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Reviewer: TJai (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2011 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 98

I'm a new reader and jeez this story just blew me away! This story is so great! It was one of those'I'm staying up until 3.00 in the morning stories. I just couldn't stop I was seriously addicted. I don't know if thats a bad thing or a good thing? Hmmm.... But please keep writing. Love it to death. I like stories with lots of depth and good writing, this is exacrally it. A great story!

Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 98

:)

Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 97

wow...what big ideas in this chapter, one step closer to him meeting his mother again and one step closer to them deciding to have sex.

 

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 98

:)

Reviewer: jct2004 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2011 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 98

Good stuff!!

Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2011 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 98

Edward is finally going to confront his mother!

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2011 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 29

OMG to have the same nightmare over and over mine stopped when Igot in my late 20's every night I dream of my mom trying to kill me.It makes for a wonderful life I can count the number of people I know on one hand

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 27

OMG

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 26

I would shoot that bastard over and over again

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 25

nothing bad please 

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 16

I'm so glad she followed him he needs love and acceptance

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 15

Bella put Newton in his place

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 13

A sigh of relief Yeah Bella

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 12

Bella wont give up on him

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 10

Progress I think

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 9

Bellla 's good for him

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 7

Oh my no words

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 6

What happened to Bella in Phoenix

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 5

Cute!

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 4

He's trying to be nice I thought it was funny to kick in the jewels no means no

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 3

Poor EdwardI know this is fiction but I've lived some of his life my mother tried to kill me a couple of times when I was little ,I 've had grown men touch me when I was in grade school nobody cared.I to was disposable

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 2

How Sad!

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

OMG POOR BABY IT'S AMAZING WHAT SO CALLED PARENTS WILL LET THEIR PARTNERS DO TO THEIR CHILDREN SO THEY WON'T BE ALONE IHOPE JAMES IS DEAD AND THAT HE DIDN'T PAS PEACEFULLY

Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 98

What is she thinking hmmm

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 98

mmm..maybe a negligee-clad Bella can quietly pop out of a big birthday cake?  Maybe she can give him a thong "for when he's ready"?  Foreplay coupons?  A journal? A book? a manly engraved necklace - maybe dog-tag style - that says "I'm with you always"?  He could rub it like a worry stone....oh, and a mixed CD of songs that remind her of him/them...or a beach picnic...cook him a dinner for two...

ALas. I fear that at chapter 200, you'll still be torturing us with cliffies. Sigh.

Thanks for the update! :)

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