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Reviewer: fellowsandfokies (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 87

I can sooo identify with Bella right now. I've got a cold too... uncanny timing that I get sick and read your chapter - he he he :)

Loving the story! Keep up the great work!

ecandme (Crooked Halo's & Ink Junkies)

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 87

Great ending. Glad Edward didn't give into the hate. :)

Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 87

Awwww.  Poor Bella is sick.  I wonder if Edward will go over there to take care of her for a change?  I love that Emmett stood up for Edward, and that we're getting to see him interact with his siblings without Bella.

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 87

Lovely some nice light-heartedness after the angsty therapy session. I was in stiches. Poor Mikey...

So, will Dr. Edward be making a house call next chapter. That would be sooooo cu~te!

Til next time, happy typing!


Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 87

Poor Bella - wonder how long she'll be sick? Not sure if Edward will do well without her!

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 87

Ha! I love them scaring the shit out of Mike!

And I hope Bella feels better soon!

Reviewer: sweetowl (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 87

Again very interesting . Nice to See how all relatioships are growing together.

Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 87

YES!  And that will be the end of Newton, no doubt about it.  No one gets cheeky after getting humiliated like that .

GO EDWARD!  And yay Emmett, seriously - he's awesome.  And this is the perfect challenge for his character because he's so determined and straight forward that when Edward knocks him down, he just gets right back up and tries the same thing over and over and over until it works just by sheer force of personality.  That's exactly what Edward needs is for people to keep trying. 

Still loving it! Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 87

YAY Emmett and Edward bonding hehe

Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 87

Male bonding over kicking someone's ass...precious!  Thanks for the updatel.

Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 87

good we have some Emmett/ Edward time.....this is good for Edward to see that now that Emmett knows more of what happened....... and I hope soon Edward will realize that his tears are part of his healing/grieving processes!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: team66fan (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 87

Finally the light bulb above Edward's head turned on!  He is cared and loved.  Eureka. we have a winner.  It is refreshing to read that he realizes that he has worth and hopfully will now embrace it.  Great job.

Reviewer: scarlet (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 87

Great! So happy u update so frquently!

Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 87

GOTTA LOVE EMMETT!! Damn I wish he was MY bro. Next to Edward he's my favorite character. I hope they have a nice lunch & start to really bond now. AND that stupid ass Mikey keeps his stupid ass mouth shut!  :+)  Linda

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 87

Poor B!

Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 87

Hehe! Brotherly love is great =)


Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 87

OK, that was kind of funny.  The Mike thing, not Bella flu thing.  The flu is so not fun.  I had it last week, luckily it only seemed to last for a couple of days.  I know Edward's not going to let something like a flu keep him away from Bella for too long, right?  I'm glad that Charlie recognizes that Bella could benefit from therapy also.  I'm ashamed to admit it didn't really occur to me.

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: kemp17 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 87

Great chapter.

Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 87

Good to see Edward working on his relationship with Emmett. Gotta love Emmett wanting to take down Mike for him.

Reviewer: As Hearts Collide (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 86

Woow...that was emotionally traumatic :L Really great chapter, you had me hooked the second that I read the first sentence! I love how Bella is so understanding...Please update soon! I love your story so much :D x

Reviewer: jemma canty (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 49

oh my god !! i nearly wet myself laughing at the whole edward and emmet baking scenario , really really good !!

Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 86

ok good one small step forward!!!!!!!!! I think the group session will be good for Edward....I believe deep down inside that he feels he has always been alone and most of us as humans don't want to feel alone.....fisrt the family has shown him he is not and with meeting others who are in similar situations....he may even need some Transactional Analysis ( which is a technique of counseling dealing with the 3 ego states of Parent, Adult and Child..............can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: DCBC (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2011 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 86

wow i couldn't stop crying!!

Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2011 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 86

Edward fighting his demons is a good first step. :-)  He's finally facing them which is hard to do.

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2011 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 86

what an emotion packed chapter ... WOW ... you are so good at this ... you really should consider writing a novel of your own (well, this is your own, but with your own characters)

eager as always for the next chapter

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