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Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2013 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 26

So powerful and rather realistic!  I'm glad your chapters don't go for a quick fix...the journey of healing is slow but so much more meaningful! well done

Reviewer: Xerseven (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2013 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 26

Such a tough story to read, but well written and REAL.  Glad you are posting again!

Reviewer: Baandfam69 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2013 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 25

I'm so happy I stumbled upon this story.  I'm looking forward to so much, even the not-so-nice topics because I have a feeling that Charlie's antics haven't ended and Renee's return to Bella's life could make it a bit turbulent emotionally.  I love how you mix the vulnerable with the strong and how your writing is honest.  I wanted to nut punch Charlie for his cruelty but I also feeling a little anger towards Renee for leaving Bella in such a volatile place.  Keep up the amazing writing and if there is anything I could do to help, besides being a devout reader, let me know.



Author's Response:

Actually, there is. If this is too much, please let me know, but I'd love some beta help, sort of. I'm very seriously considering taking the story public, reworking it and trying to get it published. I'd be retooling it quite a bit, more than just changing the names. What I'd really love is for some feedback on what I could safely remove. There are some parts of the story that just don't work, and I know that and I'm not very happy with them when I reread but I'd like to get some outside perspective to see if there are other areas I should change, or remove, or parts that I shouldn't change or remove on penalty of death. Just kidding. If you're interested, contact me on the site, my contact info should be there. If not, just leave a review with your contact info and I'll get back to you. Even if you aren't interested, thanks for reading and for the review.

Reviewer: cherry123 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2013 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 9

sad but an amazing chapter.. my heart broke for jessica

Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 25

xoxo

Reviewer: Southernbella86 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 25

omg i am officially obsessed with this story!!! i just found it yesterday and read all of the chapters! im dying for more please!!!

Reviewer: Xerseven (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 25

Wow.  I just discovered this one.  Great story, although it took me awhile to get used to Charlie as a bad guy! 

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2013 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 25

I missed your story and am glad to see you return.

Reviewer: snoopy1970 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2013 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 25

Still here it's ok I know life gets in the way 

Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2013 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 25

SOOOOOOOO glad you're back.  I was afraid one of my favorite stories was abandoned.   Great chapter and so worth the wait.   I hope real life turns in your favor!

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 22

Gah!!!

Reviewer: Edwards Bella (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 22

This is awesome. I hope to read more soon. I've been a fan of this story from the beginning, but have had to step away for a few months. So glad to be back and reading some update. Please continue!

Reviewer: Fionna (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 2

Ooh first two chapters are really intriguing, I'm glad you've chosen to drip feed the information bout bella's past rather than lay it all on at once. Can't wait to get cracking on the rest! X

Reviewer: noobie (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 22

ahhh please write more asap!! Oooh I'm formulating ideas now, maybe Charlie has Renee hostage and he tells Bella that if she doesn't come to him he'll kill her mother or something, similar to what James did to Bella in twilight. Whatever it is, you're doing a great job with this story! Write more soon please!!! :)

Reviewer: botsy (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 22

ah- when Rose said there was a phone call I first thought it was someone telling her that Charlie died and I would have been like :noo! he didn't get what was coming to him!! lol.

and I loved that Emmett was there to be all big-brother protector. loved it. I shudder to think what would have happened if Bella was by herself. 

the Renee development is unexpected. can't wait to see where you take that. until next time!

Reviewer: bella1 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 22

 

Reviewer: bella1 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 22

 

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 22

so her mom is finally contacting her? after everything? abandoning her with that monster?!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 22

Oh, please don't let her forgive the loser mother

Good job

Reviewer: scarlet (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 22

Awesome!

Reviewer: maddierose (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 22

okay so i literally just started reading this story and ive been reading it for 5 days non stop trying to catch up while balance my exams...its been crazy but i really love it so much!

It is a really constant story and there really is never a dull moment. There is always something happening and i really love that about it.

This chapter was really good and im glad we go to see some E and B time :D haha

OOOO and im really excited about y Renèe is calling!!!! Hope u post again soon!!!

Reviewer: snoopy1970 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 22

Wow didn't expect that one. Another great chapter can't wait for the next one. YOu are the cliffhanger queen though.

 

Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 21

Emmett is big enough he won't let him get close.

Reviewer: britablue (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 22

I won't kill you cuz I had a feeling her Mom would show up sooner or later. I really hope she izn't feeling guilty and all of a sudden decided to play mama bear..... Anywho thanks for the quick update, and once again another great chapter! Keep up the wonderful work *cheers*

Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 22

I am so glad that Bella stood up to her father. Even father sounds like too much for him..sperm donor is more like it. And her mother calling out of the blue?...hhmmm....I am very suspicious about that. I think that Charlie is pulling her strings. I re-read the out take from his point of view and I'm almost certain Charlie is behind the phone call. Please update soon. Great writing as always :) Happy Holidays!!

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