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Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 73

I don't even know where to begin.  I have been reading this story for about three days..and can't wait for the next chapter:)  You have done such a good job with this!! 

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 73

A bit more revealed about Bella's past, and I loved how the punch to Jake was played out! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: janefanatic (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 73

Oh, don't worry, the angry pitchfork-wielding mob will stay put. I don't think anyone is going to be mad over this chapter! I thought it was great; we haven't spent as much time on Bella as we could have, and this chapter really does a good job of allowing her to be a teenager for once. She has to be mature and level-headed with Edward, because she knows that acting otherwise would hurt him. But here in Phoenix, she's allowed to be a bit bratty, because no one is counting on her to help them there! And Jacob totally deserves to be punched. I'm glad he wasn't the typical complete douchebag rapist-in-training that you see so often in other fics. He's just a stupid high school boy, who is a nice guy overall, but still pretty selfish by nature! It just shows how special Edward is by comparison. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: BellaGioia (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 73

No need to be afraid!  It went well, I think!  It's a little odd that this story arc comes up now, but I see why it needed to happen, and you've still got my attention!  I just want her to go back home where she belongs now.

Reviewer: djonie (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 73

Great chapter! Can't wait to read the next one, I hope she doesn't break her hand on his nose :D

Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 46

uh oh... grab the tissues... here it comes...

Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 45

I haven't review the last few chapters... but only because I can't seem to resist the urge to click that little next button... great story! So emotional... its great that Edward seems to be able to put Bella's needs above his own at times... she needs that too...

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 73

Oh jesus christ almighty! Jacob is beyond douche material. I have needs?!? What the fuck kind of lame excuse is that. He left her and didn't respect her, and then he had the audacity to want to kiss her goodbye. How clueless was that. To be honest I am so fucking proud of Bella for hitting Jacob. I feel so sorry that she had to endure that but luckily she has Edward to call. I will anxiously await the outcome of all of this...

PS author honey don't be afraid that was brilliantly written.

Reviewer: janefanatic (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 38

"I finally had something good in my life, and I’d be damned if I was going to let that son of a bitch destroy it. So I took a deep breath, and pushed all disturbing thoughts to the back of my mind."

I don't have the words to express how happy this made me. I'm so proud of Edward, because now he's actually ready to try to be happy!!!

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 17

I am really enjoying reading this story.  It just breaks my heart that Edward won't let anyone know what happened to him.  This was a very important step for him holding Bella's hand.  That was a major step for him.  I guess that he must have gotten into trouble by fighting with Mike.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING.  Sher

Reviewer: janefanatic (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 32

YAY FOR EMMETT!!! I'm very glad that Edward now knows that Emmett does not hate him. It's such a small-seeming thing, but Edward genuinely believes that not only do people hate him, but that he is worthy of that hate, and so it's wonderful for him to have confirmation that that's not true at least as far as Emmett goes!

Reviewer: malleigh (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 73

This chapter was very good.  Fear becomes your writing.  More, please.  And thank you for sharing your time with us.  

Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 73

thanks good chapter

Reviewer: janefanatic (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 23

This has been the most moving chapter so far. I loved the insight into Edward's mind. In earlier chapters, you've hinted at Edward's sense of guilt and culpability, but this chapter really emphasized it. The fact that he can't even comprehend (or really even want to try to comprehend) that James was the bad character (and his mother, although Bella didn't say anything about her) just shows how deep the disconnect runs. I am also pleased with the Emmett/Bella interaction. When he admitted that he had suggested that if Edward were to "mess with him" than Carlisle and Esme would "send him back", it was like a button went off in my brain. It just made so much sense, what with Edward's continuous fear that when he would get in trouble (or when he broke the plate) he would get sent back; that particular fear isn't unusual in the case of abused children in the foster care system, and the idea would likely have evolved eventually, but Emmett clearly placed the thought there originally. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: Striking Green Eyes (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 73

Stupid Jacob.  Edwards gonna pissed......... 

Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 38

Such a wonderful chapter... nice to see that some of Edwards walls are finally comming down...

Reviewer: farahbkaulitz (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 5

HAHAHAHAHAHAHHA :p

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 7

Wow.....Edward just realized that Bella just had been abused too and it felt horirble.  That is just fucking very sad. I hope that they can be honest with one another and really get to know each other.  THANKS FO RTHE AWESOME READING  Sher

Reviewer: farahbkaulitz (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 2

I SO FKN ADORE UR STORY !!! 

Reviewer: farahbkaulitz (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

I LIKEEE :D 

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 5

The plot is certainly starting to thicken......She can't stop thinking about him and vice versa.  This should certainly be interesting.....THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING.  Sher

Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 27

This story is amazing!!! I need to get my tissues though... my heart hurts for Edward...

Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 18

His story is so heartbreaking... I really hope something wonderful is in store for him...

Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 15

I really love this story!!! Im hooked :)

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 73

don't be afraid hun anyone gives you any guff let me at 'em haha i think you are doing such a wonderful job i mean this fic has been one of my favorites from the very start i think even after this is finished *starts tearing up just thinking about it* this will always be one of my top 10 fics ever i love that you are sticking with how YOU see the story and not letting things get in the way you are brilliant doll :D can't wait for more :D

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