewer: scricez (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 50
Oh no, it's not too fluffy, and they definetely deserved it!! ;D
I'm really glad to see Emmett and Alice making efforts and Edward too..
Can't wait for more, please update soon!! ;D
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 50
maybe still underfluffy -- but Ed is getting there
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 50
aww,he's slowly coming around.....
:)
great writing as always
x x
Reviewer: Kairi J (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 50
No, it wasn't too fluffy at all. I like a little bit of irrelevance at some point. Life isn't a constant plot, but a maze of random moments forced to coexist. It's a beautiful thing.
Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 50
There is never enough of this story for me. I love it.
Reviewer: cynthia (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 50
awww :)
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 50
not to fluffy they need to find their grove anyway. I love this story and I am glad to see Edward attempting to be more "normal".
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 50
Very sweet.
Reviewer: duchess_amy (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 50
I love it when they can be sweet and cute together without the weight of the world pressing down on them.
I really enjoyed Edward putting forth an effort with Emmett.
Reviewer: NICOL3 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 50
Best chapter yet ! soo adorable and i think this was a real good thing for their relationship, i mean edward seems alot more happy with the idea, ahh it was just so friken cute lol , can you please update soon im dying over here lmao when will you update next?
xx -YOUR STORY ROCKS
Author's Response: Thank you, I'll try to update again in a few days.
Reviewer: Bluecanoe (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 50
Nah! Definately NOT too fluffy, I loved it!
Reviewer: iwannabe (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 50
OMG, so sweet! And I am so glad to see Emmett and Alice trying. And Edward too for that matter. I'm glad the thaw out of Edward continues :)
Reviewer: justjanice (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 50
Awww!!!! Sweet... good stuff
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 50
I agree...They totally deserved some fluff!
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