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Reviewer: edella (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 66
um Mindblowinggggggggggggggg!!!!!!!!! It took me 2 days to read this one,.....guess now I m guna flunk my science finals!!!! Ugh!! But all worth it !!!!!
What a great story.....Whoa The first one with 66 chapters but truly one of the best.....The Best.....
I luvd the way u depict Bella.A woman of substance and the rest of the family too.And Edwards just heart breaking .......But James the B_#()D deserves to be killed!!!!
But anyways U keep going !!! Dont let go!!!!
Even I want the burnt cookies....
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 66
Yep thats a suspicion you never want to actually have confirmed
Reviewer: seekingbecca (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 66
What?
Reviewer: duchess_amy (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 66
I knew Alice already knew or assumed what happened to Edward. I hope the whole family seeks therapy and not just Edward and Bella. The things he's been through the whole family will need someone to talk to.
Reviewer: lunaluna72 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 66
So proud of Edward.................Tears...............
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 66
very very very good keep ggoing and post soon
bye bye
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 66
THIS WAS VERY VERY GOOD CHAPTER
KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
BYE BYE
Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 66
I LOVE IT.. UPDATE!
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 66
THIS WAS VERY VERY GOOD CHAPTER
KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
BYE BYE
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 66
THIS WAS VERY VERY GOOD CHAPTER
KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
BYE BYE
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 66
THIS WAS VERY VERY GOOD CHAPTER
KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
BYE BYE
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 66
THIS WAS VERY VERY GOOD CHAPTER
KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
BYE BYE
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 66
THIS WAS VERY VERY GOOD CHAPTER
KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
BYE BYE
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 66
THIS WAS VERY VERY GOOD CHAPTER
KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
BYE BYE
Reviewer: scricez (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 66
I can't believe he told Alice, I'm so proud of Edward for telling her! This was a big step forward..I'm also glad with how the Talk with Carlisle went!
Can't wait to read next chapter, please update soon! ;D
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 66
I can just imagine Edward being in therapy not really wanting to be there but wanting to get better.
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 66
I'm so proud of Edward for telling Alice, and for correcting things such as being beat when he did something bad or not. It means that a lot of what Bella has helped him with is sinking in and his whole mindset is changing, if gradually. Great chapter, can't wait for more.
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 66
intense ... completely awesome chapter
Reviewer: _yay_ (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 66
Great! I am really glad that he finally opened up to Alice.
“I’m so sorry, because I was right.” Hah! I KNEW it! I always thought that Alice would be the one to somehow just sense what happened to Edward.
Still thinking about Edwards morning mishap a few chapters back. Was it the first time since the abuse it happened to him? Because if it was...I am now wondering if chances for it to happen more frequently ...and even in situations he can't predict...aren't pretty high. "A life of its own" - so to speak! If that's the case it could be a huge set back. I hope he will be able to deal with it (Maybe to be discussed in the therapy sessions?!)
I am also really happy Carlisle seems to ease up a little bit. He was getting under my skin. A little annoying even. Glad the "talk" turned out the way it did!
Update soon please. :D
Reviewer: scarlet (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 66
Evil cliffie
Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 66
Huh? How is she right?
I'm ssooo proud of Edward & the huge strides he's taken. Bella..Emmett are awesome too. Love this story. Linda
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 66
I am so glad that he told Alice because now I think the healing can begin. No one should have to go through what he has. My heart breaks for him and any child who is hurt by someone who shoul love them and keep them safe. But life isn't fair all the time I know that well. But like me I hope he sees the good in people and how much love there really is for him out there. Bella will be his rock. Thank you for your story and sharing your great talent with us.
Lilly
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 66
Now he knows that Alice has always known the truth, yet treated him with love. His inner circle is getting wider to include his entire family. He is learning that he isn;t alone and that his family will support him no matter what. Great chapter!
Reviewer: Toula (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 66
OMIGOSH! Yay! He's finally opened up! YAy~! Now, to make something clear: I am not a Twilight fanatic. I think that it's okay, not the most original, not the best book ever written, but when I read your fanfiction, I don't look at it at Twilight fanfiction. I look at it as a book that you so generiously put on a fanfiction website using Twilight names. I really hope you do an original work with a similar plotline. It would be brilliant.
UPDATE SOON!
Reviewer: nanuvamp (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 66
omfg! i cant believe edward did that just like that! omfg! u made me cry! oh u better update soon! i hate crying and more crying in front of my notebook, i feel stupid
dont worry, i still love u and this story and no matter what i will read it until the end (which i hope is very far away) and take ur time to update to make the story as perfect as it's been
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