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Reviewer: iwannabe (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 55
Poor Edward. He freaks when he gets an erection and now Emmett has figured some shit out. Oh my goodness...Excellent chapter :)
Reviewer: pommedeterre (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 55
I'm glad his secret is getting out to his family, even if it wasn't totally intentional. He needs it to get out.
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 55
Yeah, probably not a conversation for Emmett to try to have with Edward anyway. Is that Carlisle I see in the next chapter? Thanks for writing!! :)
Reviewer: therunaway (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2010 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 55
Nah, I don't hate you for this chapter :P
This chapter was very good, Nilla. You're writing it out very well. This was bound to happen, and I liked the way you went around doing that. Victims in that situation don't have it easy, but it's nice to see that Edward has people who love him around.
I look forward to seeing what happens from here on out. You always do a good job, I don't have to keep telling you :)
Reviewer: embarrassed (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 55
I hope you don't take offense to this but.. I really really love this story. With that in mind, it seems like it has been a little slow lately. THIS chapter, however, was totally awesome and very interesting. Can't wait to see where it goes!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 55
That was a bad cliffy.
Reviewer: francy_princess (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 55
can't wait for the next chapter!!
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 55
Not quite how I expected that revelation to come out. But I like how you did it and hopefully it will lead to a lot more connection in the family. Oddly I'm glad for the hard on, its just another step forward for him.
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 55
I hope Edward will be ok and that things get better in the next update?
Reviewer: isa2346 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 10
This story is so good and very well written. The history of Edward is heartbreaking and painful....hopefully he can find solace in Bella.
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 55
wow very very good chapter keep up yhe graet work and post soon
bye bye
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 55
Poor Edward breaks my heart.
Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 55
Omg great chapter! Im so glad Bella was able to reach Edward in his dreams to help with his nightmares. I loved that there was more Edward/Em interaction :) I love that he is helping Edward..hmm I knew it had to happen too I just cant wait to see what happens next chapter! Thanks so much for the update! <3
Reviewer: fancastride (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 3
Way to go Bella.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 55
oh PHUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!!!!!!!!
I don't even know what to type here. Bad enough for him that Bella knows, but another guy? his brother? No wonder he ran - it must just feel waaay too personal and embarrassing for him to think that Emm knows what happened. And poor Emmett - he must feel like a schmuck, not having figured it out before, and thinking of the time's he's pushed Edward, or been frustrated by his behavior.....gah. I understand why Edward would tell Carlisle not the tell the others, but was that really such a good idea???
Well....at least he can't go far, since he's only in a towel!
Thank you for the update...and if you have the next chapter ready, please oh please send that sucker to the validator!!! :)
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 55
running again understandable but seems he takes a step forward and then sometimes 3 back thanks awsome chapter
Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 55
I like how Bella was intergrated into Edward's dream and helped him. It is so sad to see how damaged he is from James' abuse. I hope he'll be able to move past it!
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