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Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 60

This was beautiful.  The moment with Esme and Edward and the end was so very heartwarming.  It is so good to see him really healing.  Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 60

YES!! *fist pump* Major Major First Step!!!  Hella-awesome chapter!!  I hope he tells Alice too. She's such a sweetie & her & Emmett would be so glad to help him. Linda

Reviewer: Twi-Mom (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 60

OMG - that last line...brought tears to my eyes.  Though this story is a real tear jerker - you're doing a really great job at getting the feelings out there.

Reviewer: lunaluna72 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 60

Oh Yay ! So happy he's letting Esme touch him.

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 60

Aww!  *sniffle*  He's accepting Esme's comfort. That is so wonderful.

Reviewer: mychemfan78 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 60

loved it! the tears are still falling!

Reviewer: francy_princess (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 60

loved this chapter!!! can't wait for the next one!!!

Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 60

Awwww amazing!!! It makes me sooo happy that Edward was happy that Esme and Carlisle were home and missed them, loved their talk and the last line made me tear up, beautiful! Thank you soo much for the update! I always look forward to them!! :) Cant wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: opalmoon (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 60

Awwww, he is making such huge progress!!  I'm sure it won't be long before he tells Alice.  I love that he told Esme that she could touch him.

Reviewer: iwannabe (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 60

Can I give Edward a hug?  Seriously?  He is so brave!  Wanting to do this and for telling Carlisle and Esme about it too!  I'm just so proud! :)  Great chapter!

Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 60

Another vivid and powerful chapter!

Reviewer: adriana05 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 60

Awwww I'm so glad he's letting Esme touch him! bet she couldn't believe it! 

 

Reviewer: wilson55 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 60

I love your story, but I have to agree with grumpbears review, I mean, Bella has been there for a short while, and she gets to take all the credit for how Edward is progressing. I think the credit should go to his family, who have been there for what, 7 years, and who does bella think she is to judge Edwards family, such as Alice and Emmett. Again, love the story, but...can't stand Bella in this one.

Reviewer: longtobeme (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 60

Edward is really trying to put his past behind him! Great chapter, please update soon!

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 60

i am glad that he talked to carlisle and esme about therapy...it is important...i think its sad that bella seems to be the only reason he wants therapy.

I feel bad for alice that she is the only one who doesnt know now and she is the only one who never stopped trying to reach him....

it pissed me off that bella said alice tried in her own way....what does that mean? in her own way,,,,like her way wasnt even good enough,,,,,i think that bella is given too much credit sometimes...she isnt a bad person or anything but it sucks that she was there all of a month and got him to try more then he ever tried with his family.. alice always tried and never gave up....emmett and edward couldve been close if he was given atleast some indication as to what was going on..,.,i mean edward was what ? 10? i thgink if it wouldve helped the bonding process then edwards opinion shouldve been considered but not necessarily accepted....

Reviewer: jess2002 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 60

aaawwww esme must be so happy!!!!! good for edward! cant wait for the next update

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 60

oh Esme is gonna be so happy ... hope she can contain herself

Reviewer: Twilam (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 60

awhh ! please update soon !

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 60

edward has just made esme's year! im sure that she and carlisle love him just as much if not more than the other kids! and i hope that edward and bella are going to be ok! they do deserve to be happy, together!

Reviewer: kathy6900 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 60

Oooohhhh... I'm so excited!  Edward is finally opening up!  I love it when he and Bella are alone.  I love how they are together, how she can open him up.  I'm always so excited when I see your updates in my email.  You are awesome!

Reviewer: sweetowl (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 60

Amazing. Deep and thoughtful

Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 60

Wow big changes for Edward, especially with letting Esme touch him.

Good work!

Reviewer: dazzled09 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 60

I think I fall in love with Edward a little more each chapter. *sigh* So glad he is starting to open up and not with just Bella. Great chapter once again.

Reviewer: lilygirl88 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 60

Yay he opened up to them even if they had drag some of it out of him. I'm happy he's allowing someone else beside bella to touch him.

Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 60

Really good!

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