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Reviewer: wazzoes (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 57

great as usual

Reviewer: starsong (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 57

I love your chapters because, even though it is terrible how much pain Edward is in many times, you make me feel that heart-wrenching emotion as well.  Its impossible to read this and be detached or not care about the characters.  I'm glad Edward was back, though of course I enjoyed the Bella and Emmett chapter as well.  As always, looking forward to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Julia-Joy (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 57

OOOOOOOOO can't wait for the talk gonna be interesting :P

gwd Job and please write sooooooon!!! xD

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 57

There are so many conversations I want Edward to have with his family.  I want so much for him to let them in.

 

Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 57

That was an awesome chapter. Sorry I dont review as often it is because for some reason when i pull the chapters up on my phone it wont let me review from my phone. i am finally reading on my actual computer so I can review. Edward is coming together very well. I can sense there will be a family intervention coming soon. I wonder if Edward is ready to go to see someone about his past so he can begin to get over it? I can't wait to find out what will happen next.

Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 57

It's all for the better, Edward... This really needed to happen. You'll see that some day, maybe not now, but some day...

Thanks again for a wonderful chapter, and for always managing to update so quickly. You're amazing. ;-)

Spikey

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 57

P.S.  I think Emm shoud get Edward a tshirt that says "Boners Happen". :)  tee!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 57

oh phuck...he's gonna break up with her "for her own good", isn't he??  DAMN IT....martyrs piss me off!! :(   all that useless angst....

 I love Carlisle. :)

Big changes are happening in Mr. Edward....him reaching out to his parents, and actually wanting their help and realizing they care for him, is a HUGE thing!  (and please remind him, these changes occur because of BELLA, whom he should not break up with!!)  I actually thinking Emmett knowing will ease the tension between them...wonder if he'll tell Alice? I hope Emm doesn't...it will make Edward more likely to trust him. I do hope someone tells Alice, too..it must be so hard for her to be shut down by Edward again and again.  

I hope it doesn't take too many chapters for Edward to get his head out of his butt, if he does break up with Bella...she's gonna FLIP. 

Reviewer: isa2346 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 57

It's good to see that edward is making some progress in dealing with his issues instead of running away.

This story is really great despite the heavy topic and extremely well written. The characters are believable and you're taking your time in developing their relationship.

One of the best stories I've read so far.....

Reviewer: Sanna86 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 57

Åh, det här var ju dagens räddning. Men allvarligt talat så funderar jag nästan på att sluta läsa på ett tag, så att jag har massvis med kapitel att läsa sen =D Låter ju perfekt att ladda upp med godis å ligga och läsa hela dagen... fast å andra sidan så tror jag att det skiter sig eftersom din story är för bra. Jag skulle fan inte kunna låta bli att läsa!

Reviewer: fsugirlga (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 57

I'm glad he wants helps but I have a feeling once his parents come back and get involved they will push Bella out...something feels off. I hope I'm wrong...

Reviewer: missriot (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 57

so im a little confused. your teaser made it seem like he was breaking up with her soon... but hes back? whats going to happen with the talk? uh oh :(

another good chapter! thank you for updating so fast!

-missRIOT;;

Reviewer: longtobeme (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 57

It is almost painful to read Edward's POV in this chapter. Thank goodness, he returned home. I think Edward is finally beginning to trust his family...his phone conversation with Carlisle and Esme is a huge admission of faith.

Update soon!

Reviewer: bettin_on_alice (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 57

ugg! it always stops b4 they talk! can't wait for the next update

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 57

It was a surprise to see him call Carlisle, but it was a good decision. They can face the questions and emotions that Emmett will surely have and serve as a buffer for Edward.

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 57

Poor Edward, I hope this all gets straightened out with Bella and Emmett, but I have the feeling he's gonna pull a "New Moon" on her! =(

Reviewer: guineapig (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 57

great chapter :)

Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 57

Great chapter!!

Reviewer: nadia2706 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 56

these chapters are flying in you rocking..

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 57

Oh thank feck! I'm bigtime relieved that Edward didn't run any further - and I can't get over what an amazing step he made by ringing Esme & Carlisle and asking them in his own way for their support; even if he is wrong about 'messing' up with Bella.

Will be interesting to see how he deals with the impending conversation with Bella - at the end of the day he's not going to be able to avoid speaking to her, or Emmett or Carlisle & Esme. At least his parents aren't going to be home for another couple of hours. Hopefully Bella can reassure him a little bit more in the meantime - if anyone can get through to him about how he reacted physically to Bella's nearness in bed with him, it'll be her.

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 56

wow... poor emmett... and Bella... and Edward...

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 56

Oh I love Emmett :) His devotion and love for his brother are so profound, despite any misgivings he might have felt towards him when they were younger - you can hardly blame him for his behaviour - he should have known better, but he's been kept in the dark about Edward's past and so he had no way of understanding why Edward lashed out towards the family in the way that he did when they were growing up.

Poor Bella - all of that hard work to get Edward to realise how much she loves him and wantss to help him - and now Emmett has unwittingly brought Edward to his knees emotionally and he's run off. :(

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 56

I think that my heart broke all over again with Emmett's reaction. WOW... Every update of yours bring along a whole slew of emotions for me. IO Love this story and your version of these characters is AWESOME

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 56

This story is seriously epic.  I love it so very much. I am eager for more!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your reviews! :)

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 55

Yes, it needed to happen.  They all still have a lot of healing to do.  I am so sad that I am almost caught up.  It has been so nice reading all of these chapters together.  I love this story so very much!

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