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Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 109

i hope that this was what edward needed to move forward! he deserves to be happy and at peace...

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 109

What a touching scene for Edward's loved ones to encircle him and offer their touch and their love in such a time of vulnerability. Edward facing his mother was a courageous thing but clearly something that took its toll also. With this breakthrough, I'm hoping Edward can put his past in better context and look forward to his future.

Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 109

oh My GOD...What a chapter!!!! He's hit bottom for sure, so the only way now is Up! Excellent how his true family supports him. Wow, Linda

Reviewer: tinaconnor (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 109

Heart wrenching but beautiful.  He will be ok

Reviewer: crazykatwp (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 109

OMG.  Edward finally broke down and let it all out.  So proud of him.  Now, he can heal.  Love this story.

Reviewer: leslieljs713 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 109

Wow, great chapter. I'm in tears.

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 109


Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 108


Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 109

wow very very very good chapter

keep up the fabtastic work and post soon

bye bye

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 109

Poor Edward!! It was good for him to get it out. I'm glad that accepted everyone's comfort. I do hope things start looking up for him!

Reviewer: leeseeq (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 109

Powerful chapter, great job!

Reviewer: Robsten87 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 109

So touching....made me cry....very nice story well written!

Reviewer: sheynondoah (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 109

This was a very heartwrenching chapter but at the same time so hopeful at the end.  I can't wait for you to update.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 109

That was

Reviewer: hart_of_ice (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 109

This story never ceases to whip me through multiple emotions in one chapter. Loving every minute of reading this wonderful piece. :-)

Reviewer: Shante17 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 109

Wow...that had me tearing up...but Edward is is not fair.

Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 109

Tissues, indeed. But this is good. Having no reaction would have been bad. And now he's gotten a little more of that rage out so he can start appreciating what he does have more and looking towards the future for what he wants.

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 109

Wow...& there it is. Finally. Here is where he needed to be; surrounded by his REAL family & with Bella. Whatta huge leap in progress!!!!

Can't wait to read Edwards POV!!!

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 109

I hate to cry! and you made me...I'm so proud of him!!!

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 109

God, you're killing me right now.  I was waiting for the break, and yeah.  It hurt seeing it.  No one should have to suffer so much and have to bear so much pain.  That's the thing really - when you're suffering, really suffering, it feels like your body can't hold all that pain and your body physically just can't handle it all.  It gets to where you wish you could just tear it out of your chest and be done with it.  But you don't have a choice and you just have to suffer it.  It truly isn't fair. 

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: KazzaMum (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 109

Thanks for the tissue warning.  I've said it before and I'll say it again... you are so good at this ... you need to publish!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 109

Excellent chapter....I loved the part at the end where everyone gathered around him. Truly touching.

I hope Bella is right;I hope everything will be okay.

I'm looking forward to your next chapter. =)

Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 109

That was powerful. Great job.

Reviewer: jbeaucage (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 109

That was beautiful.  Thank you.

Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 109

*sob*  *sniffle*  *shakes head*  Heartbreaking.  But.............he knows it was them and not him.  He faced her.  He never has to see her again.  He let go, let it all out.  He allowing his family to be there with him.  He is accepting their love.  Bella is right.  Everything is going to be okay.  *sob*  You did an awesome job with this chapter.

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