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Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 09:05 PM · On: Amazing
What, no yelling?! Come on, I was so sure Ella would blow a fuse at him! I hope that happens soon. Did the asshole forget he changed his number, or what? Sorry it took so long to review. I was having trouble getting on here, and I've finally found the time to catch up on everything I've missed. Great chapter, hope there's more soon!
~Jazz~
Reviewer: calypsoverapelle (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 07:00 AM · On: The Pain of the Past
i love this story. please keep writing! (:
Reviewer: twilight_Angel72 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Amazing
WOW.. can't wait to hear what really happen with edward to make him leave and never talk to bella for the last five years, OOhh and lilly gets to fine out edward her daddy, can't wait until next chapter, pleaase update soon...
Reviewer: HerAmberEyes (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 07:54 AM · On: Amazing
please update
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 02:22 AM · On: Amazing
aww at last they are all together ,tenuous circumstance but hell I'll take whatever !!
Well done and thank you for writing
x x
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 11:56 AM · On: Amazing
Now that Edward knows he has a daughter? Bella better get used to the idea that he's going to be around...
Reviewer: 2loveybunnies (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Change
Wow, that was a whirlwind! So is Alice married to Jasper? Did she get pregnant in high school too or is she older? Wow, that would be a coincidence wouldn't it! I guess I don't understand why Edward walked away like that... will we get his POV?
Does Lilly know who her father is? How could Bella possibly have kept Lilly a secret for so many years without anyone in town knowing? I mean, the poor kid has to have friends and go to preschool and she is on little league, right?
Sorry, I just have so many questions! On to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Alice is married to Jasper, and she got pregnant in high school but had one of those weird no symptom/no weight gain pregnancies, so she didn't know until she went in to labor.
There's more to the breakup than that, I just haven't written about it yet. It won't come up for a few more chapters yet.
Lilly's got a picture of her father but doesn't know his name, though she's slowly figuring out that it's Edward. Lilly goes to school in Sappho, where Bella teaches, which is about 20 minutes north of Forks, I believe.
Thanks for reading!
~Sam
Reviewer: 2loveybunnies (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 12:08 AM · On: The Pain of the Past
Just found this story tonight and I couldn't wait to start reading! Love the concept, love your writing and can't wait for more! Sounds like Jake is just a friend here (which is always good in my book!) and Edward has no idea that he's got a daughter. Looking forward to watching things play out!
Do you have an update schedule for this story?
Author's Response: Yep, Jake's just a friend :)
I don't have an update schedule but I try to get updates out as fast I can. Unfortunately there's usually a few weeks to a month or so in between.
Thanks for reading!
-Sam
Reviewer: ArodLoverus2001 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Amazing
Awesome update!! can't wait for more! please update soon.
Reviewer: anasus (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Change
the cause of the break up is so narrow, should have been more serious than that
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 02:32 AM · On: Amazing
At least they are talking. That's a good start :)
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Amazing
I was going to review sooner but could not stop reading. I think I am hooked on your story. It is a shame they waisted all this time being angry with each other instead of talking it out.All those years waisted Bella not having thelove of Edward and Edward not noing his daughter. Maybe they will be able to make things better for all of them.
Lilly
Reviewer: sarah01 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Amazing
Ok,I really like this story. I hope you update soon. I want to know what happens next.
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Amazing
I am so glad you gave us something!
Reviewer: navy_wife (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 10:48 AM · On: Amazing
I really love this story! I hope you update again soon!
Reviewer: emilyrose (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 10:28 AM · On: Amazing
i love it you have to update super soon
Reviewer: Tina02 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 09:55 AM · On: Amazing
great chapter.
can't believe that edward is there.
wonder what will happen next.
Reviewer: BELLAxMOMENT (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 09:29 AM · On: Amazing
Cute chapter! Can't wait for an update
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 08:58 AM · On: Amazing
what does edward want exactly? does he still love bella? does he want to be in their lives? will he want to take lilly away to spend time with him?
Reviewer: mystic (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 08:30 AM · On: Amazing
I just love this story. Please try to update faster.
Reviewer: gbasjw (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 07:06 AM · On: Amazing
I'm glad to see you continuing with this fic. I'm relieved that B&E didn't go off on one another when they finally were reunited. Looking forward to seeing what develops for them now that Lily is safer & the dust settles.
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 07:03 AM · On: Amazing
They have some major talking to do.. they best get to it. Thanks for updating :-)
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 06:59 AM · On: Amazing
well i hope for their sake they get along when they both wake up
Reviewer: amapola026 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 07:24 AM · On: The Pain of the Past
i love this.
Reviewer: MidniteSunshine (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 02:32 AM · On: Home
Wow im so luvin this story; please update soon :-)) purleeeessseeee ;-))
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