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Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 57
So glad he called Carlisle and Esme. Sometimes a boy just needs his parents...
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 57
Love how Edward is getting stronger and more self-assured in each chapter. Him calling Esme and Carlisle took a huge effort but Edward recognized he needed their help. The fact he is allowing people in says so much about his character and the gains he is making. Great job with this story, look forward to your updates.
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 57
I knew he would go to the meadow.
Reviewer: SuperK (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 57
Lovely! I really liked the part when Edward finaly turns to Carlisle and Esme! And please don't make Edward push Bella away, that would break not only hers but my heart as well. And I know it's a lot of work but PLEASE update as soon as you can.
Love
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 57
That was a HUGE step for Edward to reach out to Esme and Carlisle. He doesn't even realize how much he's growing. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: KaiaRose (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 57
OMG, EDWARD!! I love it! There was so much action in this chapter and I was truly hanging on. He can trust people to help him through tough times. I was so glad that he called Esme and Carlisle and could hug Bella. He truly is making progress, but it will be tough. You are doing a wonderful job of showing the reality of abuse that he experienced.
I can't wait for the next installment!
Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 57
Oh, poor edward. I'm so glad he called Carlisle and Esme! That was a breakthrough in and of itself! Wow. I'm proud of your little fictional Loneward. Yep, actually proud of a fictional character.
Can't wait for your next chapter. You write him beautifully. I would love to hear the next one from his POV. I want to know what he thinks of people's reactions to him, now that he's actually paying attention to the fact that they care.
Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 57
Thanks for the chapter. I think this may be the turning point E needs. :)
Reviewer: wazzoes (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 57
great as usual
Reviewer: starsong (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 57
I love your chapters because, even though it is terrible how much pain Edward is in many times, you make me feel that heart-wrenching emotion as well. Its impossible to read this and be detached or not care about the characters. I'm glad Edward was back, though of course I enjoyed the Bella and Emmett chapter as well. As always, looking forward to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Julia-Joy (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 57
OOOOOOOOO can't wait for the talk gonna be interesting :P
gwd Job and please write sooooooon!!! xD
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 57
There are so many conversations I want Edward to have with his family. I want so much for him to let them in.
Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 57
That was an awesome chapter. Sorry I dont review as often it is because for some reason when i pull the chapters up on my phone it wont let me review from my phone. i am finally reading on my actual computer so I can review. Edward is coming together very well. I can sense there will be a family intervention coming soon. I wonder if Edward is ready to go to see someone about his past so he can begin to get over it? I can't wait to find out what will happen next.
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 57
It's all for the better, Edward... This really needed to happen. You'll see that some day, maybe not now, but some day...
Thanks again for a wonderful chapter, and for always managing to update so quickly. You're amazing. ;-)
Spikey
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 57
P.S. I think Emm shoud get Edward a tshirt that says "Boners Happen". :) tee!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 57
oh phuck...he's gonna break up with her "for her own good", isn't he?? DAMN IT....martyrs piss me off!! :( all that useless angst....
I love Carlisle. :)
Big changes are happening in Mr. Edward....him reaching out to his parents, and actually wanting their help and realizing they care for him, is a HUGE thing! (and please remind him, these changes occur because of BELLA, whom he should not break up with!!) I actually thinking Emmett knowing will ease the tension between them...wonder if he'll tell Alice? I hope Emm doesn't...it will make Edward more likely to trust him. I do hope someone tells Alice, too..it must be so hard for her to be shut down by Edward again and again.
I hope it doesn't take too many chapters for Edward to get his head out of his butt, if he does break up with Bella...she's gonna FLIP.
Reviewer: isa2346 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 57
It's good to see that edward is making some progress in dealing with his issues instead of running away.
This story is really great despite the heavy topic and extremely well written. The characters are believable and you're taking your time in developing their relationship.
One of the best stories I've read so far.....
Reviewer: fsugirlga (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 57
I'm glad he wants helps but I have a feeling once his parents come back and get involved they will push Bella out...something feels off. I hope I'm wrong...
Reviewer: missriot (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 57
so im a little confused. your teaser made it seem like he was breaking up with her soon... but hes back? whats going to happen with the talk? uh oh :(
another good chapter! thank you for updating so fast!
-missRIOT;;
Reviewer: longtobeme (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 57
It is almost painful to read Edward's POV in this chapter. Thank goodness, he returned home. I think Edward is finally beginning to trust his family...his phone conversation with Carlisle and Esme is a huge admission of faith.
Update soon!
Reviewer: bettin_on_alice (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 57
ugg! it always stops b4 they talk! can't wait for the next update
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 57
It was a surprise to see him call Carlisle, but it was a good decision. They can face the questions and emotions that Emmett will surely have and serve as a buffer for Edward.
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 57
Poor Edward, I hope this all gets straightened out with Bella and Emmett, but I have the feeling he's gonna pull a "New Moon" on her! =(
Reviewer: guineapig (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 57
great chapter :)
Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 57
Great chapter!!
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