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Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 24

It was endearing that Edward's awkward invitation was misconstrued.  I love hwo they are fumbling their way along this path.  I love it!

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 56

Emmett might have a big body but he's still a teenager.  This might not be what Edward wants but it IS better that Emmett and Alice know.  They love him and want to support him.  I think Edward's world will open up tremendously if he would allow his family to love him and care for him.  They key for Edward is small steps and even the thought of allowing his mother to touch him and offer him love and comfort in one of the previous chapters, that was a huge step in Edward's slowly expanding universe.

Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 56

Emmett is finally coming around...hopefully its not too late.  Poor Bella - - so much anguish!!  I hope she can get through to Edward and he doesn't do anything too drastic.  They were just getting somewhere!!  :(  sob!

Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 56

So good and so heart-wrenchingly sad at the same time.  I can only imagine how this knowledge is now going to affect the burgeoning relationship between Edward and Emmett - I'm kind of scared that, at least in the short term, it will prove damaging, simply because Edward will be on the defensive and his shame and embarrassment (which are, of course, completely unwarranted, but there nonetheless) will likely drive his actions.  I'm also curious as to what will happen with Alice now...will she eventually be told, now that she's the only one in the family who doesn't know?  So many questions.  Great chapter, looking forward to the next.

Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 56

Wow - that was everything I had hoped it would be.  Just the right reaction from everyone, although if I were Bella, I probably would have run out of the house looking for him.

Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 56

Great chapter!!

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 56

I hope Emmett doesn't put too much on him.

Reviewer: ec1luver1 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 56

Update soon or else im gonna go into a comatose state. bad joke, i know, but seriously...chop, chop.

Reviewer: kathy6900 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 56

Poor Edward.  Poor Emmett.  Poor Bella.  My heart breaks for them all. 

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 56

I just don't know how they should deal with this now that they know. It seems like treating him differently will make him upset. Poor Edward, it just seems like the hits keep coming.

Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 56

i am sitting here on pins and needles!

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Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 56

Please update again soon!

Reviewer: _yay_ (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 56

"That was when my phone buzzed in my hand." AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

YOU DIDN'T!!!!! "bangsheadagainstthewall" Please please please update ASAP :-)

By the way: I kind of liked that there was no Edward in this chapter. Him being gone made me focus on Emmetts reaction to everything that much more. I'm looking forward to EPOV in the next chapter though.

Getting back to banging my head against that wall now..AHHHHHH!!!!!

Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 56

Ugh... I feel bad for everyone involved :(

I hope Edward is ok

Reviewer: Msarkie (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 56

AAAARRRGGHH!!!!!!

Reviewer: adriana05 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 56

GOOD THING EMMET GOT HIS HEAD OUT OF HIS ASS! POOR EDWARD HE MUST BE FEELING REALLY BAD! I LOVE THIS STORY! THANK YOU FOR UPDATING SO QUICK!

-A

Reviewer: Anndrea (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

I just found your story a few days ago! I haven't been able to stop reading it. I've seriously lost a few hours of sleep over it because I can't stop reading!

I am going to school to become a counselor and this story just pulls at my heart! I really feel for all of the characters. Poor Edward, I just want to hug him (if he'd let me).

I can't wait to see how Edward interacts with Emmett after he finally comes back!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 56

Oh god that was one emotional chapter...Emmett finally understands and I have no doubt there would be a number of people in line to kill James for what he has done. I feel sick that Edward is out there somewhere alone. I hope to god that is him calling on the phone. He needs Bella whether he believes it at this point. I will wait on pins and needles for your next update...

Reviewer: longtobeme (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 56

Great angsty chapter!

Please update soon.......I am going crazy to find out what Edward's reaction is to Emmett learning of E's painful childhood injuries.

Reviewer: opalmoon (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 56

I guess Emmett feels like a royal ass now...hopefully all will work out between E and Em.  I need a shot of tequila now to chill out all this anxiety.  Whew!

Reviewer: dorano (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 56

Wow...just, WOW! I've read all available chapters in less than 24 hours.  Its such a beautiful yet ugly story at the same time.  I am loving the development of both Edward and Bella, as well as all teh secondary characters.  Please don't ever stop writting...

Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 56

GAH!  I need that EPOV ASAP!  He's probably freaking right out!!!  I'm freaking out for him.  Seriously. 

Poor Emmett.  He should feel bad, but I really hope that he and Edward can become more like brothers now.

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 23

SHe is his lifeline.  He is starting to question everything that has been ingrained in his head.  I am so captivated!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 56

its all so horrible

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 56

Shit, all hell broke loose, but at least now Emmett knows! Can't wait for more dear!!!!!

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