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Reviewer: nawaliy (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2010 12:10 PM · On: Cry

whoaaa

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 07:13 AM · On: Cry

I like the plot of your story and as such am enjoying reading it. However, I am having trouble liking Bella. She just seem so very selfish to me. I can't believe Rose didn't tell her parents that they were grandparents. I know Bella didn't want them to know, but she NEEDED them to know. A real friend can tell the difference and do stuff their friends tell them not to when it is that important.

I hope Bella (and Edward) grows up a bit before the end of the story.

Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 06:46 AM · On: Cry

i have been waiting forever for this update. thank you it is wonderful

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 05:43 AM · On: Cry

*sad* That chapter made my heart hurt for Bella. Have to admit I was surprised after her bottling her feelings in for so long, to see her losing the plot with Edward. Why can't he man-up? Did he somehow NOT know about his daughter?

Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 05:15 AM · On: Cry

I like the concept of the story but I"m not sure I like your Bella she is to wishy wash, she goes along with whatever how she be going to LA on weekends she is a teacher she has papers to grade work schedules to work out she can't follow Alice craziness.

Author's Response:
Going to LA for the weekends is the plan right now, but don't forget that yes, Bella is basically all over the place. She'll probably change her mind a thousand (not really, but you get the point) more times before she knows what she really wants. At the moment, she's still trying to get used to the idea of having the Cullen's back in her life, and where her life is going.

Thanks for reading,

Sam

Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 12:54 AM · On: Cry

omg ,ive waited for this update

Now i'm left rather speechless ,her rant told Edward everything .....

He just needs to go through the conversation again and all would be revealed !

Please update quicker

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 11:42 PM · On: Cry

Lily is adorable. I want to linch Tanya up by her hair :)

Reviewer: Delicious Dreamer (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 11:20 PM · On: Decisions

okay, so i am a little confused. in the story bella says that rosalie turned up when bella was six months pregnant, but she also states that lilly was born at five months... a little comfirmation would be great?

Reviewer: pengirl25 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 08:28 PM · On: Cry

I saw Remember Me on Friday!! Ditto on everything you said! Except I'll have to see it again so maybe I can focus more on the plot instead of constantly thinking "he's SO hot!" ;) I won't give anything away for those who haven't see it yet, but noticed on Moviefone that there's this big hoopla about the end. WTF? I thought it tied in perfectly with the whole story and very tastefully done, considering the theme. I'll def see it again and will def buy it when it comes out on dvd. Awesome chapter btw, I was sniffling throughout :( Be kind to us and don't keep us weeping or waiting for too long, pretty please? :)

Reviewer: jessica-cullen (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 08:28 PM · On: Cry

I saw Remember Me on Saturday! It was incredible, I cried and absolutley loved it lol It was so good but I keep thinking about it and everytime I want to cry.

Reviewer: kaylamarieswan (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 08:00 PM · On: Cry

hope you update soon! =]

Reviewer: coldplaystalker (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 06:51 PM · On: Cry

I am in love with this story and cannot wait for the next update!!!!

Reviewer: ItsATwilightThing (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Cry

this is really good! can't wait for the next chapter! please update soon, and keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Tuski7 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Cry

I really like the plot but can I give you a bit of advice? You need to add more to the story. Your characters kinda swing between the extremes a lot. Like Edward’s first appearance in the story was an angry screaming, shouting match with Alice. Than his next appearance was a calm and asking for forgiveness attitude. It helps if maybe you had added a part where he’s struggling with what was said between him and Alice, how he decided he needed to apologize and working up the courage to actually do it. Something that progressed from anger to apologetic. A little inner monologue to understand the characters more.

Reviewer: kourtneysmith (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 04:51 PM · On: Cry

First off, I love your writing style and I think you've got a lot of talent. However, your Bella is kind of disgustingly spineless, you should definitely man her up some and (though I know it is important in building angst) have her let go of all that annoying oh-he-broke-my-heart-poor-me crap. Please update soon, I would love to see how this all turns out.

Reviewer: mystic (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Cry

Thank you so much for finally updating. This is a great story. Loved this chapter - it was heartbreaking. Please don't leave it hanging. I can't wait to read what happens next.

Reviewer: dejr88 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Cry

Amazing chapter. Poor Bella, that was not what she needed. So how dense is Edward? Will he put two and two together? I hope so, and I hope he gets to fixing this quick because Bella's pain is horrible. I can't wait to see what Edward's reaction is. Why didn't he follow her when she ran off, or follow Lilly who had to have been calling for her 'momma.' Papps be damned... he screwed up again. Excellent job... please don't keep up waiting too long for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Endlesslove93 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 04:04 PM · On: What Was I Thinking?

I don't like this chapter much b/c of the class scene was boring.

Reviewer: Bellina (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 02:57 PM · On: Cry

um. Im a little confused. i felt like that chapter happened too fast so Bella ran into Edward andhe didnt say anything to her? but she told off tanya in front of the paps?

Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Cry

wow that was a very emotional chapter. I love Lilly she is such a sweet little girl!

By the way i did watch Remember Me and i definitely agree that I am still in shock over that ending. I did not see it coming at all !! Overall a great movie.

Reviewer: Carly_Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Cry

Love it!!! Update soon???

Reviewer: eclipsedbyedward (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 02:04 PM · On: Cry

Noooooo!!! Please go after her Edward!!

Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Cry

I didn't exepect so much of what went on in this chapter. I think it would have been funny to see Bella either slap or punch Edward. ;)

I did see Remember Me. A bunch of girlfriends went and saw the midnight showing. It was amazing.

Reviewer: mystic (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Change

this is a wonderful story. You left it as a clifhanger where you stopped. Please finish it. It's been almost two months since you posted the last chapter.

Reviewer: pengirl25 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 12:18 PM · On: Meet the Parents

I really am enjoying your story and hope you find the time to update soon :) Looks like the real good part is coming up!

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