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Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 109
wow very very very good chapter
keep up the fabtastic work and post soon
bye bye
Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 109
Poor Edward!! It was good for him to get it out. I'm glad that accepted everyone's comfort. I do hope things start looking up for him!
Reviewer: leeseeq (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 109
Powerful chapter, great job!
Reviewer: Robsten87 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 109
So touching....made me cry....very nice story well written!
Reviewer: sheynondoah (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 109
This was a very heartwrenching chapter but at the same time so hopeful at the end. I can't wait for you to update.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 109
That was emotional...wow.
Reviewer: hart_of_ice (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 109
This story never ceases to whip me through multiple emotions in one chapter. Loving every minute of reading this wonderful piece. :-)
Reviewer: Shante17 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 109
Wow...that had me tearing up...but Edward is right..it is not fair.
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 109
Tissues, indeed. But this is good. Having no reaction would have been bad. And now he's gotten a little more of that rage out so he can start appreciating what he does have more and looking towards the future for what he wants.
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 109
Wow...& there it is. Finally. Here is where he needed to be; surrounded by his REAL family & with Bella. Whatta huge leap in progress!!!!
Can't wait to read Edwards POV!!!
Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 109
I hate to cry! and you made me...I'm so proud of him!!!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 109
God, you're killing me right now. I was waiting for the break, and yeah. It hurt seeing it. No one should have to suffer so much and have to bear so much pain. That's the thing really - when you're suffering, really suffering, it feels like your body can't hold all that pain and your body physically just can't handle it all. It gets to where you wish you could just tear it out of your chest and be done with it. But you don't have a choice and you just have to suffer it. It truly isn't fair.
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: KazzaMum (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 109
Thanks for the tissue warning. I've said it before and I'll say it again... you are so good at this ... you need to publish!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 109
Excellent chapter....I loved the part at the end where everyone gathered around him. Truly touching.
I hope Bella is right;I hope everything will be okay.
I'm looking forward to your next chapter. =)
Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 109
That was powerful. Great job.
Reviewer: jbeaucage (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 109
That was beautiful. Thank you.
Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 109
*sob* *sniffle* *shakes head* Heartbreaking. But.............he knows it was them and not him. He faced her. He never has to see her again. He let go, let it all out. He allowing his family to be there with him. He is accepting their love. Bella is right. Everything is going to be okay. *sob* You did an awesome job with this chapter.
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 108
I'm so glad Edward finally got his closure. He needed it.
Reviewer: midnightsun7 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 108
YEAH!!!!!!! He has seen the light! That was.............heartbreakingly awesome! I cried!
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2011 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 108
I am so proud of Edward. He really did need to talk to his mother on his own. And I was so ad to see he finally realized he did nothing wrong. Coming from a person who was raised by a abusive step-father his first step Is to realize that none of this was his fault. Thank you for sharing
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2011 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 80
It was kinda sad that edward thought carlisle would keep it from him who his father was, had carlisle known he would have had Victoria thrown off the case because its really not right for her to be involved in the case. but i'm glad they got to talk about it also thought it was so funny that carlisle used Edwards profanity.
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2011 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 78
Edward really got the short stick when it comes to stepparents first his father is and evil prick then his stepmother takes out her anger on a tramatized abused kid who didn't know what happened to her husband. And i have no doubt that Victoria has been taking out her anger on him i'm sure she gets a kick out of seeing how she can affect him. b*tch!
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2011 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 77
So at first i thought that perhaps Bella was over reacting about the need to rush home and i felt kinda bad for phil but after Victorias little revalation i think its a good thing.
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2011 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 75
The flashbacks are sad but also i'm fascinated by them.
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2011 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 73
Poor bella i can't imagine how hard it is to go back to the house where her mom died, then to meet jake, poor bella. but in the end it will be the right thing that she needed to do.
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