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Reviewer: rdhjam5 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 52
You did a great job. I don't think I could handle any "grapic details". It was already heart-wrenching. I love this story.
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 52
Ugh. looooved. it. as always ;D
Reviewer: twifan20 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 52
I for one am glad that you decided not to give details of the abuse. Your story doesn't need it. IMHO
Poor Edward... will his suffering never end? I really hope Bella is able to get through to him about him "not being bad".
Reviewer: sapphire_light (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 52
not disappointed you didn't detail. actually relieved. i just...poor edward. i hope bella can convince edward that james is a sick, twisted, evil, vile disgusting, horrible coward bastard f**ng *sshole. and help edward understand that NONE of it was his fault...
Reviewer: kathy6900 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 52
Is it time for Edward to have an epiphany?
Reviewer: BHBabe (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 52
I'm a long-time reader who wanted to thank you for this story. It continues to fascinate me with the raw emotions from Edward and gentle honesty from Bella. I look forward to each chapter. Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: trixie11 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 52
Let me reassure you that you didn't have to go into details in regards to James' abuse. You still managed to make that chapter utterly heartbreaking.
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 52
i though it was a good chapter it told us some of the damage that was put on him even though i can do without a vague descrption it goes with the story line thanks
Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 52
I think you did an excellent job explaining what happened. I prefer the vague over the detailed in some instances. I love E&B together in this too. =)
Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 52
Great chapter! I am so proud of Edward opening up to Bella!
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 52
Really that's fine. You got your point across. Imagination is an exceptional tool of the human mind. Alas, the question all abused ask and how to answer? Because the abuser is a sick fuck. Sorry, but that's the reality.
Reviewer: missielynn (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 52
thank you for not being graphic, i don't think i could have handled that. we all know basicly what happened we don't need details
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 51
OMG! I love the cookies. :-)
Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 51
i was wondering if she was going to invite edward with her. but of course i know he can't go because of his mom's visit or whatever. slowly edward and emmett are building their relationship. i'm really excited about that. emmett did have a point about bella and her telling his business. she should've let him tell edward but then again i dont think edward would've given him the chance to. anyways kudos on the chapter....
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 51
Update quick!!! I absolutelt love this story!!
Reviewer: Julia-Joy (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 51
My fav story Eva!!!! please write again soon!!!!!!
:D
Reviewer: scricez (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 51
What an evil clifflie! Anyway it's good to see Edward and Bella so openly affectionate towards each other and talking about things that bother them..I think Edward is worried about going to Phoenix with Bella because of Phil. He's nothing like James of course but he's still a stepfather and that won't help Edward deal with his nightmares and flashbacks of his past..if he goes then, maybe it will help him understand how a stepfather is supposed to be and act..
I'm glad Edward now knows what he means for Emmett, I do feel a little bad that he overheard that conversation but Bella only had good intentions at heart..
Please update soon, I can't wait for next chapter!! :D
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 51
I'm holding the cookies as ransom ,just so you update quicker :)
Bless Emm ,he loves Edward ,Edward just needs to believe it !
Sooo Minute must be up by now ..get on and explain Edward ...
x x x
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 51
OK so i am totally dieing!!! I thought this was a completed story when I started. Now I am going to have to wait!!! I am really enjoying your story. Can't wait to hear more.
Reviewer: calicat82 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 51
Sorry I've never reviewed before, but I just wanted to let you know that I find this story absolutely captivating! Bella and especially Edward have such heartbreaking histories, but they're love is so genuine and wonderful. I'm always excited to see an update from this story because I adore watching their love progress. I also really like Emmett and Alice, and how Bella is helping Edward to see the quiet ways they both support him. Keep up the amazing work!
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 34
I loved this chapter! tears are falling. I ust keep hearing Bella say that was his sin not yours. Poor Edward. You gotta love him. Bravo Nilla
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 33
“Um, hello? Are you capable of taking a simple order without molesting your customers, or do we have to file a complaint and take it up with your pimp?” HA!!!! Loved it!!
Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 51
*Throws sprinkle covered cookies made by Edward*
Just started reading this fic the other day and now I'mm all caught up. It's very well written. I really appreciate the fact that you're addressing his issued in a realistic manner and not having Bella be a quick fix.
I hope you get back around to some of Bella's issues soon though, because she's got quite a bit of stuff that she's been ignoring for the past little while.
Can't wait for your update.
Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 14
Very funny Kerrybell! I like the lampost comment~ lol
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 51
I can only look forward to the next chapter. Burned cookies and all.
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