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Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 75

:)

Reviewer: smartasssbich (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 75

I knew this Victoria meeting was going to be hard on him. Poor Edward, I want to hold him and make him strong through this and tell him it's the last meeting with her baby, it will be okay. I have to give Carlisle so much credit. He's stuck by and supported Edward through so much and never expected anything in return. Putting up with a lot of his emotional anxiety and never gave up on him even though Edward wouldn't let him in. It's nice to see Edward slowly able to talk to him a little bit at a time. This story just keeps getting better!

Love it,

@CherylSab

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 74

:)

Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 75

very very good keep up the greta work and post

bye bye

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 75

Ifelt so bad for Edward.  That was such a terrifying dream. 

Great conversation with Carlisle.  I'm glad that Edward is talking and listening more to his family.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 75

Poor Edward :(

Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 75

Awww wow great chapter!! Poor Edward those memories were so sad :( But I cant wait to see how his meeting with Victoria goes. Im glad Carlisle told him about being there, calming him while he was in the hospital, very sweet <3

Cant wait for the next chapter!! :)

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 75

This was a great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 75

phuck, nice way to torture a kid with PTSD!!!  it might be better to send a different social worker, so she didn't loom like such a specter over his life!

It's so strong of him to not tell Bella about her visit - he's thinking about not burdening her, but more importantly, I think he's realizing that his family has his back, too, and that maybe he can achieve some things without her.  they can console each other when they're back together. :)  I'm sure Bella's day is going to suck just as bad as his...

I'm wondering - is Phil gonna share the proceeds of the house sale with Bella? Did Renee leave her anything???

The next few chapters are going to be rough, but juicy! Feel free to hurry them right along. :)  teehee!

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: cjmuehlb (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 75

Nice chapter.  I'm a sucker for any Carlisle - Edward interaction.

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 75

My aches for him.

Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 75

Another gut wrenching chapter!  You are a powerful writer!

Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 75

What a bitch!! Of COURSE that bitch would be Victoria :) I interested to see how this little meeting goes now!! xx

Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 75

Poor Poor Edward

Reviewer: rookietwilighter (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 19

Great story!  My heart physically aches as I read this. Amazing!

Reviewer: joss859 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 75

such an emotional chapter. It's interesting / sad / fascinating /  to hear about some of edwards past. i dont want to say 'good', because that would be awful when you think about what edward is remembering or dreaming about, but reading about edwards experiances helps us to understand him a little bit more.

i usually read this over on ff, but i caught it here today for a change!

Reviewer: seekingbecca (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 75

my heart is broken for him.

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 75

I knew Victoria was evil.  It seems like she did everything she could to make Edward think that he might be yanked out of that home at any second.  How utterly upsetting for him.  She's sadistic.  His dream was weird.  Not sure what to think of it.

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 75

Poor edward

Reviewer: malleigh (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 75

Very Powerful, but human .  And enjoyable reading.

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 75

Edward has become so strong.  I am confident he will be surprised at how much he has changed.  Excellent chapter.  Very emotional!

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 75

Aww... poor Edward... another amazing chapter, new revelations and the like. Awesome. You do a great job of giving us enough information to make things make sense but still leaving out enough that we can find out later details and other important stuff... keeps it interesting and makes it more real life. Thank you for the time and thought you've put into this, it really is amazing.

Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 75

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 75

Poor Edward having to face to horrible woman every year. She sounds horrid and I hope Edward makes it ok. He has been thru so much in such a short time but at the same time he is learning so much. Two more days and then he and Bella can see each other, sigh...they are going to be so happy to finally see each other. I can only hope for the best when it comes to Victoria...I will anxiously await the outcome...

Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 20

thanks foe epov

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