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Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 16

Wow...Get 'em Carlisle! Yea! She's staying!!!



Author's Response:

We shall see....Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: StormBreaker (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 16

O MY GOSH I ABSOLUTLY LOPVE THIS CHAPPIE haha



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.

Reviewer: edwardsgirl13 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 16

Wow! Yupp, definetely Breathless! Such an Amazing chapter and I

A-B-S-O-U-L-U-T-E-L-Y

loved it! Thank you for the incredible chapter, can't wait for the next

-sierra : )



Author's Response:

I'll have it out as soon as I can. Hope I don't disappoint. Thanks.

Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 16

whhhoooooosh! daym crystal, that was blessed awesome! i always knew carlisle could do a steely-eyed stare-down!! rawr & all!! *grins!* thx for the a/n mention bb! thx so much for jessica helping her

 to get away.  yippeee-freaking-skippyy alll the way around!!!



Author's Response:

Hehehehehehehe. That's kinda weird, seeing my name there. Weird but good. Glad you're so happy. Thanks.

Reviewer: Miliejolie (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 16

Great chapter! Yay Carlisle! I love Carlisle lol



Author's Response:

Me too!! Thanks sweety.

Reviewer: snoopy1970 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 16

Yeah now we get to see Charlie get what he deserves. Great chapter I really loved that Jessica helped her get to the Cullens. Can't wait to read more on Edward and Bella relationship.



Author's Response:

Which is exactly what you'll get. Thanks.

Reviewer: LovinEC (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 16

oh yeah go Daddy C. loved loved loved this chapter. i send you virtual hugs for writing such a good story. its refreshing to read one where jess is one of the good guys. good to see charlie got whats coming to him. loved the bella and edward interaction. he is so sweet. can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: LuckyLamb (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 16

I LOVE this story!!!! I can't wait for your next update!!



Author's Response:

Thanks hun. Working as fast as I can.

Reviewer: Mrz_Jasperhale4ever (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 16

WHOOP WHOOP!!!! GO CARLISLE..... its abut time someone told that bitch charlie whats good i wanna bet his ass with a steal base ball bat



Author's Response:

Oookay, no more coffee for you Alice. Thanks for the review though.

Reviewer: botsy (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 16

ah! I actually love that it was Carlisle saving the day! Go them! and I love the little Esme-Carlisle interaction in the doorway. so sweet. 

the escape went better than I thought. I was picturing the worst- like bella getting hurt jumping out of the window (I forgot about the tree) and Charlie catching up with her. I loved that jess helped out (and being stopped by the chief while bella was in the car- gave me the creeps!)

Edward playing nurse and tending to bella's wounds was such a sweet gesture and so completely edward. 

and yay! bella is staying with the cullens, at least for the time being, which is what I hoped. can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I'll get it out as soon as I can. Thanks.

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 16

WOWWww!! This--it just rawks!!! Man!! The suspense was killer! And Bells diving out the window?! Oh dang that was wild! Getting into Jess' trunk & getting help from her--Jess taking her back to the Cullens..

And Carlisle?!! Dang that was...kinda hott  =O

Ya just blew me away!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter Yay!!



Author's Response:

Just kinda? LOL. I love Carlisle. Thanks.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 16

Holy mother! That was an awesome throwdown with the Cullens!



Author's Response:

Short and to the point. I like it. Thanks honey.

Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 16

ok... frirst YAY Jessica !!!! second YAY Esme ... Third OMG I LOVE CARLISLE!!!!!!!!!!!! holy crap that was just full of awesomeness ... full of people sticking up for what they know is right ... for bella!!!! GAHH i hope nothing happens to jessica!



Author's Response:

It's a chapter full of happy things, kind of. I'm not sure about Jess, but I know that she wouldn't have done any differently. No matter what, shew as going to help her friend. Thanks.

Reviewer: 8vamp8 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 16

OK so I just started reading this a few hours ago... WOWZERS! I am so caught up in this story. I laughed, I cried, I ran with Bella, my heart raced when they kissed.... Intense, really. I love this story and my emotions are going haywire every chapter as I learn more and get deeper into their lives. Perfect. I love this, and the way Carlisle stood up for Bellsy, wow. That's hot. And THAT is a father! :D

Keep up this amazing writing! I can't wait to keep reading!!!!



Author's Response:

Wow, very cool. I plan to keep you on your toes, hope you're ready. Thanks hun.

Reviewer: txbell (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 16

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!



Author's Response:

THANK YOU!!!

Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 16

I like having Carlisle save the day. Often he doesn't get much of a roll or enough credit as a character. This chapter was great. I loved the fact that you brought reconciliation to Jessica. I also liked the contrast and similarities between Esme's Passive gentle side and her agressive protective side when compared to Alice's character of total domination. Edward was perfect in this chapter. He was protective, analytical, and sincere. However he was still able to portray youth. Looking forward to the next chapter thanks



Author's Response:

I love your analysis of the characters. I hadn't really thought of Alice as total domination but I can definitely see it. I just wrote her as a friend, completely freaked out by things out of her control and desperate to bring some order to her chaos. I'm really glad that you liked Edward. I was afraid that people would think that he didn't react enough, but the way I see it, he knows that he has to restrain himself. It's gonna come back on him later though. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: justluey (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 16

Go Carlisle .. and Esme .. She sure stood her ground when who knows WHAT charlie could've done.



Author's Response:

Esme knew she couldn't give one inch or he would pounce on it and she did great. She's awesome. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 16

I loved Carlisle in the chapter! Way to go, telling Charlie off!



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 16

heart pounding again! holy shit. go carlisle!!



Author's Response:

Very well put. Thanks honey.

Reviewer: starrynight (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 16

Wow! Oh wow! Wow! I'll give you a longer review later when I'm not so stunned

Author's Response:

I'm eagerly anticipating it! If you don't leave it before I see you I'll drag it out of you then. Just a warning. Thanks.

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 16

that was so awesome! they should have a party! and celebrate getting rid of charlie! i hope that he doesn't do anything stupider and someone gets hurt!



Author's Response:

Let's have a party for them. Lord knows Bella could use it. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: MJ Mason-Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 16

omfg im lovin it pleeeeeeeeease leave bella with the cullens there great foster parents and they have plenty of room :):):):):) hurry hurrry hurrrrrry more fast:):):):)



Author's Response:

I'll try to update as fast as I can, but probably not as fast as this one. I pushed for this chapter because I couldn't leave everyone hanging, and plus I already knew where it was going. The next chapter puts us into no man's land, so to speak, since I had originally intended for this to be the climax of the story and now I have other ideas. I'll need to make a trip into Charlie's head to see what his next move will be and I need to figure out how to go about that. Thanks for the review, they mean a lot to me.

Reviewer: sexcii (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 16

HOLY HELL!...Carlisle was AMAZING!!..This chapter was so far the best. I liked it lots. Keep up the good work:)

 

Emily



Author's Response:

Thanks, sweety. I like it too.

Reviewer: blueschicka (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 16

I'm doing the go Carlisle dance.



Author's Response:

I think we're all doing the go Carlisle dance. Thanks.

Reviewer: Sapphrinx2385 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 16

OMGOMGOMG I LOVE CARLISLE!!! *drool*

that was awesome :D :D ^.^ i think i just forgot how to breath at the end... help...

*does a happy dance* loving the way Carlisle just got right up in Charlie's face, and this pretty much one of my most favourite fanfics :)

thank you!



Author's Response:

That's so sweet, that this is one of your favorites. Thanks!

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