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Reviewer: lilypad1588 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 10:46 AM · On: Undone
Great chapter! I have been waiting to see what Edwards reaction was going to be. I can not believe that he has not figured out that Lily is his. I can not wait until be finds out and what was the real reason he left Bella?
Reviewer: distinctly_forbidden (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Undone
An update, finally. I can't wait to see what going to happen.
Reviewer: Joyfuls06 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 10:28 AM · On: Undone
Great chapter! Loved seeing inside Edward's head again. What is the secret?!!!
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 02:33 AM · On: Undone
You are indeed very mean for not telling us what Edward's deal is. I guess I don't really know how he could see Lilly and not put two-and-two together. That said, he IS a bloke so that could explain it all especially as Bella has basically kept her from the spotlight.
Reviewer: KBZ (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 12:07 AM · On: Undone
While I find the storyline intriguiging I am finding the disjointed style and lack of exposition difficult to digest and understand. I'm hoping I can grasp it in the future but the current style isn't gelling with me a t doens't seem to 'link up'. I think it needs more connectors between events and people, more prose of what is inside their heads.
Reviewer: Tina02 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 11:59 PM · On: Undone
great chapter.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 08:51 PM · On: Undone
Is it bad that I want to kick Edward in the balls even though I know there is something behind his actions?
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 08:19 PM · On: Undone
i can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Undone
Crap, Bella needs to get a grip and just try to move on. She can't keep letting Alice and Edward run (or ruin) her life. Now it's going to be harder for her since she was on TMZ and all.
Now that Edward has figured out that he is a father I wonder if he will pull his head out of his ass and finally go after her.
Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 07:38 PM · On: Undone
:)
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Undone
great story so far cant wait to see what happens next !
Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Undone
I can't wait to read Edward's reaction to the news. Awesome!! I loved it.
Rox
Reviewer: BigRedM58 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Undone
Love this story! I hope you continue to update more frequently :)
Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Undone
This is one of those fics I hate Edward.. and at the same time love him.
I hate him because of what he did, I don't know why he did it, but it was wrong. And I love him because all the things he thinks about Tanya. I hate that whore. Please tell me he didn't sleep with her? please?
Reviewer: coldplaystalker (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Undone
OH!!! I hope edward gets his act together.
Reviewer: wolfi (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Cry
love this chapter..poor bella, whens the next update..lol
Reviewer: antupi (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Cry
Looking forward to your next update, Is there a particular day that you update?
Author's Response: No, I have to admit that there is no schedule for updates at all. I'm usually really busy, so I write in my spare time and post when I'm done.
Thanks for reading!
Sam
Reviewer: liessab (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Cry
love this story when the next chapter up
Reviewer: Tina02 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 12:04 AM · On: Cry
Loved this chapter.
Tanya is such a wench.
Is Edward going to go look for Bella or is he going to get answers from Alice?
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 08:32 PM · On: Cry
that is so sad ... poor bella! she feels so bad ...
on a grammatical note, the end of this chapter was a little hard to follow. like why did bella leave lilly when she ran from edward ... i thought she was holding on to edward ... and that whole running without shoes was confusing too ... other than that it was GREATTTT !!!!!!!!!!!
cant wait for edwards reaction to that ... i mean is he still fozen where bella left himout front the ice cream place ... and what happened to josh ?
Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 03:30 PM · On: Cry
Oh hell. Alice sure screwed this one up. I wonder what Edward is going to do now that he knows that he has a daughter.
Reviewer: lizzybtmn (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 09:42 PM · On: Cry
aww that was good but sad! please update soon! make me happy again!
Reviewer: phoenixinkd (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Cry
Next Chapter please!!
Reviewer: GreeneyedGoddess (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Cry
found your story the other day im really loving it, i dont review much cause i tend to sound a big geeky like now! but your story is pretty awesome i was guttered when id read all the updates so far carnt wait for more:) and on another not i went on your profile you have great taste in music!
Green eyes x
Reviewer: adrie45 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Cry
Nice Hangover quote.
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
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