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Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 64
beautiful chapter, Edward is making leaps and bounds in his personal growth :)
Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 64
Great chapter!!! They both need to grow some!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 64
Ah. I miss them being together too. They are doing well, though, with being apart. ;o) Great chapter!
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 64
So glad they both are broadening their time with other people. The male bonding was great.
Reviewer: lbritt (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 64
it is healthy to take a break from your significant other. Matter of fact it is good for any any relationship...good friend. parent/child, sibilings etc. Great Chapter as always.
Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 35
Bella's right--there's a looooong way to go before Edward can heal, but it was an important first step.
I'm thinking Charlie would have to know about the sexual abuse. THAT should be interesting.
Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 34
That chapter was fantastic! Very powerful. It made me cry. I'm so relieved that the secret is out. Bravo!
Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 33
“You can google it if you want.”
Way to work that in! :)
Wow, Bella got jealous!
Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 32
Hooray for Emmett! Seems Bella's teaching the family a thing or two about how to love Edward.
Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 31
<< Carlisle had once tried to talk to me about it, as had most of the therapists I had been seeing. They had all pretty much said the same thing; that with the right person, sex could be a good thing, a pleasant experience. But I didn’t believe them. As far as I was concerned, sex was disgusting. It was all about control, dominance and obedience. And pain. Never-ending, fucking pain. >>
Very sad. Very realistic.
<< I had more scars on my body than I could count, and the mere thought of taking my shirt off and reveal my damaged skin to Bella made me feel sick. If she hadn’t found me repulsive before... >>
Poor Edward! Physical scars and even worse emotional scars.
<< Charlie paused before adding, calmly, “After he comes here to properly introduce himself, of course.”
Oh crap! >>
Ha ha! Great ending to the chapter.
Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 63
Great conversation with Rosalie! Dynamic characterization!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 63
Awwwww!!! *sniff* our Eddie's getting better & better!! Wow!
And Rosalie as, like, a Real human being with a soul? (lol) was very awesome
Thanks for this chapter! was nice to have a non-angsty one b-4 he starts therapy, & Bella leaves 4 her trip
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Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 30
I just saw Eclipse again and the sex talk between Charlie and Bella was brilliant! Can't wait to see Nilla's version.
Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 29
Damn, that dream was intense! Well done.
Bella's going to start having matching circles under her eyes. ;) That's sweet that Edward called her for comfort.
Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 28
I don't think I want to know what happened 6 years ago. Carlisle must have felt sick seeing an 11 year-old beat up like that.
But Bella doesn't know about the sexual abuse, and that's where the shame really lies. *is worried*
Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 27
I love Carlisle and Esme. They're really doing a great job as his adoptive parents. How difficult that must be. And wow, Edward's going to tell Bella about what happened?
Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 63
awww how nice of edward
Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 63
Awww...he's trying to make a connection with his brother to make him happy. sniff...whadda sweetie! And ROSE apologized?? How epic is that? Nice chapter. Linda
Reviewer: KaiaRose (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 63
Oh Edward! How I love you so! So sweet that he cares about others.
Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 63
Aww. I love how Edward is really trying to be nice.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 63
Good for Edward. He is showing that he is really taking an interest in his family. He cares about them. I am so proud of the distance he has come. Wonderful chapter!
Reviewer: AlexaET (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 63
Yey! I'm so proud of Lonerward! He is really doing an amazing job! I so so so hope he starts getting better, though I'm scared about when he starts therapy, things are going to start coming out and tempers will flair! But we will be with him, supporting him, every step of the way!
Amazing chapter :)
Alexa
Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 63
Awwww the last two chapters were amazing! I love that Edward is getting better at being around people. I wa surprised that Rose came up and talked to Edward but glad she did, the little flashback explain the reasons even more now as to the reason why they act the way they do around eachother. I love that Edward sent that text to Em. Thanks so much for the awesome updates, as always cant wait for more! :)
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 63
Love your story and glad to see Edward continuing to get better.
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 63
great stuff... i love this story! Can't wait for more!
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