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Reviewer: reddms88 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 71
slightly concerned about how edward will take the bella and jake convo.....i have a feeling this wont go well
Reviewer: team rob (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 71
:)
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 71
Oh these guys are killing me. I hate goodbyes. I hope she doesn't run into Jake while shes there.
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 71
*Sob*.....
So sad; I need some chocolate to make me feel better.
Poor Bella, I hope she can find the courage to get through the weekend.
Oh,Nilla, please don't make Jacob be a problem!!!!
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 71
First things first: thank YOU for sticking with the story! There's a ton happening, and I see a ton of development - but honestly I'm glad there's still a ways to go because I don't want it to end!
Interesting chapter. I wasn't expecting the Charlie conversation to be so deep, and I'm looking forward to hearing Bella grill him when she gets back.
I know the next chapter is going to be sad and difficult for Bella, but I hope it's cathartic, too. Can't wait for the next update! Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 71
Whoa, didn't see that one coming. Bella with a sexual past? Now I'm dying to know what the deal is. I imagine it's probably not as bad as it could have been, but worse than most people have to deal with when it comes to Bella. She's always the virginal one, in stories. I just hope it's not going to be a secret that suddenly blows up in her face while she's gone. Liked the bit with Charlie, it only makes sense as Chief of Police that he would know about Edward.
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: team66fan (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 71
AAgh, my heart aches for these two. 3 days is gonna feel like forever. I hope that they are both gonna be ok.
Reviewer: duchess_amy (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 71
I don't think Bella should share details of her sexual history with Edward. I don't think it's a good idea at all. Especially now with therapy just starting and his panic attacks. Edward has a full plate.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 71
Awww, such a sweet and sad goodbye. I do hope that everything goes well for both of them while Bella is gone.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 71
OHhh that goodbye was so hard...so sad. I have to wonder about Bella's cryptic remarks concerning Jacob. Oh lord, my mind is scrambling with all the possibilites of what that means. I am curious as to what is going on in Edward's mind and what he was going to ask her. I am almost dreading the next three days...yipes
I will anxiously await the next update
Reviewer: Arabella_ (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 71
What! Bella with another boy? I am scandalized ;)
Reviewer: katopasna (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 71
just read all 71 chapters and I could have sworn my eyes teared up a couple times.. I can't wait to read more...
Reviewer: smartasssbich (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 71
I'm wondering who is going to have a harder time being apart. I really hope Edward will be fine without her. He just has to be. He has his family and he can always call her. Hopefully he will keep busy.
Bella being back in the same house she found her mother dead in can't be an easy thing to deal with. Phil should give her the house if she wants it instead of selling it.
I'm really hoping there wont be problems while she's gone.
Reviewer: flabella (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 71
Aww, so sweet, but sad. :(
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 71
So hard to say goodbye, even for such a short time. Why do I get the feeling this is going to be the longest 3 days ever? Edward seems so fragile right now, I really hope he can utilize his family for support during this tough time. He has been doing so well, I would hate for him to have a setback.
Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 71
Poor kids! I want to cry for them!
Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 71
something with jacob? hmmm i wonder what that is...
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 71
three days isn't too bad! will something bad happen to bella in phoenix? will she be safe? will she come back to edward?
Reviewer: Twihardgirl246 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 71
Oh my god...this had to be the or one of the most tear jerking chapters i've read so far. And i love how you had Bella's feelings on how much she wants to make love to Edward. I'm so glad you ackowledged that. I can't wait for that day. And make Bella come back soon! great chapter and please update soon!
Reviewer: jbeaucage (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 71
I keep hoping Edward will surprise her in the morning by coming with her to Phoenix after all. Yes, it's probably completely unrealistic, but a girl can dream. Very interested to hear what happened with Jacob "no means yes" Black. Tool.
Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 71
Goodness gracious, I know how that feels. It sucks to say goodbye, no matter how short the time frame. The story is really moving along. I love the pace of this. It's like a catch 22; The chapters are small, but your updates are quick and it's just enough story to keep me logged on to my computer for another update. But at the same time, I want to read more and more and more, and every time I read a chapter, I wish it were longer. Oh well, it was a great update, as they always were. See you next week, yes?
~Tay
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 71
still with you....I look forward to ur updates, wanting to know where u take this story
Reviewer: janlb123 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 71
Thanks for another great chapter! I really feel for B&E, and there is no way I'm going to give up on this story. I HAVE to know how they progress in their relationship - what a fantastic journey it's been so far!
As always, can't wait for the next instalment!
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 71
Well well well...what has Bella been up to in Phoenix? Interesting....
Great chapter. In regards to your AN at the top - I couldn't be more pleased that you're taking your time in telling this story. It's really not a subject that can be rushed, and for that I'm glad you're going at the pace that feels right. I definitely see plot movement, I have all along, so I'm not concerned. I'm also happy that there's still a lot of story left, because I dont' want to see this one end. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 71
They are both having such a hard time! This is going to be a long 3 days!
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