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Reviewer: GreyAngel (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 73

Hahahhaa, good old Bella fighting for her rights :P I like the fiesty Bella! Great chapter, loved it! Please update soon :)

Reviewer: bettin_on_alice (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 73

can't wait for the update!

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow.....A troubled Edward for Bella to try to get to underneath his hostile exterior.  Yummy.....Who wouldn't want to get under his skin.  THANKS FOR THE INTERESTING WRITING.  Sher

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 73

go Bella GO!!!!

 

more please??

Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 73

Ohh my that was a great chapter, poor Bella going all the stuff with missing her mom and now jake trying to kiss her! Cant wait to see what happens since she hits him lol

 

Dont be nervous I really liked this chapter :)

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 73

Wow! Good for Bella putting Jacob in his place...the bastard!

Reviewer: Robin Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 73

Stupid, stupid Jake!!! But GOOO Bella!

And I know how hard it is to lose a parent at that age ( I was 17 when My father passed) if she is that worried about her mom's things put them in storage. That is what I did with my father's things after my mom sold our house and remarried (less that 18 months later).

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 73

lol ha ha Jake! no kisses & forgiveness 4 you!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 73

Great chapter!

I think that once Edward finds out what happened, he'll jump on a plane and beat the crap out of Jacob.

Looking forward to your next udpate!

Reviewer: sistajalice (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 73

LOL

Jacob Black...What a loser!!!

Reviewer: pluekaymapropayvee (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 73

good on bella, that guy is a fucktard.

Reviewer: starsong (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 73

I got to say, I wasn't expecting this- I knew we would hear about Jacob soon, and I thought their past may have been something like this, but I didn't know we would get to see the actual confrontation between them!  Way to go Bella for really taking a stand!  Hopefully her hand is not broken, but I have to say I was glad she punched him.  I am just glad I don't have to worry about an annoying Jacob following Bella around forever and a stressful love triangle appearing and taking away from the relationship Bella and Edward have.  Anyway, this was another really good chapter, I could feel her uneasiness and grief- as well as her anger.  Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 73

Nothing to be afraid of, I loved it.  The only disappointing bit about it is that it ended, I'd have loved to read more.  Looking forward to the next bit, and reading the phone convo between Edward and Bella =D

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 73

Good for Bella.  I am proud of he for standing up for herself and sending Jake a message!

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 73

OoO! Got 'em! And he's not a wolf this time so it probably hurt! That's right, Jerkhead! Take that!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 73

why be afraid a good punch to jacob's face is a good thing

Reviewer: Kalika87 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 73

Go Bella!!

Another heartbreakingly good chapter, dear.

Roll on the next one.

Reviewer: vickid (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 73

well you know i love you right? but thi sthing with jacob can not, I repeat NOT go any further than this chapter. bye bye jake! that's all I am saying.

Reviewer: crazy1962 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 73

Not quit sure why you were afraid to post it there was nothing to it.

Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 73

Nice update despite the sadness. Glad she punched the selfish and arrogant jerk Jake.  Hope she broke his jaw.  Update soon.

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 73

I think it was very, very interesting that Bella thought of herself as a loner.  I couldn't remember if we had heard about her relationship with Jacob before -- I'm grateful we found out what happened between them.

I do love when she stands up for herself.

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 73

Haha!!! Love it!

Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 73

Why were you afraid? I don't expect Bella not to have a life before she met Edward. The fact that she has her own past trauma sexually and with her mother only bonds her more tightly to Edward. They really understand each other. I hope Bella does get to call Edward soon.

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 73

that was different

love the way Bella handled Jacob's pushiness

Reviewer: Twihardgirl246 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 73

OH YEAH!! Go BELLA! Punch that retard in his fucking face! Oops. Please pardon my language. I just really hate Jacob. So I think I know why shes crying to Edward. Great chapter and please update soon!

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