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Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 92

I really enjoyed this chapter. Your Alice isn't annoying, thankfully. What exactly did Alice do or say that made Bella realize Alice & Jasper were having sex? I missed that.

I also missed the convo between Charlie and Edward (I love Charlie!) so I look forward to that in the outtakes.

Author's Response: It was just the way Alice grinned when Bella said 'have fun', Bella's a clever girl. :) Thanks for your review, and I'm happy you like my Alice. :)

Reviewer: Cudleskitn (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 92

Wow i just finished reading all 92 chapters in over 3 days and you have a very good story here. Keep up the good work.



Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 92

you are tease ... with the Charlie conversation ... but it will make a great outtake

another great outtake would be Carlisle's POV of the changes in Edward over time

chapter was great ... love the conversation with Alice and totally didn't see that last part coming

Reviewer: lunaluna72 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 92

Oooh Edward, steady on ! So happy that they are continuing to make steady progress, look forward to Charlies POV.

Reviewer: susolgi2004 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 92

Oh, my god. You are so good!!!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 92

Edward's getting brave :) So many great changes in him. I'm proud even if that sounds weird.

Reviewer: dellatwi (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 92

Finally these two act like a teenage couple lol

Reviewer: rbdfan08 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 92

OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks for the chapter please post soon!

Reviewer: jlugo (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 92

Bella taking her top off?! Woah! Can't wait for the next update

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 92

Oh???? Oh my...go Edward! What progress!

They both just better pray Charlie doesn't sneak up the stairs O.o

Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 92

nooo .... evil cliffy!!!! im so proud of edward ... and so excited for more :)

Reviewer: sha0020 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 92

A great story & love the constant updates :)

Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 92

O...M...GEEEEEE POST SOON...OMg Edward I'm so proud of you...look at me getting all excited Edward is going to feel up his girlfriend. lol Bella will have to be patient with him...but such big steps!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 92

I am So proud of them and excited for both of them!  Hopefully, when Edward and Bella start to explore their bodies, Edward will learn that they can give eachother great pleasures.  It will bring them even closer!!!

Reviewer: 2journey (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 92

love the chapter but thought things would moved more quickly in this chpt between E and B.  Maybe next posting?

Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 92

Nice update.  Great to see Edward coming out of his shell and building up his nerve. It seems like he  is finally beginning to see that he is loved, and that he was a victim, and what happened to him was not his fault. Update soon.

Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 92

*gasp* Oh my! Let's get to it! *rubs palms together*


Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 92

There? You leave it there?? What a cliffie Nilla. Gah!!!

:) :) :) :)

I'm so happy things were lighter in this chapter. Go Edward!

Reviewer: vickid (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 92

woah there. this is pretty fast for someone who just had a revelation the night before. maybe he could just look first and not touch and PLEASE do not let Charlie catch them. major embarassing. nice chapter. love the sibling interaction.

Reviewer: India2523 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 92

Whoa...I'm holding my breath until the next chapter...hurry please.

Reviewer: lmb (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 92

I loved this chapter.  Not alot of action, but so much progress!

Reviewer: allbookedup (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 92

Please, please, please we need more......

Best, Ann in SC

Reviewer: lbritt (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 92

so many milestones in this chapter, where to begin. I mean last chapter he actually had 'the talk' well kinda sorta with Emmett and had lunch with the others in the lunch room, but then this chapter he not only did he take alice to school, but sorta wanted help from her.

then he had a one on one talk with Charlie, can not wait until that outtake for sure. i will sop it up with a biscuit

Oh and the best for last, 2nd base...well almost but he wants to and man o man i want him too.  I am so happy for Bella. She is going to be felt up, woo hoo.

this is coming coming together so beautiful.

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 92

Woah... Charlie's gonna flip if he catches on to that, but good progress for them, none the less :)

Another great chapter, thanks for sharing :)

Reviewer: scarlet (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 92

So cute!

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